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Posted: 10 years ago
Raj-jab mai mar jaugi tab kar lena apni mannmani ..tu ..
Ak-maa nhi essa nhi hoga ..she turned her face ..pls bas ek bar meri bat sun lijiye ..mai natik se pyar karti hu I promise mai uske sath bhut kush rahugi ..pls mom ..mana mat kijiyega ..mom..no voice. .
She turn back ..nd saw rajshree is not here ..than she shouting mom..
She was on floor nd close her eyes..
Ak-mom pls ..ankh kholo ..pls ..mai apki puri bat manugi but pls ...than all came natik vish rituraj ..
Vis-kya hua ye ...akshu ki mom ..pls aap ..took her in his arms nd went in hospital ...all r so painc. .akshu was crying because all dis becoming for her ...
Ak-she saw in natiks eyes ..than she said mai aati hu ..went in cornour...wer someone touch her back ..
Na-akshu ..
Ak-I m sry natik ..maine mom se bola to unko gussa aa gaua ..
Na-bas ..maine bola tha na hadbad mai kuch mat karo par ..than both listen doctor voice nd went ..
Do-she is fine now thodi der mai hos aa jayga ..but unko koi tension hai pls koi shocked mat dijiyega ..warna unko jan ka khatra bhi ho sakta hai ..
Naksh was soo sad nd worried for her ..what is happening ..how dey will told all this talks in dis conditions. .
All went in room ..she was in sleep ..than doctor said for medicine ..rituraj firstly said natik was about to tell but he told first ...mai lata hu nd went ..
Vish was near to rajshree ...akshi was outside crying nd didnt tell anything to anyone than natik came nd hug her ..
From back..
Na-dekho paresan mat ho ..pls hum kuch to karege par har nhi manege..
Ak-sab meri galti ..but mai kya karu ..kuch samaj nhi aa raha hai ..mai apni family ko chachti hu par tumhe kho kar nhi ..aur tumhe bhi pana chachti hu par family ko kho kar nhi ..kya karu..
Na-pehle to haa bolo ..jab tak aunty thik na ho..
Ak-she truned ..nhi put her head On his chest. .
I love u ..I cant loose u ..
Na-nhi dekho mai kuch karuga ..hum sochege par esse har nhi manege ..
Ak-par ..kya ..broke hug..
Na'-abhi kuch din do pls tum bhi socho ..
Ak-pakka ...
Na-tum meri ho mai tumhara ..bas yahi janta hu ..
Ak-mai bhi ..
Na-trust karti ho na ..
Ak-Kud se jayada ..
Na-to I promise mai tumhe kisi ka nhi hone dunga ..
Ak-essa hua na to mai bhag jaugi ..
Na-chup ..put his hand on her lips..sshh..essa mat bolo apne mom dad ke bare mai socho pls..
Ak-hmm..mai apne aap to kisi ko nhi hone dungi sirf tumhara hi wo hak h ..mujhe wada karo ..
He saw her cutly eyes nd her innocent face ..which made her that he didnt wNt to loose her ..so he stalled his lips on her ..this was surprised kiss to her ..she didnt do separate to her ..nd tasted his lips with resonde nd he came so close to her ..both closed each eyes. .
She want to his so ..she felt her breath she shaking her lips ..nd kiss becoming more passionate. ...both broke their kiss..
Both hug to each ..
Na-dekha hum esse hi sath rahege ..koi tumhe mujhse nhi chin sakta ..
Ak-I love u ..
Than both listen akshi dad voice ..
Ak-natik ..dad..
Na-kya?????
So guys I know this was lill boring part ..but I try that my syrory become interesting ..pls press like button if u like this part nd gave comments. .I m waiting ..sry for mistakes nd instalment mai update karne k liye..
Precap-akshu thought idea ...😎
Edited by ruchinaksh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wowww wowww kya part tha and kya twist...
ak ko kya se kya banaadi and nk ko bhi
hehhe
but cute wid ak angry nk manana..
and bechari rj...
but but naksh kisss omggg...
and precap mein 😎 eheh
bas life mein jitni bhi probs kyun na ho sab ka solution hoti hain shutty..
never loose hope...
i imagined naksh kiss 😳
update soon...
Edited by --pranu-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update gappu :)
rituraj's entry to spice up the story...interesting...
and akshara ka gussa hona iss too good...
hope naitik tell everyone about their relation...
last but not the least...
that kiss wass amazing...
well done...
****/5
Edited by hirannaksh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
my comment on page 67 is updated...☺️
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Posted: 10 years ago
Noo, this part was not boring why are you saying like this . Yeh mei prem ki deewani hoon movie wala twist was not expected .

Ak ka gussa omg sab kuch tod diya, nk usse smjhate smjhate tired ho gya. rj faints, but rr nk ka boss kyu hai why...
Hospital me kiss ??
I mean how ... Itne serious situation mei bhi
Koi jgah to chod de ruchi.
nakshkidiwani thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
wowww wowww kya part tha and kya twist...
ak ko kya se kya banaadi and nk ko bhi
hehhe
but cute wid ak angry nk manana..
and bechari rj...
but but naksh kisss omggg...
and precap mein 😎 eheh
bas life mein jitni bhi probs kyun na ho sab ka solution hoti hain shutty..
never loose hope...
i imagined naksh kiss 😳
update soon...
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Aww I m speechless☺️ aww Tqq for liking this part nd gave lovly cutee mast mola comments I loved it ...
Yup harna nhi bas samna karna hai problems ka ..yaiee u liked story ..I m hpy ..imagine karne k liye hi I wrote na .
I will do update next part soon. .princy😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part
rituraj entry spicd up ff
and both are shocjed ab kahi akshi shadi ke han na karde
akshu ka ziddi aur gusse wala nature very good socha na thaak
Ka aisa nature
ab mujhe pata laga tumhe itna time kyun laga iss ff mein update dene mein
but plz continue next part sion
nakshkidiwani thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hirannaksh

lovely update gappu :)
rituraj's entry to spice up the story...interesting...
and akshara ka gussa hona iss too good...
hope naitik tell everyone about their relation...
last but not the least...
that kiss wass amazing...
well done...
****/5

Tqq tqq tqq so much sona☺️ for liking this part nd gave true nd lovly sweet comments ..kya bolu ab yr tqq is small..aww naksh ko to thoda alg hona banta h na ..aww u liked kiss how sweet ..
Tqq so much for stars 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nairaksh

Noo, this part was not boring why are you saying like this . Yeh mei prem ki deewani hoon movie wala twist was not expected .

Ak ka gussa omg sab kuch tod diya, nk usse smjhate smjhate tired ho gya. rj faints, but rr nk ka boss kyu hai why...
Hospital me kiss ??
I mean how ... Itne serious situation mei bhi
Koi jgah to chod de ruchi.

Aww how sweet tqq tqq tqq so much forur comments ..are haa I didnt remember that movie ..I thought that sadi wedding dikhane mai kya maja thoda pyar ke liye fight to banti hai na ..☺️ aww u didnt like to I will not write kiss oki ..I will do update next part soon nidhi 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SA-SIMRAN

Nice part
rituraj entry spicd up ff
and both are shocjed ab kahi akshi shadi ke han na karde
akshu ka ziddi aur gusse wala nature very good socha na thaak
Ka aisa nature
ab mujhe pata laga tumhe itna time kyun laga iss ff mein update dene mein
but plz continue next part sion

Aww Tqq tqq tqq so much simi for liking this part nd gave comments. .aww jo na socho wo padne mai maja aata hai na ..I write earlly simi u gave late comments ..I will do update next part soon. ..😳long parts na so gavelate

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