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hirannaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#741

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh
nice update.. akshi ka bachhe ke liye kahna and naitik ke excuses was nice scene. party scene is very nice and cool.. naksh ki jealousy aww... precap is just aww... update soon

thank u soo much pragu for liking this part too :)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#742

Originally posted by: hirannaksh
thank u for liking this part...

accha toh laga...

warna thought ab tumhe meri comments dena bhi pasand nahi hain... 😊

Edited by --pranu-- - 10 years ago

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#743

Originally posted by: --pranu--

accha toh laga...
warna thought ab tumhe meri comments dena bhi pasand nahi hain...😊

tumhe har baat par aisa kyu lagta hai ?

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_nakshi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#744

kyunki mein aise hi hoon... 😆

good night sweet dreams...

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#745

Originally posted by: --pranu--
kyunki mein aise hi hoon...😆
good night sweet dreams...

good...
jaisi ho waisi hi raho...

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_nakshi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#746

Originally posted by: hirannaksh
good...
jaisi ho waisi hi raho...

good night...😊

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#747

PART...16...

akshara came in her room...she was little upset with naitik...because he borke her heart ( aree itna bada wala dil bhi nahi toda...bas choti si baat hai...)ak(mummering to herself)-samajhte kya hai apne aapko...meri ek choti si wish poori nahi kar sakte...mai ye sab aakhir unhi ke liye toh kar rahi hu...par nahi hamesha apni hi chalate hai...kabhi meri nahi sunte...aane do aaj se mai naitik se baat nahi karne wali...(she was looking really cute while saying this...)here after half n hour...naitik comes n saw that akshara is angry n is speaking something to herself...he went near her and started hearing what she is speaking...akshara was no where to stop..." jaanti hu ki mujhe cancer hai...aur hum yaha meri treatment ke liye aaye hai...par kya naitik mujh nayi naveli dulhan ko..yaha ghumane nahi le ja sakte...mujhe pyaar nahi kar sakte...mujhe mumma nahi bana sakte..."naitik laugh hearing her words...ak..." bas ek patient ki tarah treat karna chahte hain...aree mera treatment next week se shuru ho raha hai...toh kya ye saat din...sirf saat din wo mujhe pyaar..khushi...ye sab nahi de sakte..."

she was just going on speaking and speaking...

on the other hand naitik thinks..." naitik beta tu toh aaj gaya...biwi ki ek baat na maane par pati ka kya anjaam hota hai...aaj tu ye zaroor dekhega...akshara aaj toh bahut gussa ho gayi...ab maine kaam jo aisa kiya hai...yu akshara par gussa ho gaya..." ( after thinking for some time..."

nk-hmmm...ye theek rahega...

he goes behing her..put his hand on her belly n before she can react...he started kissing her back...and akshara gets lost in his kiss...closed her eyes and started feeling his love...here naitik smieks n give a bite on her back...

by this akshara scream n comes back to senses n pushed naitik away...

and her back facing naitik...her face was red...full of anger n she just gave him whatever look n started walking towards bed...!!!!...

naitik folllowed n turned her to face him...

nk-i am sorry...

(but she ignored him n looked in another direction so again said..." i am really really sorry akshara..."par aapne...bhi aisi baat ki jo...

( but akshara did'nt look at him...)

nk-mei oor dekhengi bhi nahi...

ak-nahi...

he trie to talk to her many times but she ignored him totally...he got angry...so he holds her waist tightly n kissed her lips roughly...taking his anger out...

akshara became shocked by his behaviour...she tried to push him but naitik was far stronger than her...she was struggling so much...

but how much she was trying to free herself naitik keep kissing her more n more roughly...then akshara fell short of breath so she pulled his hair hard...naitik came to know n leaves her lips...akshara's eye were still cloaed...

after some time she open her eyes n pushes naitik hard..by this she gets free from his grip...

naitik again said sorry to her...but she ignored him...and sit on the bed...

naitik came and sit beside her...and gave a quick kiss on her cheeks...

ak-naitik ye kya hai...kyu kar rahe hai...

nk-aree maine kya kiya...mai toh apni pyaari si biwi ko kiss hi de raha hu...

ak-par mujhe nahi chahiye...

nk-kyu nahi chahiye...mai aapka husband hu...ye kiss toh de hi sakta hu...

ak-haa...aap aur kuch bhi de sakte hai...par meri yaha sunni kise hai...

she angrily lay on the bed...n switched off the lights on her side...

naitik too get uo...remove his coat...and lay beside akshara...

both were silent in that room...and naitik did'nt like this...so he try to cheer up akshara's mood...

