naksh ff: DOSTI AND LOVE part 29 on page 108

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Sameera Badar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#441

nyccc part pranu dear well done...mind blowing maza a gaya plz cont next part soon

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_nakshi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#442

Originally posted by: sameera_naksh
nyccc part pranu dear well done...mind blowing maza a gaya plz cont next part soon

Thanqq sooo much sameera...
Will update soon 😊

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#443

Originally posted by: --pranu--

tqq tqqq tqqq sooo muchhh puchiii for ur pyar pyaricomments...
loved it...
i willl dooo soonnn😃

Aww i will wait 😊

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nakshkidiwani

@nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#444

Pls update next part soon princy ..i m waiting

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Nairaksh

@Nairaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#445

Pranu please update krdo Iss part ko again and again read kr liya h ab excitement aur increase ho gyi
Please update

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_nakshi_

@_nakshi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#446

PART 20

naksh opened the door nd surprised to see all dat...

there was even kalas for her grihpravesh...

suddenly they heard word surprise ..

it was none other than david nd his wife ..

they went early to give naksh dis surprise ..

davids wife did ak grihpravesh by doing aarthi...

but baaki hw?

ak became lill sad..

nk asked ak to giraofy kalash nd she did it..

he took ak in his arms nd did baaki rasam..

ak had tears and thanked mrs.david..

u did everything wat a mom can do for u...

no one else can do like wat u both did for us...

david couple :pls

we have all

ek doosre ke saath

paise property sab..

bas jo nhi hain wo hain apna kehne wali aur apnon ki pyaar...

iss ek saal mein u fulfilled it..

we wer more dan happy ..

we wish we had kids like u..

ak:can i request something ?//

david :u dont need permission bolo na

ak:can we call u mom dad if u have no problem ?

davids couple had tears literally in eyes...

as they never had kids in der life...

they felt veryy happy nd agreed...

all gave a group hug...

and clicked pics to celebrate new relations...

everyone has a happy face as now everyone was making new and happy pakki wali realtions...

davids wife prepared for lunch...

they all ate..

and enjoyed togetherness of family at evening dey both left leaving naksh alone at home

to njoy their spl day...

ak was happy wid all happened.

but she had mixed emotions of anxiety...

happiness

and mainly fear as she cant move properly and had a feeling of lowness with in her as now nks

expectations towards her change...

she has darr inside

kya mein nk ko kush rakh paaungi???

he had done all for me...

iss kami ki wajah se nk ko kya mein sab kuch de paungi?

wat if i dont be able to walk after two months also...

kya nk ki family accept karengi ??

and kya ab mein nk ke liye laayk hoon

who can give him everything,,,

unhe tho bas meri dhyaan rakhne mein hi chalegi tho mein nk ko ek patni ki taraf se kounsi kushi ddongi?

and unki care baaki wifes ki tarah kaise karungi?

she thinks all this and had tears and tensions in her eyes and face...

nk calls her ,,

so she changes clothes into nighty and goes..

here nk sitting in bedroom and arranged bed wid flowers thinking to strt happy life wid his ak...

he was happy dreaming of a new life wid ak...

ak came and sat near nk seeing his happy face xpecting(naughties ye bolne ki zaroorat nahi kyunki u all know 😆)

nk strts speaking to ak in his world

nk:ak pata hi nahi chala kaise

hum mile

kitni ladaai ki kabhi socha bhi nahi ki tum hi ammu hogi,,

par pehle din se hi i had different feelings for u..

and urs???????

and we will give treat to all our classmates in celebration of our milan?

ak:nk mein aapse kuch kahu?????

nk:ha

ak:hum abhi apni relation ke baare mein kisiko bataati nahi

aur is waqt padaayi zaroori hain

and ghar walon ko bhi nahi bataayi...

so i think we will strt our new life after two months wid all family members happiness...

plss

nk:ak?

i already said u ki we will tell everythin to our family wen we go der...

tho ab aap ye sab???/

u dont trust me kya????/

soory ak but u have hurted me...

