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Posted: 9 years ago
Oyehoye nidhu kamal kar di thanku
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ruchinaksh

Oyehoye nidhu kamal kar di thanku


Thnku so much ruchi. Pls don't thnk me .
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Nairaksh


Thnku so much ruchi. Pls don't thnk me .


Mera comment baki hai abhi nidhi.. 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Here is my comments. ..
So nice update nidhi with aks fear ..nd nk fearr also..
Loved both loves nd care is increasing day by day..dey r feeling each felling but didnt express 😳 hope jald hi start ho love bhi..
Than ak ka aana tumne bhut aache tarike se describe kiya hai 😳
Ak expect comments from nk..but saram haa 😆 ..
But loved office convo so much..ak is new nd client's ka kehna bhi thik hai..
But loved nk ka kehna aur ak ka..
Dekhte hai ak kya help legi nk se..cant wait now..pls do update next part soon plsss 😳 ..
Great job ..ab mai starts dungi.toh for dis part 3 ⭐️ ..because aur aacha likho is liye..well done.. 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ruchinaksh


Mera comment baki hai abhi nidhi.. 😉


Mai bhi tahi soch rhi thithi 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ruchinaksh

Here is my comments. ..
So nice update nidhi with aks fear ..nd nk fearr also..
Loved both loves nd care is increasing day by day..dey r feeling each felling but didnt express 😳 hope jald hi start ho love bhi..
Than ak ka aana tumne bhut aache tarike se describe kiya hai 😳
Ak expect comments from nk..but saram haa 😆 ..
But loved office convo so much..ak is new nd client's ka kehna bhi thik hai..
But loved nk ka kehna aur ak ka..
Dekhte hai ak kya help legi nk se..cant wait now..pls do update next part soon plsss 😳 ..
Great job ..ab mai starts dungi.toh for dis part 3 ⭐️ ..because aur aacha likho is liye..well done.. 👍🏼


In love with your big comment ruchi , reading again and again. Mehnat safal hui lgta hai .. 3 srars woww .. Thnku thnku sooo much. I'll try my best to update soon . kbka socha tha but likhne ka time nhi mil rha tha 3-4 din mai thora thora kr k complete kiya . I will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice part nidhi...Both AK Nk r restless...g3 asking Nk that his face is glowing today...so cute😳
Wow..AK in navy blue coat with white shirt &navy blue pants.....She must b looking so beautiful...AK want Nk to tell something about how she look...but Nk also in hurry so he did not notice AK it seems😉...Ak nervousness can understand bcz first time she is going to give int &join job..Loved d client quest to AK &d way Nk AK explained was just superb👍🏼...So beautifully written good job👏...Eagerly waiting for next part do update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice part nidhi.. akshara ki nervousness and naitik ki khushi ak ke sath kam karne ki is nice 😊 akshara ka look is perfect 👍🏼 then their meetings and office scene is very nice.. like their convo with managers .. looking forward to upcoming parts.. do update soon 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: munna111

Very nice part nidhi...Both AK Nk r restless...g3 asking Nk that his face is glowing today...so cute😳

Wow..AK in navy blue coat with white shirt &navy blue pants.....She must b looking so beautiful...AK want Nk to tell something about how she look...but Nk also in hurry so he did not notice AK it seems😉...Ak nervousness can understand bcz first time she is going to give int &join job..Loved d client quest to AK &d way Nk AK explained was just superb👍🏼...So beautifully written good job👏...Eagerly waiting for next part do update soon..


