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SA-SIMRAN

@SA-SIMRAN

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Posted: 10 years ago

#511

Thanks for update
its a nice part and emotional part
ab naitik kya karega akshra ki demand puri karne ke liye
woh bhi tab akshra nhi chati
nice dear very nice and heart touching
akshra ko marna mat

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#512

Originally posted by: ruchinaksh
Omg sona this is vry emotional nd touchy part yr😭
Natik ka kuch na bolna was just amazing nd akshi ka bar bar bolna ..hyee ..uff dusari shadi ka kya twist hai ye😲but naksh ki shadi ho gyi wo bhi sad sad wali😭but akshi ko realize hua natik ko pyar kare ..but kya wo second shadi kar k aayga ..aur aayga to kisse ..waaw vry interesting story sona ...mindbolwing part dear ...
Pls pls do update next part soon dear but akshi ko die mat karna bas..

thank u thank u thank u soo much ruchu for liking this part...and giving ur sweet comment...
love u for liking this ff always...

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#513

Originally posted by: --pranu--
so emotional part cryu...
image wali scene is good...
finally mrs.naitik singhania ban gayi akshi..
hope naitik gusse mein koi kadam na uthaale...
waiting for next part...😊
par ek week intezaar karni hain

thank u sooo sooo much happu:for liking this part too...aaj poora time ise likhne me gaya...
and u all like it...this is most important for me...
love u

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#514

Originally posted by: SA-SIMRAN
Thanks for update
its a nice part and emotional part
ab naitik kya karega akshra ki demand puri karne ke liye
woh bhi tab akshra nhi chati
nice dear very nice and heart touching
akshra ko marna mat

thank u sooo much simi for liking this part dear...and giving ur precious comment...

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#515

PART...12
Akshara happily open the door...
but instantly got a heart attack...when naitik came with a girl...who was in a bridal attire...wearing a long ghoonghat on her face...
she got the most shocking jhatka of her life...even bigger than her cancer news...
naitik was little sad...but smiling seeing akshara...
but akshara was about to cry...some how she controled her emotions...
ak-naitik ye ?
nk-jis tarah aapne apna wada poora kiya akshara usi tarah maine bhi apna wada kiya...meet my wife mrs. naitik mohini signhania...
akshara gave a forcefull smile to them...
nk-aapne hi toh ye shart rakhi thi...aap khush toh hai naa...
ak-hmmm...par aap mujhe aap kyu keh rahe hain naitik...
nk-ab kya karu do do biwi hai meri dono ko poora sammaan aur pyaar dena padega...
ak(shocked)-naitik ye aap...
nk-koi baat nahi akshara maine mohini ko hamare baare me sab kuch bata diya hai...aur use koi problem nahi hai...bechari ka iss duniya me koi nahi hai...mere siwa...
akshara take a releif...mohini kya tumhe mere saath adjust karne me koi prblem toh nahi hai ?
mo-ji nahi akshara didi...hum dono behen ilkar khushi se naitik ji saath rahenge...
ak(smile).aap dono andar aaiye...
nk-aree aise kaise ? meri wife ka greh pravesh nahi karengi...
akshara eye again filled with tears...
ak-mai abhi aayi...
while walking toward the kitchen...she wipe her tears..." naitik ne mere greh pravesh ke liye toh kuch nahi kiya "...
after some time...
akshara came at the door with a aarti ki thaal...
she did their aarti and asked them to came in together...
naitik took mohini in his arms...which akshara did'nt like it...she quickly turn her face to other side...because she can't see him with another girl...
nk(st)-sorry akshara...par ye sab mai apni nahi balki aapki khushi ke liye kar raha hu...
he too had a tears in his eyes while doing all this...
trio came in naitik's room...where akshara already did all the prepration to give a romantic surprise to naitik...
nd naitik became really surprise...
nk-wow ! akshara ye sab aapne kiya hai ?
ak-aapko accha laga...
nk-bahut pyaara...ye beautiful curtains ye decorations...ye sab hamari...
when mohini interrupted in between..." hamari suhaag raat ke liye hai na naitik ki ? "
akshara became angry to hear this...she gave a glare look to mohini...
nk-haa...mohini ye sab hamare liye hi hai...aaj se hum apni life ki nayi shuruaat isi room se karenge...
mohini quickly gave a kiss to naitik on his cheeks...with open her little ghoonghat...
naitik became shocked with this sudden attack of mohini...he loook at akshara...she became more angry...and ran from there...
naitik became tensed fr her...he excuses mohini and ran behind her...
akshara came in her room...and start crying loudly...
naitik too came there...he saw akshara...and became panic...
nk-akshara...kya hua ? aap ro kyu rahi hai...
ak-mujhe aapse baat nahi karni naitik...
nk-par hua kya ?
ak-maine itne pyaar se wo room hamare liye sajaya tha...aur ab wo...
nk(smile)-mohini...
ak-haa...mohini ne kaha ki aap aur wo...
nk-akshara...jis tarah aap meri patni hai usi tarah mohini bhi hai...isliye...
ak-haa...par aapke room par pehla hak hamara hai...mai aapki pehli biwi hu...
nk-akshara aap toh pehle din se hi gussa hone lagi...wo toh aapko apni badi behen maanti hai...aur bechari kitni seedhi saadi hai...
ak-hmmm...par woo apna chehra kyu nahi dikha rahi...
nk-aree aise kaise...pehle uska chehra mai dekhunga suhaag raat par...phir aapki baari...
ak-naitik...
she hits him on his shoulder...waise wo aapse kaha mili...
nk-mere office me kaam karti thi...bechaari bahut mehnat karti hai...isliye jab aapne kal kaha toh maine mohini se poocha shadi ke liye...aur usne haa keh di...
ak-acchi baat hai...
she beccame sad again...

