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Posted: 9 years ago
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Eagerly waiting for d next part😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice part ruchi😊.Loved it...beautifully written👍🏼
Poor AK wo apne aapko akela mehsoos karrahe hai.Vish Aur daadu tho usse pyaar karte hai lekin AK ke saath time spend nahi karte.Ab tho jas ki bhi shaadi honewali hai...AK dar rahi hai ke wo ab kiske saath time spend kare.Loved daaima &AK conv..Daima is so sweet...she can understand AK pain.AK is missing her mom😭...&she want someone whom she can share talk her heart words.Now eagerly waiting for our hero entry...who loves our AK &give all happiness she deserves😃
BTW thank u for updating dis part😛...Do update next part soon...can't wait for our hero entry😉
Edited by munna111 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awsome update ruchi di 👍🏼 loved it..
ak's innocense...poor baby vish nd shrya dont spend time with her...daimaa is nice she truly loves ak like her daughter...jass is also going to abroad now who will listen to ak's bakbak...waiting for next part eagerlyyy for our hero's entry who will treat his ak truly like a princess nd will listen to her bakbak 😉
do update next part soon 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: munna111

Very nice part ruchi😊.Loved it...beautifully written👍🏼

Poor AK wo apne aapko akela mehsoos karrahe hai.Vish Aur daadu tho usse pyaar karte hai lekin AK ke saath time spend nahi karte.Ab tho jas ki bhi shaadi honewali hai...AK dar rahi hai ke wo ab kiske saath time spend kare.Loved daaima &AK conv..Daima is so sweet...she can understand AK pain.AK is missing her mom😭...&she want someone whom she can share talk her heart words.Now eagerly waiting for our hero entry...who loves our AK &give all happiness she deserves😃
BTW thank u for updating dis part😛...Do update next part soon...can't wait for our hero entry😉


Aww thanku thanku thanku thanku so much fouzi for sweet sweet si comments loved it yr... 😊 ..ur appreciate made me excited that i will write next part more better... 😊 ..my frds always incourge me ..no thanku.. 😃 ...daimaa is a sweet chachaters. ..nd dont worry nk entry will soon in next part..
Hope u all will like too our hero..i will do update next part soon se bhi soon.. 😛 ..thanku kyo
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: deepshikan

awsome update ruchi di 👍🏼 loved it..
ak's innocense...poor baby vish nd shrya dont spend time with her...daimaa is nice she truly loves ak like her daughter...jass is also going to abroad now who will listen to ak's bakbak...waiting for next part eagerlyyy for our hero's entry who will treat his ak truly like a princess nd will listen to her bakbak 😉
do update next part soon 😃


Thanku so much vishu baby for liking my work nd gave sweet si comments loved it 😊 ..dont worry agar sadness aati hai toh life mai happiness bhi aati hai vishu...wen we get more happiness in life we will think that happiness is only part of life...but sadness is also a part of life so god balanced both in our life..like in dis ff...of aks life..
Dont worry next part will be so gud nd i will do update next part soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice part
Poor baby ak jise na bolne dia jta hai na kuch krne
Boht dba kr rkha hai usse vish ne . Hope nk usse jina sikhaye uski wishes ko pura kre .
Jas ki bhi shadi ho gyi ab usse dai maa hi sambhal rhi hai . Ak ne dunia dekhi hi nhi she is not aware
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nairaksh

Nice part
Poor baby ak jise na bolne dia jta hai na kuch krne
Boht dba kr rkha hai usse vish ne . Hope nk usse jina sikhaye uski wishes ko pura kre .
Jas ki bhi shadi ho gyi ab usse dai maa hi sambhal rhi hai . Ak ne dunia dekhi hi nhi she is not aware
update soon


Thanku so much nidhi for liking my work nd gave sweet comments 😃
Dont worry ak will live nd everything she can do own self ... 😳
I will do update soon.. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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just superb and fantastic part👍🏼
akshara ki innocency is simply awesome. .. every scene is nice. . ak ka jas ko shadi ke liye mana karna.. then garibo ko daan karna and halwa wala scene is nice
jas ki shadi tay hona and akshara ka udas hona and akshara and daimaa scene is so touchy
precap interesting waiting for hero entry
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

just superb and fantastic part👍🏼
akshara ki innocency is simply awesome. .. every scene is nice. . ak ka jas ko shadi ke liye mana karna.. then garibo ko daan karna and halwa wala scene is nice
jas ki shadi tay hona and akshara ka udas hona and akshara and daimaa scene is so touchy
precap interesting waiting for hero entry