fine watever u say we will do everything wen we go back..

shaayad tabhi u will get trust on me...

we used to have studies

but used to do parties and njoyment..

bas bataao ki u dont trust me at all...

he gets angry and goes from der...

ak feels cry and realises wat she said..

and hw she hurt nk with her wordss..

she strted crying... 😭

Edited by --pranu-- - 10 years ago

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_nakshi_

@_nakshi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#447

nk goes to balcony in anger...

he feels anger and gets frustrated as he thinks ak doesnt trust him..

he too had tears in his eyes,,,

after sometime ak came near nk...

and said

ak:sryy meri boosty pati dev...

mujhe maaf karo...

plss galathi hogayi,,,

nk was still angry dat he turns his face to other side..

ak catches his hand and kisse it..

i love u

i trust u

plss maaf karo...

dekho shaadi ke baad biwi pe gussa nai karthe..

plss...

but nk still in anger dat he strt going from der...

wen ak cries loudly bursting out...

nk worries for her and comes near her and hug her,,,'

nk:m sorry

plss dont cry

meine

maaf kardi...

plss dont cry i cant see u in pain..

ak:tho kya mein dekh sakti hoon?

nk:but u dont trust me too..

u only made me angry and make face...

ak:tho mein kya karu?????

mein darr gayi

mein nahi chaahti hoon ki meri wajah se aapko insecure feel ho..

sab ye na kahe ki u married a girl who cant walk also...

sab mazaak banaayengi..

aur mein bhi aapko koi kushi nahi depaaungi jo baaki wife apne hubbies ko dengi

caring and and...

nk understood her low feeling and understood why she said so..

he too had tears in his eyes..

he felt bad for his anger,,,

he said///

nk:agar mein aisi situation mein hoon tho kya aap mera saath nahi dogi?

chodogi aise hi?????

and will leave me dat i am lame????

ak:nahi nk kabhi nahi chodke jaaungi...

nk:tho aapne kaise socha ki mein aapko aise chodungi..

and u r less to me..

u cant walk dat doesnt mean u r not perfect for me..

no one perfect dan u for me...

pati patni means half half...

if one is less tho doosre uss kami ko poori karni hain..

kabhi plss aise khayaal math laao i love u paagal ammu...

ak realised and she hugged him..

m sorry nk..

nk gave a kiss on her forhead...

he gave her a beautiful diamond ring as token of their love to her...

nk lifted ak in his arms and took her to bed,,,

he placed her on the bed...

she felt shy and became red red...

so nk swithched off the lights...

he came soo close to ak and ak xcitement increased...

both lips touched...

ak and nk were njoying the moment and now desire in both is increasing wid the intensity in kiss...

they had a long kiss..

and broke after they felt breathless...

nk strted exploring ak body by running his hands and giving kisses on her whole body wherever possible..

ak just felt his touches and njoyed the intimacy between both...

she tooo kissed nk all over his face and chest...

after hours of exploring to each other and love making...

naksh became one..

nk saw ak had tears of happiness ...

he wiped dem wid his face and gave a last peck of lip kiss

befor he covered the two wid blanket...

dey both soon peacefully slept in each others embrace...

so frndsthis is my next update

i know its not romatic..

but i tried wat i can do...

pls givr ur reviews

jo bhi hain

do press like button if u like it

tqq in advance...

precap:naksh new beginning

Edited by --pranu-- - 10 years ago

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_nakshi_

@_nakshi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#448

par yaar i will update but dont expect soo hot romantic sa update from me...

i will try my best...

but i am weak in writing hot ones...

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Nairaksh

@Nairaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#449

Originally posted by: --pranu--
par yaar i will update but dont expect soo hot romantic sa update from me...
i will try my best...
but i am weak in writing hot ones...

Don't say like that yar it hurts me, you are tooo good and you have proved it well

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nakshkidiwani

@nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#450

Originally posted by: --pranu--
par yaar i will update but dont expect soo hot romantic sa update from me...
i will try my best...
but i am weak in writing hot ones...

Jitna u want to write princy... 😊