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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ak felt so different. ..she was near of jas..
Ak-yeh kyo karte hai..
Jas-jab do logo ke dil milte hai na toh woh is hathpar ring pehnate hai jiski nas dil tak judi hoti hai..
Ak-par tujhe kaise pata chala tera dil inke sath mila dey was talking with each no one can listen to both..
Jas-jab kisi ke sath tera man kare ki mai sabse jayada iske sath rehna chahti hu...ya uski yad aaye to samaj jana tera dil usse jud gaya hai..
Ak -haa..mai aati hu..pls...tu kisi ko bolna mat..
Jas-hmm..
She was going near of one temple...but in between her gard sttoped to her.
Ak-mai aati hu bas..mujhe jane do woh dekho mai waha god ke pass pray karne ja rahi hu..
Gar-no princess...waha koi bhi nhi hai..hum princess ko nhi jane de sakte hai...yeh maharaj ka hukum hai..
Ak-ok..mai yahi baith kati hu...chair...she sat on chair. .mujhe sugarcane water chahiye abhi ki abhi..
Gar-par woh yaha nhi ..mai nhi ja sakti..
Ak-ok..mai babasaa ko bol deti hu..apne meri bat nhi mani..aur mai toh yahi hu tum turant aa jaoge..
Ga-par...ak was again nd again telling so he leaves..now ak saw temple nd went near of saibaba..yes was a beautiful sai ji murat.
Ak-mai aapse puchne aai hu ..jaise daimaa ne bola koi toh sehjada hoga jo dur se aayega mere liye...aur jas ki tarah mera dil bhi usse mil jayega...god ji essa hota hai kya..nhi ..par jas ko bhi mila..meri maa bhi toh hongi babasaa ke liye..she was talking with god..didnt see here nd der..
Aur na mujhe bata dijiyega woh kon hai...mujhe toh kuch pata hi nahi hai..par is rajmehel ka na hoga to aacha hoga kyoki mujhe bahar jana hai..see outside. ..wo kya hai..mujhe to koi akle bhi nhi chodta kyo hai meri life essi..kash maa hoti toh usse mai bol pati..
Suddenly two hand put on her mouth...nd she shocked with sudden attack..yes it seems like attack..someone was taking to her from back forcefully. ..she was telling something but he put patty on her mouth..
Nd take to her in his arms..she was hiting to him on his back..nd her nails gaves mark on his back..Suddenly he put to her in car...nd she lost her sence nd went in deep sleep..
After two three hours...
Ak was sleeping peacefully. .
Suddenly she opened her eyes..swlly swlly..
Ak-daimaa..in low voice .mai..aah..screaming. .
Suddenly she was seeing surprisly..that place wer was she.. 😲 ..
Ak-mai kaha hu..yeh kaisi place hai...place was seems like one house wer was one hull inside one room nd one kitchen. .
Der was all things of household nd she was in hull on single bed...she was searching to someone..
Ak-koi hai kya yaha...koi hai kya yaha...Suddenly two hands covered to her mouth..she was just looking that guy...who have big eyes small lips fair complexion. ..nd he have perfect body shape. .she just passes smile to see him..
But he was in t-shirt nd jeans but it was not cool..It was dirty nd he was in anger..
Ak -ammm...gave isara to leave me nd who r u..
He skkiped his hand on her..
Ak-kon ho tum in sweet voice..he stood ..but didnt say any single word. .
Ak-aap kon
nk-slient. ..
Ak-are kuch toh bol do...gave isara...sun nhi sakte bol nhi sakte..kya hua gunge ho..in vry sweet voice. .
Ak-kon ho...aahh...touches to her hand who was red..due to forcefully touch of his..crying...mujhe dard ho raha...
Crying bhut pain ho raha...aahhaahh 😭 ...meri life mai maine essa dard nhi bardast kiya...kyo pakda mujhe itni jor se...bhut pain ho raha..
He was looking like angel mano aasman se koi pyari si pari aa gai ho...itni pyari ki usse hasta dekhe to dil kush ho jaye..kaise usko koi rota dekh sakta tha...us guy ko bhi yahi hua.
He cant see to her like this...he put medicine nd foreword to her..
Ak-maine khabhi kuch nahi kiya ...mera sab kuch meri daimaa karti hai..
He put some med nd apply on her hand..
Ak smile..
Ak-thannku...tum pehle esse insan ho jisne meri bat tirant man li...nd smile he saw to her...tum hara nam kya hai...
Haa samaj gai tum wahi ho na...sehjade jo meri dukh ko khushi dene aaye ho..mera ghar fear...babasaa daimaa...sab..chodo..
He saw to her..nd she stood...but he hold her hand nd she felt so different. .Suddenly he too leave her hand like shock..
??????..
So guys this is next part..i will clear all..dont worry..
Pls press like button if u like thispart..nd gave comment. .
Jo bhi man mai hai kkhul ke bolo..
Precap-aakhir kya hone wale hai..waiting badly..
Edited by ruchinaksh - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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supense se bhara part tha.. though it is very nice part😊.. akshi pain to talking to someone was so touchy.. akshara daima scene is nice.. then akshi convo with jas is superb.. slowly slowly she realised the reality of world.. last scene is also nice hero ki entry aakhir ho hi gayi but there is too much suspense just curious to know what going to happen next. .. your story is going very well do continue soon 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice part ruchi😊..Poor AK is feeling lonely no one is there to give time to her...Daimaa &AK bonding is too good..Loved AK jas conv regarding engagement😃...Finally our hero made an entry..so much suspense..waiting to see AK Nk bonding😃..Eagerly waiting for next part do update soon😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

