FF.. # Mere Humsafar # chapter 23/131

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HELLO my friends..

</div>i am SONAL...and i am going to write an ff...hope u all like it...sorry i know...i am not good in writing...but want to try it..hope u all give ur comments..and reviews on it...thanks...so my ff name is... " MERE HUMSAFAR "<div>
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Posted: 10 years ago
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INDEX...

chapter 1- page 1..
cahpter 2- page 2..
chapter 3- page 7..
chapter 4- page 9..
chapter 5- page 13..
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chapter 6- page 17..
chapter 7- page 20
chapter 8- page 24.
chapter 9 page 28
chapter 10 page 33
chapter 11 page 34
chapter 12 page 38
chapter 13 page 45
chapter 14 page 49
chapter 15 page 56
chaper 16 page 64
chapter 17 page 68
chapter 18 page 76
chapter 19 page 85
chapter 20 page 100
chapter 21 page 109
chapter 22 page 121
chapter 23 page 131
Edited by hirannaksh - 10 years ago
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This story is about a loving family...of two daughters...AKSHARA and SNEHA...both sisters love each other very much...their parents..VISHAMBHAR AND RAJSHRI MAHESHWARI always love their both daughters equally...akshara and sneha are an apple of their parents eye...so i am going to start a cute love triange story...
CHAPTER...1...
IN MORING..
rajshri calling her two lazy daughters...
rj-sneha !!!!... akshara...!!!! beta ab oth uth jao..dekho subah bhi khatam hone wali aur din shuru hone wala hai...chalo utho...
by her voice akshara quickly got up...
ak- ji maaa...!!!! hum abhi aate hain
akshara start getting ready for breakfast...but sneha is still sleeping...
ak- di ???? jaldi se utho warna maa hame maar dalengi..
sn-pls yaar thodi der toh sone de..
ak-jitna bhi chahe yaha mazee se so lo..par jab sasuraal me subah subah utna hoga..tab jakar pata chalega...
sn-ji nahi..mai toh aise ghar me jaungi..jaha par sirf mai aur mera husband hoga..family wamily se mujhe kuch nahi lena dena..
ak- accha ji ab apne sapno se bahar niklo..aur jaldi se uth jao...
she poured a water mug on her..
sn-uff !!! akshara tu na hamesha aise hi karti hai...behen ji...
ak-kya karu di...mai aapki tarah smart nahi hu...par ha aapse zyada intelligent zaroor ho..
sn-intelligent aur tu...????
ak-hmm..!!!
both start smiling seeing eachother..and quikly hugs...
sn-meri pyaari behen..i love u...
ak- i love u tooo di..
akshara and sneha came in hall for their breakfast..
and as always rajshri is upset with them..they came and hug her..
sn-sorry maa...
ak-ha maa...we are very sorry...
rj-bas karo tum dono..bas hamesha sorry bol deti ho..aur baat khatam...aisa kab tak chalega..
ak- jab tak hamari pyaari ma hame maaf nahi kar deti...
"par aapki maa aapse kabhi naraaz hi nahi hoti hai beta..." vishambhar said..
ak- bau ji...
she came and hugs him too...
vi-hamari dono betiyaan hum dono ko jaan hai...aur ye dono hamari princess hai..
rj-ji..aur aapki ye dono betiyaan aapki wajah se bigdi hai...
vi-koi baat nahi...samay aane par ye bhi samajdaar ho jayengi...
vi-chaliye usse pehle aap dono naashta kar lijiye..
vish and rj sat with them on breakfast table...
when vishambhar announce something...
vi- to rj...ji aaj hamare ghar ek ladka aane wala hai..
akshara and sneha become shocked...
rj-ladka..ji kyu...???
vi- ab hamari dono betiyaan badi ho gayi hain..aur unki padhai bhi poori hi gayi hai...toh ab inki shadi bhi toh karni hi hai na...
rj -ji aapne toh mere mann ki baat cheen li..mai kabse aapse ye baat karna chahti thi..ki ab hame sneha ki shadi karwa deni chahiye..
on this sneha got angry..
sn- par mujhe koi shadi nahi karni...
rj and vish became shocked so as akshara...
rj-par isme kharabi kya hai..
sn-mujhe abhi shadi karke ghar me nahi baithna..abhi toh mujhe apna future banana hai..aur shadi phir bacche..no...i am not ready for this..
vi-par beta ladka bahut accha hai..aur sabse acchi baat ki aapki har iccha ko poora karega...
sn-mai kuch nahi janti hu bau ji..agar aapko shadi karni hai toh aap akshara ki shadi karwa dijiye..par mai nahi..
rj-ye kaisi baate kar rahi hai tu...badi behen ke hote hum choti ki shadi kaise kara sakte hain...
sn-maa pls...!!!!
she quickly ran towards her room...
rj ( angrily )- bahut dimaag kharab ho gaya hai iss ladki ka...
ak- maa..pls aap chinta mat kijiye mai di ko samjhaungi..
vi-theek hai akshara...aap jakar use samjhaiye..aur asha karte hai ki wo iss baar hamari baat sunegi...
ak-ji bau ji..
akshara too went behind her..
IN HER ROOM..