nk-waise akshara...aaj ka fest kaise laga...?

ak(angrily)-accha tha...

nk-aur waha ki shopping...

ak-wo bhi acchi thi...

nk-accha akshara...aapne kaha tha ki aap mujhe room me kuch surprise dene wwali hai...kaha hai mera surprise...?

ak-mere paas koi surprise nahi hai...aapke liye...

nk-ohhh !!!!...par mai aapke liye ek suprise laya hu...

ak-jo laye hai wo apne paas hi rakhiye...mujhe nahi chahiye...

nk-par mujhe toh dena hai...

he take a red rose n give it to akshara...( she was laying facing opposite side...)

so naitik forward that rose infront of her face...she take that rose...and out it near a lamp...

ak-thank u...

nk-bas itna chota sa thank u...

ak-hmmm...

nk-ab mujhe aapko ek batani hai...

ak-kya...????

nk-yahi...ki aapne jo kaha tha...maine uske baare me bahut socha...

akshara quickly turn to his side..." kya socha aapne ??"

nk-yahi ki i am ready...

ak(shockingly)-sach...

nk(smile)-haaa...

on this she hugs him tightly...

ak-i love u naitik...

nk-i love tooo...

naitik broke that hug...

nk-aaahhh...bahut thak gaya hu mai akshara...mujhe bahut neend aa rahi hai...chaliye ab so jate hain...

ak-accha bahut neend aa rahi hai...(naitik nods naughtily...)..theek hai toh so jaiye...

( saying this she also pretende as if she is in sleep...)

but naitik was able to stay away from her even for a second...

he came near her and hug her from back...

ak-sone dijiye naitik...aapki tarah mujhe bhi neend aa rahi hai...

nk-nahi...usse pehle mujhe mera surprise chahiye...

ak-theek hai...toh dhoondh lijiye...

nk-par kaha..thoda sa hint toh dijiye...

ak-koi hint nahi milega...kyunki wo uss samay bahar hi mil chuka tha...

naitik remebered that while kissing outside..akshara moaned a little...

he quickly open her blouse...and akshara closed her eyes...

naitik trace his hand on her back...and saw that akshara have a tattoo of his name..." NAITIK "...

nk(surprisingly)-akshara ye tattoo...mere naam ka...aapko dard hua hoga...

ak-aapko accha laga...

nk-ha par...

ak-bas mere liye ye hi bahut hai...

before naitik could say anything more...akshara kissed his lips and leaves them quickly...

(with this...)

both came more closer to each other...naitik started kissing her neck n shoulders...then remove her pallu n unclips her blouse...n start kissing her cleavage making her moan in pain...then he licked it to sooth the pain...now he started removing her blouse along with her inner..after removing it he went down start bitting kissing n sucking her belly...madly...

as if there is no tomorrow..after that he again came up and kissed her lips passionately...akshara gets a grip of his hair...was getting tighter n tighter...then naitik tried to enter inside her mouth...but in order to tease him..she did'nt open her mouth..naitik got angry n pinched on her belly n started greeding her lower lips...akshara finally open her mouth...naitik enetered his tongue...der tongue interwined...naitik bit her tongue as she was not opening her mouth...)

(after some time thier clothes were lying on the floor n some of sweet moans were coming out...with lots of hotness...)

Edited by hirannaksh - 10 years ago

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#748

NEXT MORING...

akshara still sleeping peacefully...when naitik take bath...and came in the room...saw akshara...he came near her ears...whisper---" good morning my love..."

akshara woke up with his sweet voice..." good morning naitik...aap itni subah subah uth gaye..."

nk-haaa...kyunki mujhe kuch planning karni thi...

ak-planning...kaisi...?

nk-hai kuch...apni biwi ke har sapne poore jo karne hai...

ak-awww..how sweet...

nk-madam mai itna bhi sweet nahi hu...chaliye uthiye...

akshara sat up on the bed...and covered herself with blanket...

naitik quickly take her in his arms..." ab aap mere saath chaliye.."

ak-naitik !!! aise...chalungi mai..mere kapde..mujhe nahane toh dijiye...

nk-bilkul nahi...aap aise hi chalengi...

ak-par hum ja kaha rahe hai...aur kisi ne dekh liya toh...

nk-akshara...mere alawa kisi aur ki himaat nahi ki aapko aise dekhe..aur waise bhi hum bas hotle ki balcony tak hi ja rahe hai...

naitik take her to the balcony...and made her sit on the chair...

there was too cold...so naitik too came and sit with akshara...sharing the same blanket...

