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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice introduction of Rajmahal😛.Hamari AK princess man mein Jo hai vo bol deti hai.she is so sweet &innocent.AK ki frnd jas AK ko acche se samajti hai.Par she is craving for some love &attention frm her brother&father but dey r busy.Now waiting for our prince who will understand our princess&give all d love which she deserves😉.BTW rohit was hi!arious😆. This ff is so diff from other ffs&seems very interesting😛.Do update next part soon😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

first part is very nice... akshara lives like a princess so sweet.. maids are surrounding her.. akshara Is so innocent... what she says to rohit was hilarious.. jas is also nice character... precap akshara's wish waiting for it


Thanku thanku thanku so much misri for liking this part nd gave sweet comments. . 😃 ..aww u liked na...i will do update next part soon 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: munna111

Very nice introduction of Rajmahal😛.Hamari AK princess man mein Jo hai vo bol deti hai.she is so sweet &innocent.AK ki frnd jas AK ko acche se samajti hai.Par she is craving for some love &attention frm her brother&father but dey r busy.Now waiting for our prince who will understand our princess&give all d love which she deserves😉.BTW rohit was hi!arious😆. This ff is so diff from other ffs&seems very interesting😛.Do update next part soon😃


Aww thanku thanku so much fouzi for liking my work..nd gave sweet nd pyari si comments loved it 😃 ..ak ke aur pyari pyari bathie milegi wait... 😃 ..
I will show all sowly sowly...are ek tipe story likh ke i m getting like all is like same tipe so i started dis ff 😳 i will do update next part soon 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
very nice intro di
ak as princess bt she is a cmplte chatterbox
poor girl dint get wht she wants love from her father nd brother...
the way ak described rohit it was just hillarious...
nw waiting for entry of our prince who will listen to ak talks nd give her love for whicg she is craving 😳
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update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: deepshikan

very nice intro di
ak as princess bt she is a cmplte chatterbox
poor girl dint get wht she wants love from her father nd brother...
the way ak described rohit it was just hillarious...
nw waiting for entry of our prince who will listen to ak talks nd give her love for whicg she is craving 😳
👏
update soon


Aww thanku thanku so much vishu baby for liking this part nd gave sweet si comments loved it 😃 ..haa ak is a chatter box 😆 ..
Prince bhi aayga soon hi
😉 wait nd read vishu i will give next part soon 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Nyc part ruchi
Ak is like kid
Her talks are kiddish
Her innoce is a trouble for her
Vish and shor don't listen to her...
Poor baby
Her dai is sweet
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nairaksh

Nyc part ruchi
Ak is like kid
Her talks are kiddish
Her innoce is a trouble for her
Vish and shor don't listen to her...
Poor baby
Her dai is sweet
Update soon


