My first Naksh ff#Zindagi do pal ki # part14/44pg - Page 25

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Nairaksh


Aww... Ruchi thnxx a lot . nk ka wardrobe boht mushkil se decide hua coz boys k clothes mai variety km hoti hai naa .. Mere stars kahan hai ? admiring your comment .
Glad k I add some happiness to someone's life. I can't xpress my feelings KM ke quit se I'm happy for him but still I'll miss him like hell anyways... I'll do update soon


Stars bhool gai thi...star hai ****...aur hard work karo..i really liked it.. 😃
Dont worry show mai kuch bacha bhi toh nhi hai yr..even naira ke samne naksh unke bache dikh rahe the..wardrobe dekhi yakk...sach kahu toh serial dekhne ko man hi nhi hoti thi ...karan ne mukat kar dala...
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Posted: 9 years ago
4 stars woww... Will work more hard nxt time.
True bs isse baat ki khushi hai h k ab hum mukt ho gye hain is torture se
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: _nakshi_

nice nd cute part...

do update soon...
loving the bond growing up between naksh... nd nk attitude of enjoying every situation...


Thnxx a lot. Feels Good that you liked it. Will update soon .
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 11
Nk: lying on bed recalling what he did with ak... Ak pta nhi kya soch rhi hogi mere bare mai .. holding his head .mai mai kaise apna hosh kho baitha mai iss liye ak ko yahan nhi laya tha woh toh mujhse baat.. Kya muh lai k jyunga uske saamne mai ...he saw ak sleeping on couch in his room ... when nk lips form a curve and turn into smile seeing her even he didn't knew
Ak: her sleep broke .. sits on couch and sees him smiling at her lying in bed ... kya why are you smiling
Nk: Mai ... Woh haan ek sapna dekh rha tha... toh
Ak: wasn't comfortable but was trying to act normally...tumhari tabiyat
Nk: theek hai... but sir abhi bhi bhari hai
Ak: mai chlti hun tum bhi fresh ho jao phir chlte hai
Nk: ak..
Ak: stops tightly close eyes ...( Raat wali baat mat krba nk ).. turn to face him
Nk: tum bhi change kr k yahi aa jao bfast saath mai krte hai ...I mean agar tumhe theek lage
Ak: woh mujhe .. her phone rings... ek minute ghr se hai
Nk: nodes in agreement
Ak: tries to escape while talking.. ak went in her room ... Ak took her clothes and went for bath ...
Ak : holds towel and was thinking abt that incident suddenly she turn and find herself blushing and smiling cheeks and nose were going red . she hides her face in towel suddenly she raises her head
Ak: mai nk ko kaise face krungi .. woh woh kya soch rha hoga mere bare mai . woh toh drunk tha pr maine kyun apna hosh kho dia... Woh toh Nk hi tha jo sambhal gya ... Woh chahta toh kuch bhi kr skta tha mere saath... but usne time pr khud ko rok lia ... Nk knocks at door and ak came back to present world
Ak : from bathroom kon hai
Nk: Ak mai hun
Ak: nk aa jao ...
Ak also came out soon
Nk : woh mai btane ata tha k noon ki flight hai toh be ready
Ak: hann..
Nk and ak lands to hometown
Nk : aahh.. While he was wearing his bag on his shoulder
Ak: bag zyda heavy hai ..
Nk: nhi bag nhi tum heavy ho... boht der tk movement nhi hui shayad iss liye
Ak: nk mai soo rhi thi toh tumhe mujhe utha dena chahiye tha ..
Nk: its OK ak
Ak: no its not ... dekho tumhari arm mai bhi pain ho rha hai .. Kya zaroorat thi tumhe mera pillow bnne ki ... Mai sir rkh kr soti rhi aur tum bhi aise baithd rhe bina hile bina kuch bole
Nk: dekha bs ussi liye nhi uthaya tumhe ... Uth kr fight hi toh krti ho tum ..
Ak: mai krti hun fight
Nk: toh aur kya
Ak: tum krte ho ... Hitting his arm lightly.
Both share a laughing session
Everybody was at ak house ...
Everyone was glad seeing them
G3: kaisa tha tumhara first trip ak tang toh nhi kiya isne