Edited by hirannaksh - 10 years ago

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#516

Nk-ab kya hua ? akshara...aap khush nahi hai...ye sab maine aapke kehne par hi toh kiya hai...
ak-i know naitik...par na jane...( stop )...
nk-kya ?
ak-kuch nahi...abhi aadat nahi hai na...aapko kisi aur ke saath dekhne ki isliye...
nk(smile)-good...waise ye dress aap par bahut pyaari lag rahi hai...
ak-jane dijiye...aapne toh mujhe theek se dekh hi nahi...
nk-koi baat nahi...raat ko dekh lenge...
ak-raat ko matlab ?
nk-aaj hamari bhi toh suhaag raat hai...
ak-nahi naitik aaj aap...
but without listening anything naitik sealed her lip him...and he start kissing her passionately...slowly slowly akshara too start responding on his kiss...
but mohini knock at the door...
so they have to seperate...
nk-wo...wo mohini...hum...
mo-ji wo mai kehne aayi thi ki...mujhe wo room accha nahi laga...toh kya hum iss room ko apna room bana le...?
ak-haa...kyu nahi...mohini...aaj se ye room aur ye ghar bhi utna hi tumhara hai...jitna ki hamara...
akshara look at naitik...
mo-toh theek hai...naitik ji aap mera samaan car se le aaiye pls...
nk-theek hai...
he went to take mohini's luggage...