Thanku thanku so much nidhi for liking my work nd gave sweet comments. ..ak ke aur bhi rup hoge...i will do update sooner soon 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Part-2..
Now ak was silent now because vis was seeing to her..
Jas-kya hua ak...tu kuch bat kyo nahi kar rahi...aacha chal hum khana kha lete hai..
Ak-chal...both was going in table nd ordered food...she was having. ..
Jas-waise tu bhut der chup reh li kya bat hai kuch to bol..
Ak-kya bolu..babasaa ne mana kiya hai..boluhi to datege...par tujhe kuch bolna hai..wo ladka bhut der se dekh raha hai tujhe..
Jes-kon sa ladka..turn nd seeing..
Ak-chala gaya...waise tu na shadi mat karna mai bilkul akli ho jaugi..tu na meri shadi ke bad shadi karna...tu hi hai jo sunati hai mujhe...haa..than vis come near of ak..
Vis-chale beta..
Ak-ji baba saa...dey leave for home..
Dey reached in house...vis said to ak that go in her room...she went in her room..vis told to her daimaa..
Vis-dekhiye aap ak ka pura khayal rakhiyega...aur dekhiyega ki usko yeh sab chizo se dur rakhe..uske phone mai kuch bhi ulta sidha na ho...net toh hai nhi...movie bhi jo bhi woh dekhe woh sab family ho..
dai-ji hame usse khabhi bhi kuch essa nhi bola ya karne diya jo apke maryada ke kilaf ho..
Vis-aaj ke bad woh kam bolegi..kal ka din yad hai na ...bas woh apna kam kare aur jayada kuch na bole..
dai-ji..
In aks room..she was changed cloth ...nd came in room..
Ak-daimaa...
Bai-ji baby ji..aap thik hai na..maja aaya shadi mai..
Ak-mujhe kuch aacha nhi lagta...sab dat dete hai...ab toh mujhe bolne bhi nhi denge..
dai-kal sunday hai...kush..
Ak-happily waaw...kal toh mai kush hougi..
dai-ab aap so jaiye...
Ak-mujhe apke god mai sir rakh ke sona hai..
Dai-ji...she laied on her lap...nd soon she got sleep..
In morning -
Someone opened d window nd sun rays touches to aks face..
Ak-daimaa...
Dai-baby ji aaj sunday hai...yad hai na..
Ak wokeup with smile..
Ak-mujhe ready kariye...put her foot near of floor...nd soon one gave slipper. ..
Dai-aaiye..
Ak-ji...nd ak got ready ...she wore beautifull orange coloured gown...full net...nd wore hairban also...her hand was white nd so soft...she went in hull..wer was all things..
Vis-sari chize ready hai na...hame chalna hai ak apko yad hai na sab..she nodded yes...than vis leavethan shorya too come..
A-bhaisaa...mai kaisi lag rahi...
He didnt respond. ..
A-bhaisaa..
Sh-kya hai ak...aap bhut sundar lag rahi hai..
A-apko kuch dukh hai..aap esse bolte nhi ..kya hua ..
Sh-pls chup raho aur chalo..babasaa ne mana kiya hai na..jayada bolne ko..nd leave..
A-daimaa...dekhna mai jjab nhi honge toh sab yad karege..
Da-aap to yahi hai na..chaliye ..
Than everyone sat in car ...nd reached in one big place...der was making tant for ak vis nd for all raj mehel members..
Der was so much crowd...nd this was d rule that ak will distribute things to poor people. .from her hand..
Ak stood...vis saw to her nd gave isara that dont tell much..
Ak-giving things but one by one...someone gave drink to her ..
One wom-rani ji aaj mai apke liye kuch bana ke lai hu..pichli bar apne gale lagaya tha na..
Ak-smile but she was sad...thought..baba saa ne kitna data tha mujhe...kya lai hai aap..
Wo-halwa..
Ak-waaw..but stop..
Wo-le lijiye...
Al-thanku mai jarur khaugi...vis said to someone...
Than ak sat in chair for rest...ahe opened mouth to have halwa..
But someone told..
Men-baby ji..yeh hame de dijiye..
Ak-kyo hame khana hai..
Me-woh maharaj ji ne bola hai apko healthy food hi diya jaye nd took..
Now she was again giving things to all..

