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Posted: 10 years ago

#491

Originally posted by: --pranu--
my comment on page 67 is updated...☺️

Aww how sweet ☺️my princy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#492

Originally posted by: ruchinaksh

Aww how sweet ☺️my princy

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Pragati-naksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#493

ruchi amazing part.. superbly written.. kahani me twist.. akshi ka gussa haha kya anger tha.. poor RJ .. nice part

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#494

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh
ruchi amazing part.. superbly written.. kahani me twist.. akshi ka gussa haha kya anger tha.. poor RJ .. nice part

Aww thanku thanku so much misri dear for liking this part nd always incourging me. .I will do update next part soon😊

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Nairaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#495

Ruchi, I like everything about naksh.
I was just joking wid you ki koi jgah to chod de.
Don't mind

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#496

Originally posted by: Nairaksh
Ruchi, I like everything about naksh.
I was just joking wid you ki koi jgah to chod de.
Don't mind

Mai bhi ..mai to dekh rahi thi kya bologi ..sun ke .😆 I know naksh fans like everything ...of naksh😳

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#497

Part-18

Natik skkiped her ...she went with vish ..natik hide himself ...she went in room wer was rajshree nd she saw to her but didnt say anything. .

Than akshu said ...mai taiyar hu mom jo aap kahegi wo karugi ..natik vish was also here ...

Ra-to shadi ..

Ak-hmm..she gave hug to her ..but dont want to say yes but no option ...saw to natik .who said dont worry I m with u na always..

Than she got discharged from hospital. .

Akshu in room ..admiring natiks pic ..than dhaiya came nd saw to her ..giving kisses to his pic ...

Dh-didi aap ..natik ji se ..

Akshu truned nd saw to dhaniya ...pls dont tell to mom...wo seh nhi paygi natik ne bola hai wo Mujhse shadi karega. ..but koi idea nhi aa raha hai ..

Dh-haye mori maiya ..wo to bhut aache hai ..aap na movie dekhiye usme mast mast ideas dete hai ...mai apke sath hu jab bhi aap meri help manegi to ..mai dungi ...she gave dinner and went..

She thought movie ..nd saw ddlg movie ..

Ak-mera raj ...abhi batati hu. .

Than she went outside saw here nd there ..

Went in natiks room ..without knocking d door. .

He is taking bath. ..she sat on bed..

Natik came didnt see to akshu ...throws his towel on her face ...

Ak-ye kya hai ..

Than he listen her voice ..aaa ..she saw aaa

He went in bathroom ..

Opened half door ..

Ak-hii.

Nk-bata k nhi aa sakti thi ...

Ak-sry mujhe nhi pata tha ..tumhe door close karke bath lena chahiye na ..

Ak-I got an idea..bahar aao..

Nk-towel...

Ak-oo throw on his face ..he came ..in room ..😲

Na-kya ..

Ak-tum shahruk khan ban jao. .

Nk-kya ..

Ak-matlab ..tum na ..raj ban jao like in movie..

Nk-stupid ...pagal ..sach bolte h ladkiya puri filmy hoti hai ...

Ak-dekho ..socho ..she is putting her head on his shoulder. .nd said ..mai khadi hu tum ro rahe ho ..vish dad pakad khade hai ..mai nk nk chila rahi hu ...suddenly dad ..ja akshu ja tere nk k pass isse jayada koi pyar nhi karega tujhe ...nd mai chali chali tum mujhe catch karoge aur hpy ending ..waaw

Nk-aur dream bhi tut jayga ..essa nhi hota hai ...mai jaisa hu waisa hi sab mujhe except kare its better na ...but I will try jagah banane ki esse hi ..raj ki tarah oki..

Ak-love u ...pulled his cheeks ...gave hug ..meri bat manne k liye ...

Nk-aacha ...

Ak-tum kya khaoge ..tumhe kya pasand h ..

Nk-tum bananogi with feared ..

Ak-haa tumhare liye ..

Nk-kheer...

Ak-oki ..dekhna kitni tasty banugi ...

Nk-oki ...ab sone jao ..

Ak-bye ..

She leave. ..

More parts coming soon

Edited by ruchinaksh - 10 years ago

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

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In morning ..natik is doing aarti nd akshu wokeul with this voice nd got ready ..rajshree nd vish was here ..than akshu came ..

She also took aarti..

Raj-waah aaj to meri beti uth k aarti karne bhi aa gai ..chalo ab sasural mai kush rahegi teri sas..

Ak-haa ab no sikayat ..sab aacha aacha to saw natiks face.

Vish-beta apki aarti sach mai bhut mithi hoti hai ..

Raj-haa ..bhut aacha laga than rituraj came ...he was sleepy ..

Ritu-kya natik ..thoda dhire ga leta ..subah utha diya ..rat mai bhi late se soya tha ..pura mood off ho gya ..than saw akshus family ...oo aunty aap kaise ho ab ..

