My first Naksh ff#Zindagi do pal ki # part14/44pg - Page 28

Originally posted by: trishanaksh

i loved this ff form the beginning! and i was veryy happy to see that youve started it again! keep it up!

Thnkuuu soo much trisha. Happy to see your short but sweet comment . I'll update soon

good part.. like naitik ki chinta for akshara.. feeling bad for akshi.. naksh scene is nice .. like rr first time uski vajah se ak bach gayi 😊 like her anger then akshi room scene is very nice and sweet.. waiting for next update do wrote soon 😛

good part.. like naitik ki chinta for akshara.. feeling bad for akshi.. naksh scene is nice .. like rr first time uski vajah se ak bach gayi 😊 like her anger then akshi room scene is very nice and sweet.. waiting for next update do wrote soon 😛[/QUOTE
Thnku pragu thnku soo much . yess rr did a good job .. All these appreciating comments give a boost to write more efficiently. I'll update soon

Nidhi pls update this ff..

Originally posted by: abinaksh

Nidhi pls update this ff..

Will do asap abi

Originally posted by: Nairaksh

Will do asap abi

waiting.. 😃

Originally posted by: abinaksh

waiting..😃

Aww.. Thora sa aur wait pls

Wer is next part ???nidhi do update plzz??

Originally posted by: ruchinaksh

Wer is next part ???nidhi do update plzz??

Ruchi I'm trying will do asap

Part 13
Ak: wakes up in morning... Yeh kaisa sapna tha kyun ... Nk se pyaar kaise kr skti hun mai I mean yeh kb... Lekin kya yeh sach mai pyaar hi hai koi attraction nhi ...
Dev: ak jldi kr kya soch rhi hai office nhi jna hai kya
Ak: ayi maa
In office
Ak: yeh system bhi naa ... Ek toh mujhe kuch pta nhi hai office mai uper se yeh system .. Ak hits her head with her hand
Nk: was passing by her cabin and sees her ...
nk leans down hold mouse and ak hand too
Ak was looking at him ... He was so close to her holding her hand causes her mile.. blush... shivers...
Nk: done, sees ak looking at him calls her name ak but she was lost nk smiles seeing her smiling and signals her towards system ... Ak blinks her eyes and nk took his hand back.
Later in nk cabin
Nk: put his hand on mouse and suddenly ak hand with his hand came to his mind ... he wasn't aware when he started smiling
Ak: standing outside her house trying to cross heavy traffic
Nk: sees her smile appears on his face ak looks at him
Ak: comes forward suddenly a car comes anx ak movez back
Nk: ak.. Ak (loud so that ak can hear him) mai... But so much of noise she wasn't getting him nk signaled her to stop there and he comes and take her to his home
G3: ak beta le ayi jo tujhe bola tha
Ak: yeh lijiye aunty aapka saman
G3: baitho mai ayi isse rkh kr going out of kitchen
Ak: ji .. Ak was going but her hand ohh sara salt gir gya ... Aunty ko chahiye hoga bottle mai aur dal deti hun... Ak stands on a small table and was trying to reach box of salt kitna uper hai ... Suddenly her foot slips and she closes her eyes in fear of falling... as usual nk comes at right time and hold her from waist one hand on waist and other behind her neck ... Ak holds his collar
Nk: brushes hr hair back behind her ear so gently and ak moves her face lil bit as he tucks her hair behind hr ear
Ak: open her eyes only to get lost in his eyes which were full of love for her
Nk: was just staring her with a light smile her eyes were just the only perfect sight for his eyes he can spent his whole life staring at his lady love without a single blink .
Their eyes were jammed no one was either willing to end thus eye lock nk wished the time to stop here and ak too was out of her sense . nk eyes were talking to ak what their tongues can't. After what seems like ages their eyes blink with g3 calling ak name and mohit calling nk at same time
Nk: dhyaan se ..
Ak: hmm.. Thnx
Mo: nk tu kitchen mai kya kr rha tha
Nk: kuch nhi jagga jasoos ji
Mo: jagga jasoos nice thnku dost ... Chl na tere room mai chlte hai
Nk: kyu yahi bethte hai ... Looking at ak
Mo: kyun aunty kam kr rhi hai na yahan... Chl drags him to room
Nk: chl video game khelte hai ajj boht din hogye khele hue
Mo: kya baat hai boht khush hai, koi mil gyi hai kya
Nk: kon milegi
Mo: tu bta kon mili
Nk: chup kr hits on his head lightly
Mo: ishq aur mushk chupaye nhi chupte
Nk: looks at mo with utter shock
kya... kya nhi chupta
Mo: yesss ... I won
Nk: cheating hai yeh , tune mujge baaton mai phasaya
Mo: arre maine toh tujge nhi kaha tga na mere aur dekhne ko tune khud dekha naa ...
Nk: tu jnta hai waise toh kbhi tu jeet nhi skta mujgse isliye ab tu yeh tricks use krega
Mo: tu toh dil haara hai
Nk: gave him annoying look
Mo: dekh.. tere player k pass hearts mtlb chances km ho gye hai
Later in night
Nk: was looking at ak pic in his phone ... Akshara and jumps out of bed to balcony.. Ak ayi nhi ajj waise toh roz aati hai
After some time his wait was over as ak appears in her balcony
Nk: smiles and waves hand
Ak too waves hand
Nk: msg krta hun
But ak phone rings and she picks it and waves him bye nk too waves her.
Nk: (standing near his bed talking with himself...) Sachi mai mere saath bhi esa hoga I have never thought Mai apna dil haar gya (saying this he wide open his arms and leans back on bed with his special thousands watts smile.)
his hand by mistake touches his phone and Sab tera song plays
Bin tere na jiya ek pl bhi sun zra...
Bin tere mujhse naaraz tha dil tujhse mil k hai keh rha
Mai toh tere rang mai rang chuka hun bs tera bn chuka hun mera mujh mai kuch nhi sab tera
Nk: touches ak pic in his phone and says Sab Tera Meri Akshara .
So guys hope you all like this part pls read and comment . thnku for giving it dome time and reading it.