pritu's ff !~KISMAT CONNECTION~! pt33/147 - Page 7

Originally posted by: SA-SIMRAN

nice intro
plzz update soon guys
its nice story of south indian and marwari girl

Didu

this is really an awesome starting of ur ff pranu...u really did a great work by expressing all the situations beautifully...i love naksh character...
hope to read more great work of ur and ruchi...
good one...
and amazing start...
do update new part soon...

Thanks for happy that you write ff
now surprise toh woh tha jo pranu ne likha ta
ki woh chod rahi hai
its nice update i liked it
akshi childish behaviour is nice
plz update next part soon
thanks

Originally posted by: akira223

Didu

Awsome love it

I have a writer didu as well yayyy

Fabulous:)

Originally posted by: NAKSHMYJAAN

this is really an awesome starting of ur ff pranu...u really did a great work by expressing all the situations beautifully...i love naksh character...
hope to read more great work of ur and ruchi...
good one...
and amazing start...
do update new part soon...

Originally posted by: SA-SIMRAN

Thanks for happy that you write ff
now surprise toh woh tha jo pranu ne likha ta
ki woh chod rahi hai
its nice update i liked it
akshi childish behaviour is nice
plz update next part soon
thanks

Hello pranu
how r u
i need help
plz tell how to attach pic in comments

so here i start...
NEGATIVE POINTS...
* firsly mujhe kuch south indian words read karne me bahut problem hui...
* naitik ki green jeans aur yellow shirt ka combo mujhe accha nahi laga...
* aur ha itni zyada english mujhe padhni nahi aati hai...
NOW POSITIVE POINTS...
* thanks ki south indian words ka saath uska meaning bhi diya...
* naitik ka suit wala style i love it...
* aur haa thank u ki ff ko akshara wale part me hindi me likha...
very nice start...i love everything...
naitik's character is good...but mujhe wo thoda serious laga...
and akshara wo toh jaisi bhi ho...always best...
great update...
now waiting for naksh ki pehli mulakaat...
pls jaldi update karna...
happu and ruchu...a big thank u for ur ff's great start...
but happu now i am angry with u...aur mujhse bolne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai...
aur ha reply ki bhi... :(

So nice update princess ..u showed naksh vry nice yr ..I loved it like natiks entry prince wali ..nd akshi like naughty nd bindas childish. ..mast tha👏