My first Naksh ff#Zindagi do pal ki # part14/44pg - Page 20

Originally posted by: munna111

Very nice&cute part nidhi😊.AK is missing Nk&loved d change in AK behaviour😃.what happens to Nk he is in tension it seems😲.Loved how AK applied balm to Nk&her concern for Nk.AK is so sweet..haa she understands the pain of Kids😃.Hope now AK will come to what is keeping Nk so tensed.waiting for next part😛

Thnku fouzi, ak hi toh nk k marz ki dava hai. I'll update soon

very nice update nidhi
ak missing nk awww
ak's concern for nk nd she put balm on nk's forehead so cutee scene...kids ke sath khelna was so nice...bt why nk is angry??
do update next part soon 😃

Originally posted by: deepshikan

very nice update nidhi
ak missing nk awww
ak's concern for nk nd she put balm on nk's forehead so cutee scene...kids ke sath khelna was so nice...bt why nk is angry??
do update next part soon 😃

Thnku vishu thnku so much . nk ka anger bhi jldi pta chlega . I'll update soon

So sorry for late se bhi late comments...
So small part :(
But cute one... :)
Ak nd nk ki care nd missing was cutely shown...
I loved d way how ak helped poor ones nd enjoyed wid dem...
Nice going...
Do update soon...

Originally posted by: --pranu--

So sorry for late se bhi late comments...
So small part :(
But cute one... :)
Ak nd nk ki care nd missing was cutely shown...
I loved d way how ak helped poor ones nd enjoyed wid dem...
Nice going...
Do update soon...

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Part 8
Ak : pareshan ho sab ko dikh rha hai sab worried hai ... pr nhi tumhe toh kisi ko btana hi nhi hai . dusron ko smjhste ho khud k time sara gyan pta nhi kahan udd jta hai ( nk overhears her frm room window)
Ak : aya bda ... Turn saw nk . tum yahan ...??
Nk: kyun yahan aana mana hai
Ak: nhi but aise chup chap aa kr
Nk: woh kuch share krne aya tha mai ... Holds her arm make her sit with him
Ak: looking at him
Nk: woh actually mai ekproblem mai fas gya hun , stands and continue further , hmari company SD pehla jewelry collection launch krne ja rhi hai toh advertising k liye jo writer likhne wala tha woh last min drop kr gya aur ab models bhi add chod kr jne ki dhamki de chuke hai .Agar one week mai add shoot nhi hua toh boht nuksan hoga
Ak: tum iss bat k liye pareshan the ...????
Nk: han..
Ak: toh koi aur writer dhund lo
Nk: so intelligent ak ... Mere dimag mai yeh baat ayi hi nhi .
Ak: ???
Nk: itne dino se yahi toh kr rhe hai sab company k log but last minute koi nhi km kr rha
Ak: ohh... Toh ab
Nk: pta nhi
Nxt morng
Rr came to ak house
Rr: ak boht din hue hume mile hue chlo na kahin bahar chlte hain
Ak: ajj ...
Rr: ajj nhi abhi
Ak: abhi pr.. Nhi
Dev: comes ak chli jaa beta,kitne din bd mile ho dono .. Teri eyes ko kya hua
Ak: kya hua goes and see mirror
Dev: rat ko theek se soi nhi kya ... Thaki thaki lgti hai
Ak: soi.. Soi naa maa ... Woh bs chlo rr hum chlte hai
Rr: pr teri eyes
Ak: chlo , dragz him out
Nk comes to ak house
Dev: nk kahan the tum ajj boht din bd dikhe
Nk: aunty office mai km tha ... Kya kr rhi hai aap mai help kru .
Dev: nhi nhi ... Betho
Nk: btaiye na aunty .. Mujhe apne beta nhi smjhti aap..( holding her shoulder)
Dev: woh bt nhi hai nk ...
Nk: phir kya bat hai
Dev: accha baba ... Woh store se box la do
Nk : store waga,upar wala
Dev: han wahi ak k room k pass wla
Nk goes upstairs he saw ak room door was open and many papers were thrown near rable
Nk: yeh kya ... Put papers and started checking them
Nk: aadha adhura choda yeh bhi sab adhure hi chod diye .
Nk saw a paper on table not on floor srarts reading it
Nk: impressive...
Ak came and saw nk holding paper
Nk: yeh tumne likha ???
Ak: kyun ...
Nk: pehle mere sawal ka jawab do
Ak: mere room mai hai toh mera hi hoga naa ...
Nk: tum likhti bhi ho ... You never told anything
Ak: bachpn mai papa mujhe stories poems sunaya krte the tbhi se yeh shonk paida ho gya
Nk: good very good.. Lekin ab kbhi dekha nhi tumhe likhte ya books pdhte
Ak: kuch shonk time k saath peeche chut jte hai
Nk: pr kyun tumhe accha lgta hai yeh toh
Ak: papa k jane k bd jb bhi aise pdhne ya likhne ki koshish krti man nhi krta tha ... Papa ki yd aati thi .. chut gya apni life ko sawarne k chakr mai
Nk: i can understand phir yeh ..
Ak: bs kl aise hi kuch mann mai aya toh soch unge lafzon mai piro dun .. Chido thm yeh sab tum btao tumhari prob solve hui
Nk: lgta hai ab jldj hi ho jyegi
Ak: that's nice..
Nk: tum mere liye ek story likhogi pls...
Ak : ...??
Nk: jnta hun tumhe taklif hoti thi pr apni taklif k liye tum apna shounk nhi chod skti , tumhe isse face krna hoga kb tk bhagti rhogi ?
Prob ko face krna is the only solution bhav kr tum khud ko kmzor bna rhi ho ..
Ak: okay I'm ready I'll write for you
Nk: shocked with her sudden yes .. But happy wala
Nk : toh deal... both sgake hands tum kl mere saath hi office chla and tumhe saara kam bhi smjh aa jyega and paper work bhi ho jyega
Ak: done ...

dev dadi g3 all were happy but ak ...
In night
Ak: mai kr toh pungi na .. Agr nk aur uski team ko mera kam psand nhi aya .. Khin nk mere wajah se hurt na ho jye .
Nk: kl se I hope ak ki life mai nyi subha nyi roshni nyi ummedein le kr aye
Nk message ak
Be ready for tomorrow
Ak replied
I'll be on time .
Nk: don't worry gn sd
Ak : smiles
Here is next part hope you will like it . so so sorry for late update friends... Pls leave your comments and hit like button. Thnx for reading

pllz yarupdate next part

Originally posted by: SA-SIMRAN

pllz yarupdate next part

waiting eagerly

Will update asap

Firstly thanku so much for updating. ... 😊
Now coming on part...waaw...it was really a great part..
Loved naksh bond for each...nd it is growing day by day.. 😛
Like nk pulled to her nd came in her room without knocking means he is thinking that now we both r frds...
Loved this work...nd problems of nk ...which he shares from ak..nd ⭐️ 👏 rr ak bond is geeting distance. .
But loved nk care for aks family nd ak care for nks families. .
Nd offer jhutpat exepted by ak...waiting how dey will work .
With each 😳 hope this frdship will make a gud love story..
Nd ak as writer is so gud 👏 next part turant likho ..cant wait more..
Mujhe kitne man hote hai os ff read karne ke.. 😭

nice part nidhi..
finally naitik share his problems with akshara that's nice. .. wow akshara become writer for naitik. .. slowly slowly they coming close superb.. wrote next part soon Will be waiting