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_nakshi_

@_nakshi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

my first full fledged ff ..
hope u all give me ur support in writing this full ff..
hopefully start itsoon...
tqq for ur support always...
but pls do give all kinds of comments so dat i could give the best i can...😊
i too will be updating short parts as its my first one... dont wanna do hurry burry and spoil it...

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_nakshi_

@_nakshi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

index

part 1- page 1

part 2 -page 6

part 3- page 8 and 9

part 4-page 11

part 5-page 14

part 6-page 17

part 7-page 22

part 8-page 24

part 9 -page 27

part 10-page 30

part 11-page 33 on aug 12

part 12-page 36 on aug 13

part 13-page 39 on aug 18

part 14 -page 43 on aug 23

part 15-page 45 on aug 27

part 16-page 48 on aug 30

part 17-page 55 on Sep 16

part 18-page 57

part 19-page 60 on sep 25

part 20-page 62 on sep 27

part 21-page 65 on sep 28

part 22-page 69 on oct 9

Part 23-page 72 on oct 15

Part 24-page 74 on oct 16

Part 25-page 81 on oct 19

Part 26-page 87 on oct 28

Part 27-page 90 on nov 8

Part 28-page 105 on nov 11

part 29-page 108 on nov 24

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_nakshi_

@_nakshi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

with all ur support here i present my new ff,,,,,,,

hope u all love it,,,,,

so my story starts in the big city of Singapore...

yess a brand new fresh love story which will revolve in city of Singapore

PART-1

naitik a guy from mumbai

akshi a girl from udaipur...

both land in the city of singapore to pursue their graduation...

they land their with a lot of hopesss...

before landing in Singapore both naitiks parents and akshis parents arrange apartment for both of dem alag alag sa from a lender...

both go their respective places where they need to stay...

both cars stop at the place where their life gonna start...

but but but kismat ne kuch aur socha...

they both happily entered the house with lots of hopes...

both were gazing at the beautiness of house and city of singapore which is visible from every part ofaparment...

suddenly akshi goesto see bedroom where she gets stuck wid a guy...

heheh yes its none other dan our handsome naitik...

both of dem loose balance and fall on the ground...😆😆

both looks in each others eyes and gaze in each others eyes for a long...

after some time naitik comes to reality 😛😛 he is so much irritated and pushes akshi...

and scolds her...

nk:hey who r u?

what d hell r u????

what r u doing in my flat??????

ak:now she is over irritated by his voice

hey mr.angru plss mind ur words...

and ha kya bolaye tumhari flat hain.. heheh

ye meri flat hain...

aaj hi meine rent peli...

nk:hahah nice joke ab dafaa hojaao...

he was about to push her out of d house wen

ak:hey! mr mind it tis is mine and i took this see my bill and receipt...

nk is superr schoked to see it

and shows his receipt also

now both naksh r shocked...

ye kya hain

how can dis happen...

with super angry both calls the lender of the house...

he comes after an hour...

naksh :wat is dis????

how couldu lend the same flat totwo at same time?

how dare u and all blah blah

when the owner interrupts...

its my house..

yes i lended it to both...

my wish...

i am in need of money so i gave it to both...

if u want both saty here ya both can leave...

here der is shortage of houses and a lease written once cant be breaken...

u both should saty here only though u both like or not...

share the flat and do adjust...

dats it...

naksh looks at each other...

so guys this is my first part of my ff...

do support me...

and pls do give ur comments...

and ha if u likedo press like comments

thanks in advance...

waiting for ur replies... 😊

precap: will naksh agree to adjust and stay wid each other???????

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

ohhh hooo...hamari new ff writer...

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_nakshi_

@_nakshi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hirannaksh
ohhh hooo...hamari new ff writer...

hopefully i become... 😃

meri guru hain na u and ruchi

and ek sishy bakki tho jaise jaise bannne ki koshihs kar rahi hoon...

hope u support me... 😊😊😊

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nakshkidiwani

@nakshkidiwani

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

Waaw congoo songoo for new ff my princess meri writer I will give u full support yaieee👍🏼

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nakshkidiwani

@nakshkidiwani

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

Princess ur ff name is so nice pls give inro ..I m waiting for ur ff now ..u will give daily update pls??

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --pranu--

hopefully i become...😃
meri guru hain na u and ruchi
and ek sishy bakki tho jaise jaise bannne ki koshihs kar rahi hoon...
hope u support me...😊😊😊

ofcourse i will...