Thank you soo much fouzi . nhi nk ne notice kiya but kuch kaha nhi about her looks . Nk hai ba ak kka support. Yup, will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 10
Nk standing in his balcony... Phone rings
Nk: ji , kya thats so good ... Kl okay send me we will be there .
Nk : Stretches his neck to see ak in her room .. Aksharaa
Ak: came out .. Kya hua
Nk: thora zor se bolo
Ak: kyaa
Nk: ruko .. He enters straight to ak house and then her room
Ak: still in balcony .. Ohho.. Nk kahan gya .
Nk: tap her right shoulder and goes to her front frm left side
Ak: turn and see .. Naitik
Nk: kisika wait kr rhi ho yahan
Ak: hmmm...
Nk: kiska
Ak: tumhe kyun btaun ?
Nk: ohh.. Someone special.. Teasing her
Ak: kya bat hai ajj boht khush lg rge ho
Nk: hum toh hamesha hi khush rehte hai madam ..
Ak: tumse na bs baatein bnwa lo jitni ..
Nk: woh toh hai .. Dekha mujhe bhula hi diya tumne mai aya kis kam se tha yahan
Ak: arre ..
Nk: chup .. Kitna bolti ho tum ak
Ak: hit nk lightly .. Ab btao bhi kya baat gai
Nk: hmara add campaign usse internet pr millions of views mile hai
Ak: what ..
Nk: aur tv pr bhi sb channel isse haathon haath le rhe hai
Ak: quickly hugs nk and nk too wraps his arms around her... 😳
G3: munna .. Yash beta munna aya kya yahan
Ys: pta nhi mujhe nhi dikhe bhaiya .aunty
Nk and ak ran down and everyone congratulate them
Nk: ek bat toh mai bhul hi gya
Ak: ab kya
Nk: woh kl morning humein Sydney jana hai kuch papers sign krne and ek event hai company ke liye toh ak have to go with me
Ak: itni jldi achanak se G3: beta flight kb ki hai
Nk: early mrng ki maa ... Aur ak tumhe chlna hoga pls mana mat krna
Dev: toh theek hai jaisa nk tumhe acha lge tum ak ke sir ho
Ak: nodded yes
G3: toh chalo bacchon packing krlo phir subah time nhi hai in sab k liye
Nk and ak all set to leave
Dev: nk beta dhyaan rkhna meri ak ka kbhi itni dur gyi nhi hai na akele
Nk: don't worry aunty holding her hands .
Mo: waah!! Mujhe toh lg rha hai ak ki bidaai ho rhi hai ... Jamaai sa meri bachi ko boht pyaar kriyega .. Agla dialogue hoga aunty ka
Dadi: wohi tih pra nhi jb sgaadi krke iss ghr se jyegi kb tk hum ise rkhenge yahan
Ak face drop down
Nk: issi liye toh le jaa rha hun ak ko dadi phir aap hi miss krengi aur kahengi kb wapis aa rhi hai ak
G3: betiyan toh ghr ki raunak hoti hai aur ak se toh hmare ghr mai bhi raunak hai .
Mo: ak se toh sach mai raunak hai ( hitting his shoulder with nk) kyun nk
Nk: giving him angry look chale ab .. Warna flight miss ho jyegi
Both reach sydney and nk take address of hotel .
Nk and ak got two rooms opposite to each other.
Nk: yeh lo tumhari key mai isi saamne wale room mai hun afar kuch chahiye toh can call me
Ak: okay thanx . I'll manage .
Nk: aur haan 2 hrs mai event hai be ready late mat hona
Ak : han jaise hr bar mai hi toh tumhe late krwati hun ... Haina
Nk: are maine kb kaha yeh .. Kuch bhi kya
Ak: tumhara mtlb toh yahi tha I know
Nk: oh God .. Jo chahe kro
Ak: huh..
Both get inside their rooms and bang the doors ...
Both reached the destination, hosts welcome them .
Nk and ak both were enjoying.
Nk was invited on stage
Nk: thanks to everyone here who came to be a part of our happiness ... Models director who played their part nicely but mai unn logon ko bhi thanks krna chahunga jo team off camera kam krti hai cameraman, writing team editor everyone looking at ak .
Ak: nods with a smile and ger eyes shining.
Investors: We are announcing a party in night to celebrate this .
Nk ak looked at each other
Ak: tum party k bare mai pehle nhi bta skte the
Nk: mujhe kaise pta hoga mai toh tumharw saath aya na abhi
Ak: ab ghr phone krke btana pdega k hum ajj nhi kl ayenge wapis
While returning
ak : mere pass toh koi party k liye clothes bhi nhi hai mai pehnungi kya
Nk: bs tum girls ko shopping ka bahana chahiye
Ak: toh tumhare tarah bs hr time suit toh nhi pehn skte na ... Jko
Nk: chalo phir shopping krne
Party night ..
Nk: ak jldi ..
Ak : came out wearing a sleeveless maroon top above belly and a full length low waist skirt . hair straightened from top and curled at ends .
Nk: look at her ... Her perfect belly was clearly visible. Nk haven't seen this ak before .