ak-wow ! kitna accha aur thada mausam hai yaha kaa...

nk-haaa...par mujhe toh bahut garmi lag rahi hai...

ak-kyu naitik...??? aapki tabiyat theek nahi hai kya...???

nk-ji nahi madam...kyunki aap itni hot hai na isliye..

ak(blush)-naitik...kya aap bhi...

she hide her face in his chest...

they both sat there for a long time...enjoying their breakfast...and after that they decided to go out somewhere...

firstly akshara aksed him to go any temple...because she wants to thank god...for giving her husband and a lover like naitik...

they reached at the temple...( i know ki america me temple kaha se aaya...wo bhi ek anokha temple..ye toh mujhe nahi pata...par this is my imaginary story...toh mai kuch bhi kar sakti hu...ha...ha..ha...)

both became shocked to see that temple...because in that temple...there was not a single lady...only mens and mens at every where...

ak-naitik...aapko yaha koi bhi ladki nazar aayi...??

nk-nahi akshara...pata nahi kaisa temple hai...

ak-hmmm..par jo bhi hai bhagwaan me vishwaas toh hamara har jagah hai...

nk-woh toh hai...phir bhi mai pooch kar aata hu...shayad andar ja sake...

ak-ji naitik...

naitik went some where..and asked a man about that temple...

nk-hello sir..can u pls tell me why there is no women in this temple...i mean me and my wife want to go for prayer...

man-no...no nothing like that..actually u both can go in..but from the different way...from this side only men can go...and from the opposite side..only women can go...

nk-ohhh !!! thanks..but can u tell me why these different ways...

man-i don't know much about that..but its only because we can test our love with our partner...and we will get to know that how much time we will be together...

nk-ok...thanks...but this must be a joke..right...how can we already know that how much time we will be with our partner...

man-if u don't believe..then go and test it...actually i have already did this thing with my wife...and in my case god was really right...my wife had a cancer that time...so we came here...

nk(shockingly)-so what was the answer...???? how is ur wife..??

man-dear..god gave me my wife as a gift...she is absolutely fine now...

nk(smile)-hmmm...all the best for ur rest of ur life

nk(st)-what a stupid thing...

after asking about temple...naitik came back..but he was serious...

nk-akshara...

ak-haaa...chale andar...

nk-nahi akshara...hum kahi aur chslte hain...

ak-par kyu naitik..kya hua..???

nk-aap hi ne kaha tha na ki bhagwaan har jagah hai...unki aashirwaad hume har jagah se mil jata hai...

he hold her hands and about to go...but akshara was not ready to go...

ak-nahi..pehle bataiye..kya baat hai...

nk-akshara wooo...

he told her everything about his and that man convo...

nk-ab chaliye...hum yaha nahi jayenge..

ak-par kyu naitik...hum bhi dekhte hai...

nk-akshara...kya ho gaya hai aapko...aapko hamare saath par...mere pyaar par vishwaas nahi hai...

akshara holds his hand..." vishawaas hai naitik...aur uss vishwaas ko aur pakka karna chahti hu..."

nk-nahi..mai...

ak-aapko darr lag raha hai..ki kahi...

nk-akshara...aisa kuch nahi hai...hamara saath inn sab se kahi bada hai...

ak-i know naitik...aur kuch nahi toh hum..bhagwaan ka aashirwaad lene toh chal hi sakte hai...pls...

nk-ok...

ak-ye hui na baat...

nk-par aap itni saari stairs chadh payengi...??

ak-aapka pyaar...meri himaat hai...mai uske sahaare kuch bhi kar sakti hu...

naitik gave her a cute kiss on her forehead...and both parted away...and went to their roots...

in that temple...for ladies...there were 2000 stairs...and for men...there were 1000 stairs...but the difference is that...girls can go in the temple simply by using their legs...but men have to go on their knees..

and after that in that big temple...u have to came together in front of god...take blessings...and select a paper...and go back...after that open that paper...

naksh came at their respective palce...both hold their hands...and prayed to got..." jo bhi ho bhagwaan..hume ek doosre ka saath hamesha ke liye chahiye..."

naitik was relax...and start his journey to the temple...but somewhere akshara has a fear in her mind...that may be due to her cancer..naitik will loose her...

SO FRINDS I KNOW THIS UPDATE IS NOT SO GOOD...BUT HOPE U ALL LIKE THIS PART...AND WAIT KI KYA HAI NAKSH KE FUTURE ME EK DOOSRE KA SAATH HAMESHA KE LIYE...

Edited by hirannaksh - 10 years ago