Than one women was in wheelchair. ..ak saw to her nd asking from vis...
Ak-baba saa mai unko waha dekke aa jau..
Vis-than he said ok...than she moves nd dey put umbrella on her head..
Ak-yeh apke liye...
Wo-rani ji bhut jiti raho aap..aapko sari khushi mile..
More parts coming soon
Edited by ruchinaksh - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Than ak felt some light on her face..
Ak-aahh...kon hai...her hair followed on air..
Than her daimaa came..
Da-baby ji chaliye aap...kya hua apko..
Ak-essa laga kisi ne mujhe touch kiya daimaa..
Da-kuch nahi hai ...chaliye aap..
She went under of tant...
Than vis call to ak infront of all..
Vis-aaiye ak aap hamare bagal mai baith ke lath baji dekhegi..
Ak-sach baba sa..
Vis-haa...
She sat next of vis nd all r enjoying lat baji...
Ak-yaieee...clapping. ..nd was about to standing but vis hold her hand..
Vis-ak princess...aap bairhi rahe...yeh khade hoke uchalana kudna ...bade ghar ki beti nahi...
Ak-par babasaa..
Vis-hamne kaha na...beta...
Ak-ji ...after somtimes. .ak was lill sad now..dey was returning rajmehel..in car ak was asking to vis..
Ak-babasaa hum apni frd jas ke pass jana chahte hai..
Vis-bilkul par aap ek do ghate mai aa jaiyega...
Ak-thanku babasaa. .nd dey dropped to her in jas house..
Der was so much crowd. .
She entered in room...of jas ...
Jas-ak...tu..
Ak-haa par niche sab kon the..tu esse kyo saji hai...bhut pyari lag rahi mai aa gai tere pass chal hum khelege..
Jas-dekh tu rona mat...mai batane hi wali thi tujhe...
After sometimes. ..
In room daimaa was arranging bed for ak..
Ak was crying nd hug to daimaa suddenly. .
Ak-daimaa...
Da-worried kya hua...bbb ..kk...kya hua shivering to saw to her..
Ak-meri saheli..
Da-aap to jasmit ke pass..kuch hua kya..
Ak-meri saheli ki shadi ho rahi..woh mujhe chod ke ja rahi...uski shadi abhi thode din mai hogi..
Da-kya...apko to kush hona chahiye haa...caressing her hair..shadi hone se bandhan tutte nahi ...aap unse milne jayega .
Ak-woh foreign ja rahi..meri toh koi aur saheli hai bhi nhi...yaha kisi ko time nahi...mai kya karugi akli...
Dai-aap pehle chup ho jaiye...pls...baithiye...sat to her on bed...wipe her tears.from hand .mere hote hue aap roye...yeh nhi ...pyari si aankho mai aansu aache nahi..aap bhut najuk hai...mujhe bhut chinta hai apki..
Ak-woh mujhe bhul jayegi..
Da-nahi...hum bat karayege na apki...aur phir sab ladki ko jana padta hai na ek din...aap bhi jayegi jaldi...
Ak-mai bhi jaugi...par mai akli ho jaugi..kisse bat karugi...isi mehel mai band rahugi mai...
Da-sab hai...sabse pass aane ki kosish kariyega...chaliye ..aachese naha lijiye aur so jaiye..
Ak-haa..phir mai phone mai jas se bat karugi...aur jitne din woh hai utne din toh hum khel lenge...
After taking bath she laid on bed...trying to call to jas..
Ak-kaisi hai jas ..
Jas-aachi hu..sun na mai tujhe thodi der mai call karti hu..
Ak-haa...with sadly face...daimaa jas ek din mai kitni badal gai hai..mai bilkul akli ho gai..
Dai- caressing her hair..nahi babyji aapki bhi toh shadi hogi...phir apko bhi koi bhut aachese se rakhega..
Ak-sach mai...essa hota hai ...agar woh bhi essa hi hua toh..
Dai-aap itni saf hai ...apke liye toh koi bhut samjdar hi aayega...jo bhut aachese rakhega...
Ak-daimaa usske bhi esse hi bade bade ghar honge na..
Da-woh toh ek pyara sa rajkumar hoga...jisske pass apke liye bhut time hoga. ..aur woh apke sath hasega..apki care karega...aap royegi to aapke aansu pochega..aur aapko rokega nahi kahi jane se bhi..
Ak-aur hum na sath mai kelege bhi jaise jas ke sath kelte thi...aur hum gumne bhi jayege..
Da-haa...bhut aache se ...meri dua hai apko...she got sleep...par hame dar hai ki kahi yeh bade raja kisi essi jagah na bhej de apko...jaha apki masumiyat murjha na jaye...ap itni masum hai ki kisi esse ko aana hoga apke liye jo bhut saf ho...
In morning. ..ak wokeup..saw to daimaa she was not here..
Ak-wore sleeper daimaa kaha hai asking from one dasi..
Gi-woh niche hai...
Ak-mai bhi ja rahi...nd ...saw to vis nd daimaa from upstairs. .
Da-woh maharaj mai yeh keh rahi thi ki aap baby ji ki shadi kara dijiye ya unke sath thoda time.
Vis-aacha aap batyegi hame ...ki hum apni beti ke sath kya kare..
Ak-yeh babasaa chila kyo rahe hai...nd went in hulll..
vis-hamare niji mamle mai mat boliye ...humko pata hai kab shadi karni hai kab kaisa bartaw karna hai..
da-maf kariyega maharaj..
Vis-aap ja sakti hai..jiske liye hai..ak ki care ..
Da-ji.
Ak-babasaa yeh aap kya bole ja rahe hai...
Vis-ak aap in sab mai mat padiye sab hai na apke paass itna bada raj mehel sab suvidha..
ak-haa par bol nahi sakte ...aap mujhe kya thoda time nahi de sakte..
vis-sab apka hi toh hai...bas yeh dimag se hataiye aur woh boliye jo bolna chahiye...hame kisi dore mai jana hai..
Ak-meri toh sunni nhi jab hame nhi rahege na toh yad karna...bhag jane ko man ..
vis-ak princess...aap pls essa mat sochiye..dekhiye sab hai na...bas hum taye karege kya aacha hai kya bura..
Da-baby ji pls chaliye...ak took to her in room..
Ak went near of her mother pic..
Ak-aap hoti toh mai esse akle na hoti...kya mera koi sathi nahi hai..mai esse hi rehne wali hu sab yahi sochte hai mai bhut bolti hu..
Kash aap hoti toh mai dil ki bat apko bolti ..mujhe mera sathi lota dijiye...
da-baby ji..
ak hug to daimaa..
Akk-mai kya kisi se bat karne layak nhi...kya esse hi hogi meri jindagi..
dai-nhi...?????
so guys pls press button if u like thispart nd gave sweet comments. .i will wait for ur sweet comments. ..tell me about story that u r liking or not...gud bad jaise bhi..
precap-hero entry..
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Edited by ruchinaksh - 9 years ago
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