supense se bhara part tha.. though it is very nice part😊.. akshi pain to talking to someone was so touchy.. akshara daima scene is nice.. then akshi convo with jas is superb.. slowly slowly she realised the reality of world.. last scene is also nice hero ki entry aakhir ho hi gayi but there is too much suspense just curious to know what going to happen next. .. your story is going very well do continue soon 😛


Haa suspence toh hai but pata chal jayega uske bina story padne ka man nhi karta nana 😳
Thanku so much for liking all conversations. .i waana write feelings of ak ..aww u liked story i m so hpy.. 😊 ..yeh story thodi alg try karugi meri baki ki stories se 😛 ..i will do update next part soon 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: munna111

Very nice part ruchi😊..Poor AK is feeling lonely no one is there to give time to her...Daimaa &AK bonding is too good..Loved AK jas conv regarding engagement😃...Finally our hero made an entry..so much suspense..waiting to see AK Nk bonding😃..Eagerly waiting for next part do update soon😉


Thanku so much fouzi for liking this part nd gave sweet comments 😃 ..loved ur comments 😳 ..
Dont worry story move hogi toh ek ek beat i will write waise bhi story mai interest nd logic hona important hai jisse hi log connect ho pate hai.. 😊 .
I will do update next part soon 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ruchinaksh


Thanku so much fouzi for liking this part nd gave sweet comments 😃 ..loved ur comments 😳 ..
Dont worry story move hogi toh ek ek beat i will write waise bhi story mai interest nd logic hona important hai jisse hi log connect ho pate hai.. 😊 .
I will do update next part soon 😛

Yes story logic hona important hai😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: munna111


Yes story logic hona important hai😛


Choti choti bato pe dhayan rakhne se story ke emotions bhut aache se logo ko connect kar dete hai.. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Only two comments.. 🤔 ...
Nidhi princy vishu simi... 🤢
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Finally hero enters , Nk entry..
Fantastic part ruchi. Ak ko bs daimaa ka hi sahara hai . jas too is busy ak akele hai . how sweetly she said hmne kbhi koi km nhi kiya hai . ab god ne uski wish poori kr di hai shayad .. update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nairaksh

Finally hero enters , Nk entry..
Fantastic part ruchi. Ak ko bs daimaa ka hi sahara hai . jas too is busy ak akele hai . how sweetly she said hmne kbhi koi km nhi kiya hai . ab god ne uski wish poori kr di hai shayad .. update soon


Thanku so much nidhi for liking my work nd story tootoo 😃 abhi ak ke rup aur hai jisse i hope sab like karege 😃 i will do update next part soon 😊 ..
Wb ur ff i m missing ur ff.. 😭

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