Raj-ji thik hu ...aaj apke mom dad ..

Ritu-ji wo aa jayge din mai ...vish rajshree went ..natik akshu nd rituraj was here .

Ritu-saw to akshu ..hii ..

Ak-hii ..not interested ..

Na-sir aarti..

Ritu-tum..dikhai nhi deta ..I didnt take bath kaise lu ..lill raugh voice ..like boss..

Ak-ye bhagwan ka ghar hai ..aap aaram se bhi bol sakte hai ..

Ri-no ..I m boss na ..mujhe pata hai kab kya karna hai ..aap mere sath aaj gumne chalegi ...mao chahta hu ki hum ek dusare ke bare mai jan le thoda..

Ak-saw to natik ..noo ..but he said goo ..fine but hum sab chalege ...abhi morning mai ser par..

Raj-kya ..kyo ..mai aur tum bhi to..

Ak-mai akshu hu na to bol diya ...nd leave. .

Raj-aakad haa ...maja aayga ..ise to batana hoga ..thought ..tum bhi chalna ..nk ...ise bahane gum lenge aur kam bhi kar dena ..

Nk-oki ..

Than after sometimes ...rajshree went in kitchen ..wer was dirty smell like dud jal gya ho ...everyone shifting in table for breakfast ..

Raj-ye kya hai dhaina ...saw akshu was here ..with experiment ...

Pura dud jala diya ...

Ak-mom mai kheer bana rahi hu ..

Raj-jal gya h ye ..uff ...went outside ...in table ..

Vis-ye jalne ki badbu ..

Raj-apnki beti ..kheer bana rahi thi ..dud ko jala kar ..

Natik giggling ..akshu gave glare look ..he stopped. .

Ritu-akshu aapko ye sab karne ki koi jarurat nhi ..hamare ghar mai bhut naukar hai ..

Nk-sir kuch chize ..apni kushi ke liye ki jaye to bhut aacha lagta hai ..

Ak-right ..mai yesab apni kushi se kar rahi thi ..

Rit-but nokar hai na yesab ke liyeto timewaste kyo karna .uncle aunty ..akshu mere sath jogging mai jana chahti hai ..hum..

Vish-ji beta aap log jaiye ..outing ho jaygi ..city bhi dekh lena ..

Ritu-thanku ...

All r going in jogging ..akshu was in middle nd both boys here nd there..

Rit-aap kya exercise karti hai ..itni fit ..

Ak-ji nhi ..mai soti hu ..kuch nhi karti ..mujhekuch banana aata hi nhi ..

Ri-waaw ..mujhe bhi ye kitchen nd all wali girls pasand hi nhi ..u r different ..

Ak-she was really getting bored want natik ...

Ri-aur kuch bataiye na .

Ak-nariyal pani..wo pine ka man kar raha hai ..

Ri-oo ..natik pls three coconut le aao ...give money ..akshu felf really bad ..

Nk-mere pass hai ..

Went to take coconut. .rituraj in full style .but akshu didnt notice anything. .

Natik brought ..she took ..with big smile..thanku ...

Wlcm..

She is drinking ...nd saw to natik ..but natiks hand didnt balance to his hand ..all water went on akshis dress ..

Nk-sry ..wo galti se ..

Rit-what sry ..natik ..tum kuch dang se nhi kar sakte ..pura water wo bhi jhuta ..bola na akshu in chote logo ko koi manner nhi hota bas .

Akshus eyes became so red ..with riturajs words ..

Ak-shut up ..chup ho jao .samjhte kya ho haa ..jab dekho order mar diya ..natik felt really hurts with rituraj words..

Bas ab aur nhi ...mai kuch nhi sun sajti ..nk mera ..

Natik gave isara dont tell..

Ri-kya jara bolo to ..

Ak-kuch nahi ..in low voice ..but wo tumhara naukar nhi hai ..thoda tamij se ..aache se bhi bol sakte ho ..esse kisi ka majak udana aacha nhi hai ..na ..pls sry..

Ri-sry ..tum ye bhasan mat do pls .mood off mat karo .he is walking ..akshu was so much in anger ..he gave smile isara ..

Ak-no ..

Nk-chalo .pls .

Ak-oki ..she hold his hand .gave kiss on chekks..pls ..hapy raho ...

Nk-I m hpy in isara ...

Both catchup to rj..

Rj-ur dress is fine na akshu..

Ak-hmm..

Ri-tumhari city bhut aachi hai ..tumhari tarah bhut sundar

Ak-mai sundar nhi hoti to..

Ri-iska kya matlb..u r beautiful na ...ho to ho ...mai tumhe fit rakhuga ..with jim nd all..

Ak-phir bhi ho gai to ..

Ri-uff ..I cant imagine ..mujhe nhi ata ..mai itna lamba nhi sochta hu ..