and here akshara start putting her things in naitik's room...
when again mohini came behind her...
mo-didi...
ak-haa...
mo-mai naitik ji ko khush kaise rakhu...?
ak-ammm...
mo-jaise aap abhi unhe khush rakh rahi thi...
ak-dekho mohini...mai jaati hu ki tum kya soch rahi ho...mai bas ye chahti hu ki tum naitik ko dher saara pyaar do...
mo-ji didi...
when naitik interrupted their talks...
nk-kya baatein ho rahi hain...?
mo-wo hum aapke saath time bitane ka time table decide kar rahe the...
ak(shocked)-nahi naitik...hum toh...
mo-haa naitik ji...didi keh rahi thi ki aap din me unke saath rahe...aur raat ko mere saath...
ak-nahi mai toh...
nk-wow ! that's nice...toh ye tai raha...mai din me apna time akshara ke saath aur raat ka time mohini tumhare saath spend karoonga...
mo(happily)-thank u naitik...toh waise bhi raat hone wali hai...aap room me jaldi se aaiye
she happily went from there...
ak-naitik wo jhoot...
nk-mai jaanta hu akshara...par mai aapki khushi ke liye ye bhi karne ko taiyaar hu...
he sadly went from there...
ak-ye kya kar diya maine...mai naitik ko khush karne ki bajaye...unhe aur takleef de rahi hu...
AT DINNER TIME...
Trio came for the dinner...akshara made all favourite dishes for naitik...
ak(happily)-naitik...aaiye na ye sab maine aapki pasand ka banaya hai...
nk(smile)
mohini tooo came there wearing same gown like akshara...but with a ghoonghat...
mo-didi...aapne khana banaya hai...toh mai naitik ji ko khila du...
akshara was about to say something...but naitik..." haa mohini kyu nahi "
he happily open his mouth...and mohini start feeding him...
akshara was clearly jealous but some how she controled herself...
after dinner...
mohini wipe naitik's face with her hands...and asked him to come sooon in the room...
naitik nodded his head in ~ " yes "
now naksh all alone near the dining area...
ak-jaiye aapki biwi aapko bula rahi hai...
naitik smile n came near her...
nk-lijiye mai aa gaya...
he put his finger on her chin...
nk-accha akshara...mai aapkoo kuch dikhana chahta tha...
ak-kya ?
nk-ek minute...mai abhi laya...
and brought two gifts...
nk-ye aapke liye...
ak-isme kya hai ?
nk-khol ke dekhiye...
akshara happily open it...but became sad to see her gift..." saari "...
nk-haa...ab din me toh aap saari hi pehen sakti hai...nighty thodi naa...
ak-aur wo doosra gift...
nk-mohini ke liye...
ak-usme nighty hai kya ?
nk-haa...ab raat ko wo saari thoodi pehnegi

Edited by hirannaksh - 10 years ago

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#517

ak-accha...
nk-waise akshara...aap chinta mat kijiye...mai chupke se raat ko aapke paas aa jaunga...koi bahana banakar...
ak(angrily)-uski koi zaroorat nahi hai...
she agrily start walking towards her room...
nk-akshara...mai jhoot nahi keh raha...
ak-jaiye jaiye...
she angrily came n lock her room...
she pray to god...so they can give her some courage...
but suddenly she reminds naitik word " akshara mai raat ko aaunga "...
ak-naitik ne kaha hai toh wo zaroor aaynge...
toh phir mai...
she quickly open her cupboard...take out a black colour nighty...
and get ready...with a light but sext make up...and start waiting for naitik by open her room's door a little...
ITS 2 am AT NIGHT...
Akshara is still waiting for naitik...but he did'nt came...
ak-naitik ne toh kaha tha...mai jakar dekhu kya...kahi naitik ne mohini se ladai...nahi nahi...mai jakar dekhti hu...
she slowly slowly came at naitik n mohini's room...and knock at the door...
after some time...
naitik open the door...
nk(sleepy tone )-kaun hai...
he became shocked to see akshara...
so as akshara to see him in only a blanket...and lipstick mark on his whole body...
nk-akshara...aap yaha...itni raat ko...
akshara became embarrased to see him like this...
ak-i am sorry naitik...wo aapne kaha tha...
nk-ohh ! haa...mai aane hi wala tha...par mohini ne rok liya...
ak-its ok naitik...aap dono so jaiye...
nk-thanks akshara...ab aap bhi jakar so jaiye...
naitik quickly close the door...in front of akshara...and she sadly came in her room...switch off the light and sleep...
here naitik came in the room sadly...
mo-kya hua ?
nk-akshara thi...
mo-toh accha hai naa...
nk-tu aur tere ideas ek din meri jaan le lenge...mohit...akshara ko kitna bura laga hoga...
🤣
mohit start lauging on his conditions...
SO FRIND THIS IS A NEW PART...HOPE U ALL LIKE IT...AND MY TWIST TOO...
PRECAP...NAKSH KA SUHAAG DIN...

Edited by hirannaksh - 10 years ago