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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ruchigarg

Waaw sonal I like a lot this part vry vry well written ...pls pls update next part tomorrow. ..everything is perfect😉

thank u ruchi dear..but my story is not so good like u..i really love that..
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Posted: 10 years ago
itna w8 karake ek bhi naksh proper scene nahi mila 😭
but ha part was so nice naitik became over excited and over confident...
but atlast popat hogaya... 🤣
tqqq so much for updating crying baby... 😊
update soon when u have time...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hinusha

itna w8 karake ek bhi naksh proper scene nahi mila😭

but ha part was so nice naitik became over excited and over confident...
but atlast popat hogaya...🤣
tqqq so much for updating crying baby...😊
update soon when u have time...

thank u happu..
aree mai naksh bonding dikhaungi..par thoda wait toh karo..itni jaldi kaise dikhaaungi..
accha next part pakka dedicated to u..jo tum chaho..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hirannaksh

thank u happu..
aree mai naksh bonding dikhaungi..par thoda wait toh karo..itni jaldi kaise dikhaaungi..
accha next part pakka dedicated to u..jo tum chaho..

i will w8 for it...
i want nakshcilious epi with their cute bonding talks and adjusting with each other and understanding each other likes and all... but ha all in 1 part is difficult... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hinusha


i will w8 for it...
i want nakshcilious epi with their cute bonding talks and adjusting with each other and understanding each other likes and all... but ha all in 1 part is difficult...😊

ho jyega
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
no pls pls 😆
aur ha naksh ki bonding dheere dheere karwaao with every enjoying second... okeiii😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hinusha


no pls pls😆
aur ha naksh ki bonding dheere dheere karwaao with every enjoying second... okeiii😊

nahi kal me unki solid wali bonding karwa doongi..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hirannaksh

nahi kal me unki solid wali bonding karwa doongi..

haa madam i mean solid bonding hua tho bhi dey are ajnabi to each other only na... dey dont know each other properly na build their cute relation bonding slowly i am saying i hope u understood????
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART 10..
akshara open that bags and her happiness changes itno shock..so as naitik
ak-naitik ye kya hai ?
nk-akshara sach me mujhe nahi pata..
there is a one short n a sleevlees top..
ak-ye itna chota..ye sab aapne liya hai ?
nk-ammm..akshara ye maine..aap aisa kijiye doosra bag dekh lijiye
ak-theek hai
she opens the next bag..and
ak(angrily)-ab dekhe isme kya hai..
again they became embarrased..the two piece bikini..
ak(shocked)-naitik ye sab..ye sab aapne liya hai..mai ye sab nahi pehenti..cheee..bikini
nk(st)- aree pehen lengi toh mai bura nahi maanuga..
ak-naitik bataiye naa ye sab kya hai..
nk-akshara mujhe nahi pata..wo mai..mai
ak-kya aap bakri ki tarah mai mai kar rahe hai..apni biwi ko koi aise gift lakar deta hai..
nk-i am sorry akshara..par..
ak-kya par ?
nk-aap aur bags dekhiye naa.shayad usme kuh pehenne ke liye mil jaye..
ak-agar agle bag me kuch na mila toh..toh
nk-toh kya ?
ak-aapko aapka gift nahi milega..
nk-pls akhara ye koi baat nahi hui..aap aisa ahi karengi..
ak-wo toh next bag se pata chalega..
she was about to open when naitik stop her..
nk-agla bag mai kholunga..
ak-ok
she gave that bag to naitik..
naitik slightly open that bag..but again quickly close it
nk-ammm..aisa karte hai hum aur koi bag dekhte hai..
ak-par isme kya problem hai.?
nk(st)-pls akshara aapne ise dekha toh aap mere baare me kya kya sochengi..ki mai kitna despo hu
nk-aaa..pls akshara..
ak-nahi mujhe aabhi ise dekhna hai
she snatched it from him
nk-akshara
she happily open that bag..and after that she gave a glare look to naitik..but he was not able meet his eyes to her..
ak-naitik..ye aapne..
nk-...
ak-naitik ye sab aapne pasand kiya hai..sach sach boliyega
nk-acctually akshara..i am sorry..wo maine ye sab ek ladki se kaha tha..ki wwo aapke liye..
ak-theek hai..par aap wo list de dete
nk-akshara wo list mujhse kho gayi thi..
ak-toh aap phone kar lete..
nk-maine socha ki aapko surprise donga
ak(smile)- aapne toh mujhe accha khasa surprise de diya..ye short dress..ye bikni..au ye..inner wear set..baap re..
nk-akshara..i am sorry
ak-its ok naitik..laiye ab aur bags bhi dekti u..par darr lag raha hai ki aage kahi khali bag na ho..
nk-akshara pls..aap mera u mazak mat udaiye..waise hi mujhe itna bura lag raha hai..aur aap
ak-acccha mai sorry..ye sab jane dete hain ab mai aapka gift dekhti hu..
but naitik stop her..
ak-kya hua ?
nk-kuch nahi..bas aap ye gift mat dekhiye
ak-kyu ? aap itne pyaar se laye hai ise th mai zaroor dekhungi..
naitik quickly got up from sofa..
nk(angrily)-theek hai jaisi aapki marzi..aapko jo dekhna hai wo dekhiye..mai room me jaa raha hu
and he went from there
ak-aree naitik suniye toh..
but he was not in a mood
ak-koi baat nahi room me jakar happy ho jayenge..tab tak mai inka gift toh dekh lu..
she open that packet and found a black ccolour nighty..and beccame shy
ak-thank u naitik..mujhe aapka ye gift bahut accha laga..she hugged her gift..
here naitik came in the room..and found everything change..
nk-aree ye akshara ne poora room change kar diya..not bad..actually i like it..same like my choice..thanks akshara..aapne mera aur sundar bana diya..mann kar raha hai aapko abhi ek gift de du..par abhi mai aapse gussa hu..isliye aapse baat nahi karoonga..tab tak jab tak aap khud mujhe manane nahi aati..
good nite my love..and switch off the lights.
Edited by hirannaksh - 10 years ago

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