Ak: accha tha auntie... bilkul tang nhi kia
Mo: aur tera tu bta nk ... ( teasingly)
Nk: tu ghr chl btata hun tujhe mohit
Dev: beta thak gye honge naa aaram krlo
Ak: nodes and goes in her room .
Nk g3 and mohit all were walking towards door
Ak: scream aahh..
Nk: turns yeh AK
drops his bag and rans to her room mohit follows him
Nk: sees a man his face covered with a black mask holding ak hand ..
Nk: Chodo usse.. leave her. g3 dev and dadi too reaches to her room
All were shocked seeing mask man he too was looking at them when nk quickly pulls ak to him and she landed in his chest ... His hands on her back
Ak nk look at each other but before it became intense mohit holds his hands and pulls mask and..
Everybody's eyes popped up seeing him
Mohit: Rr tum ...
Ak: tum kb aye aur kisi ko dikhe bhi nhi
Rr: han kyunki mai toh window se aya ..
Mo: kyun ... Main door se koi ander nhi aane deta hai kya ... Everybody laughs
Rr: yeh toh ak ko drane k liye tha ... Sydney chli gyi akele akele aur mujge btaya tk nhi ... Ek phone bhi nhi kiya toh maine socha thora alag way mai tumhara welcome kiya jaye ... Kyun acha thz na
Ak : tum pagal ho rr ekdum pagal ...
Nk: sees ak wrist which has a mark ... Ak holds her hand yeh mark kaise aaya
Ak: ouch .. Yeh iss pagal ne itne zor se mera haath pkda na ussi wajah se shayad... and hits rr on his forehead both share a laugh
Dev: ak cream lga len beta
Nk leaves her hand and comes to his home .
G3 : munna jaa fresh ho k aa tb tk mai naashta latu hun
Nk: maa mai boht tired hun mai bs thoda aaram krunga
G3: arre ause kaise kuch kha le naa beta bhukh lgi hogi
Nk: nhi maa ..
Mo: koi baat nhi auntie aap mujhe de dijiye mai kha lunga aur iss munna ko ek bhi nhi dunga phir hi isse aapke haath k naashte hi kadr hogi
Nk : kya yr mohit tu bhi ..
Nk comes out after a bath and lies on bed
Mo: eating pakodas .. Waah g3 maa k haath k pkode
Nk: mo tu yahan kya kr rha hai jaa niche beth kr kha mujhe neend aa rhi hai
Mo: jinki raaton ki neend bhi udh gyi ho unhe shaam ko kahan neend aati hai ... Mere bhai
Nk: kya ... Meri neend ko kuch nhi hua hai
Mo: maine kb kaha teri neend udhi hai
Nk: kya bol rha hai .
Mo: rr aur ak mai boht acchi dosti hai naa
Nk: pta nhi... hogi kyun mujhe kya ( pretending that he is unknown)
Mo: kitna sweet sa surprise dia naa rr ne usse
Nk: sitting on bed sweet nhi horrible tha ... Ak ko chot bhi lg gyi
Mo: fikr mat kr mamuli si chot hai... ek do din mai ho jyegi theek
Nk: hann ... Pr usse hurt toh hua hoga
Mo: raises his eyebrows... dard han ..
Nk: nhi bs generally aise hi soch rha tha pain toh hota hai ( her pain was visible on his face , like he was feeling it )
Mo: han sahi kaha tune ...( smiles).
Nxt day nk in office
Nk: ak se kahiye maine usse apne cabin mai bulaya hai
Mngr: sir woh aaj nhi ayengi office unka phone aya tha
Nk: nhi ayengi mujhe btaya bhi nhi ... Sab theek toh hai naa ak
Here is the nxt part . hope you all like this pls comment and like it. Thnx for reading
Edited by Nairaksh - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thnkx for appreciating poorva it means alot.
Edited by Nairaksh - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Aa rha hai raaste mai hai 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Nairaksh


Aa rha hai raaste mai hai 😆


Raste mai usko girlfrd mil gai kya jo line marne ke liye ruk gya 🤣 ..cant wait yr.. 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aa gya next part on page 34 kindly read
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ruchinaksh


Raste mai usko girlfrd mil gai kya jo line marne ke liye ruk gya 🤣 ..cant wait yr.. 😃


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Posted: 9 years ago

Finally ladki ko pata ke aaya 🤣

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