Ak-par mai to sochti hu .aur manti hu pyar ...jaise mere mom dad ne diya ...mera pati bhi dega ..kisi bhi rup mai to saw natik. .who gave cutee smile. .

Ri-sab bookies batiee hai ..sabke sath ye pyar ..kasame bakwas hai ..kyo natik..

Nk-nhi ..I think ..pyar wo jannat hai jisse pake sab kush ho jatehai ..maito apni wife se bhut pyar karuga to saw akshu .who gavecutee smile nd flying kiss. .

Ri-tum to bade aadraswadi ho na ..khair ..aage chale .

More parts coming soon

Edited by ruchinaksh - 10 years ago

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Rit-hum yaha baith jate hai thodi der ..it was choti si hotel ...wer was butta ..waaw ..butta ...nk pls ...I want ..

Akshu felt like she will kill him ...now ..he was too much ..

Na-went ..again ...in shop ...pls give me ..ye sir kuch jayada hi smart ban rahe hai ...itna order to office mai bhi nhi chalate ..akshu ko bhut gussa aa raha hoga ..I know her nature...kahi kuch bol na de do ...

Here akshu said ..

Ak-wo mai aati hu thodi der mai ..wo Washroom ..

Ri-fine ..

She went in buttas shop ..chupte chupate ..but here is no rj ..

Ak-bhooo..

Nk-kon ...skkiped butta ...akshu ..mai dar gaya ..

Ak-tum to ho hi darpok ...ji sir haa sir ..iske alwa kuch aata hai ...aa gye butta lene ..

Nk-smile bura laga ..

Ak-aur nhi to kya ..

Nk-kyo ...smile ..

Ak-ab bhiya ..aap bataiye aapki wife ko kuch koi bolega to bura lagega na ..lill loud ..

Shopkeeper-ji ..lagega ..

Ak-yaha sabhi ..ap logo ko bhi lagega na ..

All-haa lagega ..

Ak-to ise koi samjhao ..ye wo h jisse mai pyar karti hu ..to mera hak hai na gussa karne ka ..

All-haa bilkul..

Ak-dekha ..

Natik gave smile ...pagal ho kya ..sshh ..chalo ..

Ak-haa ...hu tumhare pyar mai ..tum ..

Nk-tumse bhi jayada ..smile chalo..

Both r walking ..than akshu hold his hand went in side..

Nk-kya ..waha

Ak-kya bandar ...thoda time bhi spend nhi kar sakte dekho na kitna thanda mosam hai nd butta ..

Nk-oo ..ye bat hai ...both r eating butta only one ..from side swlly both came so close nd both cheeks touches to each ...nd felt magic of love nd ...borought his lips near to her ..she felt this moment ..nd touchs from side ..his lips ..but lill sound nd both throw empaty..butta ..

Nk-chale ..

Ak-sshh ..put her hand on his lips ..mera complete nhi hua ..

Nk-matlb ..

She penned him with wall ..

Ak-remember ..mango ..shaking his lips ..

Nk-hmm..smile ...bandariya jab dekho chipak jati ho ..

Both laugh at d same time. .

Nk-chalo late ho rahi h ..sir ..

She gave hug ...

Ak-nhi wo bhut bura hai ..tumhare upar kitna hukum chalata hai ...I dont like ...😡mera man kar raha hai I will kill him ..

Nk-pls ...wo essa nhi karte office mai yaha kuch jayada hii ab mai mana bhi kaise karu ..

Ak-uske hat pair kya kam nhi karte hai ..bas natik ye wo ..

Ak-tum pls mana karo ..

Nk-omg itna gussa ..

Ak-bhut bhut bhut ...mujhe esse log bilkul pasand nhi ..kitni galt thi mai ...

Nk-kyo ..

Ak-bas ..ek aamir handsome boy chahti thi ..aaj dono mai fark samaj aaraha hai .

Nk-tqq ..kuch to samjhi..

Ak-haa tqq god tumhe mujhe dene k liye ..I love u ..tum bhut aache ho ..agar ye rituraj essa hai to mujhe to bilkul pasand nhi ...mai tumhare ghar mai rahugi pyar to hoga .

Nk-hmm..wo esse hi hai ..jiddi ..kam ke pakke ..

Ak-uff ..chodo usse ..pls...

Nk-but chalna to hoga ..

Ak-hmm..

Than both went in near of table ..aage piche ..firatly akshu than nk.

Ri-bhut late kar di ..

Nk-wo time laga diya ..lo ..gave two butta..tum nk..

Ak-mujhe to nhi khana ..jo chahiye tha kha liya ..smirking nd saw to nk..

Nk-made face nd smile ..wo mai bhi nhi bas ..bhuk nhi ..

Ri-cant understands nd eat ...are akshu tumhari face pe ye kya??

Ak-hmm??

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