Ak: looking at nk who wears a white shirt with a black blazer sleeves rolled and gathered near elbows. Looking freaking hot.
A Waiter passed through them and both came in senses .
Nk while driving
Nk: looks at ak who was already looking at him both look away
Nk: notice ak was bit not comfortable in her dress
Nk: kya hya ..
Ak: woh kuch nhi ... Kbhi pehni nhi hai esi dress toh..
Nk: toh ajj pehni hai naa take it easy
Ak: maj theek lg rhi hun ??
Nk: theek you are looking hot. I mean go..gorgeous 😆
Ak: tum bhi boht handsome lg rhe ho
Nk: mai toh bachpan se hi hun . meanwhile they reached at party.
Party was going on ak was standing in a corner
Nk: ak yahan kyun khadi ho
Ak: bs aise hi
Nk: party boring hai na boht .
Ak: ohh... Girls jis pr fida ho gyi hain usse party boring lgrhi hai
Nk: nhi woh toh bs time pass kr rhi hai apna ..yeh toh tumhe bhi pta hai and I'm least interested
A man: Attention ladies and gentleman now we'll have a competition... Simple sa hai newspaper dance .. Couples start dancing and an investor pulls nk and ak both to floor .
Nk and ak steps on paper
Nk: hold her one hand and other over her bare waist
Ak: one hand on nk nspe of neck and other in his hand . ak feels touch of his hand on her waist ... Chills ran down her spine she feels a different never before feeling.
Nk: the feel of her milky skin on his hand was just lovely.
Paper was folded more after each round and they nk took her in his arms . during whole time they dance they didn't utter a single word . nk and ak loose as nk was tooo lost in her eyes he steps out of paper . music stops and everyone claps then they realize they loose .
Inv: naitik lets have a drink
Nk: sir sorry I didn't.
Inv: koi baat nhi bhai aap soft drink toh le skte gai hmare saath
Nk: half heartedly OK chaliye .. Looking at ak
Somehow the drinks in group if ppl exchange and nk drink alcohol.
Nk: ak tumne khaya kuch ... Chalo saath mai khate hai
Ak: nk tumhe hya kya hai ladkhada kyun rhe ho ... Tumne drink ki
Nk: nhi toh I'm a good boy .
Ak : nk kya krte ho tum
Nk: yeh sb kuch ghum kyun rha hai ?
Ak: tumhe chadgyi hai
Nk: kya ?
Ak: amm.. Chalo . ak holds his hands and both reach hotel
Ak : key do room ki .
Nk: kon si key ?
Ak: checks his pocket and open door
Ak: nk yahan aao tum aaram kro mai neembu pani order krti hun
Nk: lies on bed drink lemonade and loght goes off
Ak: yeh light ko kya hua ...
Waiter: madam woh technical prob hai bs abhi thodi der mai aa jyegi light .. Sorry for inconvenience.
Ak: closes door and sit beside him . her hair blowing in the strong air was moonlight was only light in room entering through windows.
Nk : stands and goes to window
Ak: standing near bed
Nk:turn look at ak nk feels a magnetic attraction towards her . he goes near her and her back was facing him
Ak: feels nk presence ..ak turn and see him just inches away from her .ak tries to escape but nk hold her arm.
Nk: didn't turn her .. Both were facing window Nk just hold het hands with his his arm touching her bare waist.
Nk: kissed her collarbone by sliding her hair .
Ak: turn her eyes were looking down heavily breathing her lips making a shy smile
Nk: took her face up from her chin with his one hand on her waist holding her firmly
Ak: hugged him tightly... No one was aware of their senses.
Ak: broke the hug .. Look in his eyes who was just afew inches away . ak one hand on nk blazer above pocket over his heart ... Other hand on side of his neck ak was looking at his bare chest as his shirts top few buttons was open
Nk: moves slowly towards ak
Ak: was feeling his hot breath his heartbeat was fast racing just like her ak moves forward.. Their lips were just hardly away
Nk: moved back as light comes he leaves ak... himself all shocked within himself.
So guys this is my nxt part . tried to update long part as I didn't updated it regularly. I'm nervous coz writing after a long time . And some news really made my heart heavy. hope you guys like this pls leave your precious comments. Thnx ..
Edited by Nairaksh - 9 years ago

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