Awww thanku thanku so much misri for liking this part nd gave sweet comments i loved it.. 😳 ..aww u liked this part nd story ko i m hpy 😊
Ak is really sweet nd wen story move hogi..i will show many rup of ak..nd hero ..nk ki entry next part mai soon i will do.. 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part-3..
After someday...
Ak was feeling so lonely. ..she was trying to call to jas but she is busy in her life..
Ak-daimaa...mai kya karu koi hai hi nahi mujhse bat karne ko..
Dai-baby ji aap ek kam kariye...aap apne bhaisaa ke sath bat kariye aaj woh ghar mai hai..
Ak-kya sach..mai jati hu waha...she went in downstairs..
Ak-bhaisaa..he was working in lappy nd was sat on soffa..pls mujhe bahar jane dijiye ya phir aap mujhe kahi leke chaliye na..
Ah-princess...abhi nhi...janti hai aap mai bhut busy hu..bahar kyo aap game khel lijiye tv dekh lijiye shopping mai chali jaiye..
Ak-par koi toh hona chahiye mere sath..pehle hi aap logo ne hame bahar hi padaya...ab mai ek do years se yaha hu kam se kam ab toh mujhe time dijiye..jas bhi busy ho gai hai..mai kaha jau..
Sh-aap esse kyo kar rahi..sab chiz toh hai na..babasa ne mana kiya hai na akle jane se...waise bhi hum itne bade log hai kitna khatra hai aap janti bhi nhi..
Ak-start crying..janna bhi nhi..mai khud hi bhag jati hu..tab hi thik rahega nd running near of room...laying on bed..
Sh-yeh ak..babasaa aayege toh boluga ..
Baisaa caressing her hair..
Ba-baby ji pls aap esse mat kariye...hume bhut bura lag raha hai ...sab thik hoga..
Ak-pata nhi kya hai meri life mai..koi mujhe sunta nhi samjhta nahi..kisse bolu ..yaha toh koi mujhpe gussa bhi nhi karta hai..kam se kam gusse mai hi bat kar le..toh bhi mai reh lu..
Bai-princess...aap bhut jald khush hogi...bhagwan agar dukh dete hai toh khushi bhi dete hai..baithiye ..she sat on bed..
Pata hai jab koi princess bhut udas hoti hai na koi pyara sa jadugar aata hai aur use leke jata hai apne sath..
Ak-sach mai essa hota hai kya..
Ba-haa bilkul hota hai...uske pass jadu bhari chadi hoti hai..jisse woh sari dukho ko khushi mai badal deta hai...sab sikha deta hai..khud se pyar karna..usko ko pyar bhatna..aur gussa bhi kar sakta hai..
Ak-mai usse hasa dungi...aur woh gora hota hai ki kala..
Bai-gora..par hota jarur hai..apki maa nhi hai na toh bagwan ne kisi ka kisi ko toh banaya hi hoga...
Ak gave hug..to her..
Ak-apne hame bhut khushi di hai daimaa...mai apko khabhi nhi bhul sakti..
Ba-meri toh aap beti hi hai...thought apko dekh ke dar lagta hai beti hum apka bura nhi chahte par bhagwan hamne khabhi bhi princess ko apni bachi mana hai toh pls aap usse uski khushi de dijiye..
Than someone came..in aks room..he was vis..
Vi-ak princess apke liye ek gud news hai..
Ak-kya babasaa..
Vi-apki dost jas ki sagai hai kal.ak was shocked to listen this..
Hum sab chalege taiyar rehna ..nd hug to her..
Ak-ji babasaa...
Vi-bache kab bade ho jate hai pata hi nhi chalta...aap so jaiye hum kal chalege...
Ak-ji...ge leave from room...daimaa..ab jas bhi chali jayegi..hamesha ke liye..
Dai-nhi princess rishte khabhi nhi chutthe hai..bas unhe pakad ke rakhna pafta hai.phir woh bandan nhi tuttha..
Aur chod jaye toh woh pakka bandhan nhi hota.
Ak-sach..mai bhi sabko pakad kar rahugi...nd soon she got sleep..
In morning daimaa got ready to ak..all leave for party..
Ak went near of jas..
Ak-tu bhut sundar lag rahi..
Jas-tu bhi ..nd hug to her...meri ak toh pyari hai hi..
Ak-thabhi itne din tak bat nhi ki...mai gussa hu.
Jas-kya karu ..jab teri life mai koi aayega na tu bhi sab samaj jayegi..
Ak-essa kya hoga..
Jas-tu bhut bholi hai.. tere liye toh koi bhut khas aayega..
Ak-matlb..
Jas-kuch nahi...thode din mai sab samaj aa jayega jab life badal jayegi..
Ak-hmm..par mai tere jaise badulugi nhi..
Jas-aacha toh hoga..hum sath rahege...than all took to her in stage..
Ak was seeing to both...dey exchange der rings..
More parts coming soon. ..
Edited by ruchinaksh - 9 years ago

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