sneha start crying badly..when akshara came in the room...
sn- akshara pls...tu kuch kar na...mujhe ye shadi nahi karni...
ak-di aakhir prblem kya hai...jab bau ji ne khud hi kaha hai..ki ladka bahut accha hai..toh phir kya hua...??? aap yahi toh chahti thi naa...
sn- jo bhi hai..par pls tu..
ak- nahi..jab tak tum mujhe poori baat nahi bataogi...mai kuch nahi karne wali...
sn- akshara tujhe wo form yaad hai..jo maine modeling ke liye diya tha...
ak- haa...toh..???
sn- akshara aaj shaam ko uska audition hai..aur mujhe wo miss nahi karna hai...
ak ( laughing ) - bas itni si baat hai..
sn- tujhe ye itni si baat lagti hai...
ak- haa.
sn-bas kar..
ak- aree nahi di..sach me...aap maa bau ji se baat kar lijiye..problem solve...
sn-pagal hai kya..mai aur bau ji se baat karu wo bhi modeling ke liye..never...
ak- to phir aap apne sapne ko bhool hi jaiye..
sn- aise kaise bhool jau..kabhi nahi..
ak-toh phir aap kya karengi..????
sn-jo bhi karoongi tu mera saath degi naa...????
ak-ye bhi koi poochne ki baat hai...hamesha..meri jaan bhi aapke liye haazir hai...
sn-toh theek hai wada kar..aaj se mai jo kuch bhi kahoongi..tu khushi khushi usme meri baat maanegi...
ak-ha di..wada raha...
sn-toh aaj shaam meri jagah uss ladke se tu milegi..
ak ( shocked )- what ??????
sn-haa..aur mai jaungi apne audition me...
ak-par di..aap toh jaanti hain..ki kisi ke saamne mai nahi bol pati..
sn-par aaj tum bologi..
ak-aur uss ladke ne meri shakal dekh li toh...
sn-tu uske saamne ghoonghat karke jana...
ak-aur maa bau ji ne dekh liya toh...
sn- uski chinta tu mat kar wo sab mai plan kar loongi..bas tu mere saare sawal uss ladke se pooch lena..aur agar wo usme paas ho gaya...toh shayad mai usse shadi bhi kar lu...
ak-ok...
sn-good...aur haaa.. bau ji uss ladke ka naam kya bataya hai..??
ak- naam ????? haa yaad aaya NAITIK SINGHANIA...
sn-hmmm..so mr. naitik singhania..ab dekhna ye hai ki aap mere kaabil hai ya nahi..????
ak- kyu nahi hoga di...bau ji ne pasand kiya hai..aur aapko pata hai..bau ji ne sab kuch aapki choice ke hisaab se hi dekha hai...
sn- accha wo kaise ???
ak-wo aise..ki mr. naitik bahut hi rich hain...aur unki koi family bhi nahi hai...ha ke sister hai NANDINI..par unki bhi shadi ho gayi hai...so ab unhe bhi ek humsafar ki talaash hai...
sn-ohhh..!!!! introduction toh accha hai..par ab dekhna ye hai ki usme bhi koi dum hai ya nahi..???
ak-zaroor hoga...bau ji ne aapke liye jo pasand kiya hai..toh aa[pko toh use pasand karna hi hoga..
sn-wait !!! wait !!! wait !!! my lovely sister..use mujhe nahi tumhe pasand karna hain wo bhi mere liye..aur ha agar wo mujhe pasand na aa aaya..toh tab tu uske baare me soch lena..ok..
ak-kya di aap bhi...
and both hugs each other...
PRECAP...NAIITIK SINGHANIA CAME TO SEE HIS WOULD BE WIFE...AND AKSHARA SNEHA KI PLANNING...
so friends this is the starting of my story..
hope its enjoyable enough for u alll
i promise will give u a cute story with this...
thanks for reading this...
waiting for ur comment...
Edited by hirannaksh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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uuhhhooo all I can say after reading part 1 is k seems pretty interesting!!!! plz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: avinaksh

uuhhhooo all I can say after reading part 1 is k seems pretty interesting!!!! plz continue soon

thank u sooo much avi for ur beautiful comment...hope u will like it more..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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only one comment
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nobody likes it
hai kya ?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Waaw sonal ur both ffs is really cute dont say that u r not a good writer u r vry strong writer thabhi to ur both ff is vry different keep it up vry nic part waiting for next pls update soon ur both ff all d best
Congoo for two ff
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: hirannaksh

only one comment
not a single like
nobody likes it
hai kya ?
:(

heyy sonal dont say like dat...
yuppie this story intro was also nice...
fresh different cute story...
nice start waiting for next...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: hinusha


heyy sonal dont say like dat...
yuppie this story intro was also nice...
fresh different cute story...
nice start waiting for next...😊

thank u pranusha
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Posted: 10 years ago
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U dont like my comment sonal😕

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