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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 4
IN CANTEEN
antra saw who was sitting on a corner table
an -hey naitik tum wahan baithkar kya kar rahe ho ,hamare saath aakar baitho
nk - theek hai aata hu he just came and sit beside akshara
vr - akele kya kar rahe the waha par
nk - notes likh raha tha socha ki kuch notes ready kar lu warna to mai kaafi peeche reh jaoonga , waise tum log yaha kya kar rahi thi
an - games khel rahe the ,areey buddhu canteen hai to kuch khane hi aaye honge na
nk - ha , vaise rr kaha hai ak
ak - vo ghar gaya hai keh raha tha uske dad ne use bulaya hai ,vaise tum to jante hi hoge na ki uske dad kitne strict hai , uske ghar me jo rehte ho kyu ?
nk - in a sad tone , ha ak mai janta hu ki uncle thora strict hai but dil ke bahut sweet hai aur jahan tak saath rehne ki baat hai mere mom dad ki death ke baad se hi mai rr aur uncle ke saath hu ,infact vo to mujhe apna dusra beta mante hain
ak - sorry nk i am very sorry if i hurt u
nk - its ok ak friends ke beech no sorry
theek hai to mai jata hu aur dekta hu rr ki kya problem hai , bye everyone & he goes from there
an - nk kitna sweet hai na kaash vo mujhe mik jaye
ak & vr - tu to rehne hi de vo bilkul tere type ka nahi hai
an - janti hu par pata nahi kyu i like him
IN RITURAAJ'S HOME
yaha rr apne phone calls ki wajah se depression e idhar udhar ghoom raha hota hai
tabhi nk wahan aata hai
nk -yaar kahan tha tu kabse tera phona laga raha hu
rr - kya batau bhai aaj to mai ara samjho
nk - kyu dad ne kuch kaha kya , ak ne bataya tha tujhe unka phone aaya tha
rr - nahi yaar vo to maine ak se jhoot bola tha , khair vo jane de
nk - theek hai ab bata kya hua
rr- tujhe meri vo shimla wali gf yaad hai bindiya
nk - ha to
rr - vo uska phone tha keh rahi thi ki uske dad mere dad se hamari shaadi ki baat karne aa rahe hai
nk - kya , par tune kya kaha
rr - maine ha karke unhe kal bula liya ,par ab mai kya karu
nk - maine tujse pehle hi kaha tha ya to tu bindiya ko bata de ya phir ak ko par nahi tujhe to meri ek nahi sunna hai , ab mar
rr - nahi yaar mai ak ko nahi bhool sakta dekha nahi vo kitni rich ,hot & beautiful hai ,college me saare log mujse jalte hai mai ye kaise jane do
nk - to tu bhi to kitna rich hai mere bhai
rr - ha hun par mai dad ke paise par nahi jeene chahta yaar ,khair mujhe iss bare me koi baat nahi karni hai . i will manage everything
nk - to theek hai kal akshara ka bday aur bindiya ke dad ke saath meeting dono manage kar lena ok
rr - shocked kya , kya kaha tune ak ka bday oh shit ! ye mai kaise bhool gaya aur vo bhi uska first bday jo vo mere saath manayegi ,
usne mujhe bataya tha phir bhi mai bhool gaya
nk - very good ab phasa reh dono ke beeh me ya phir kar apni meeting cancel
rr - vo to mai nahi kar sakta warna dad mujhe maar dalenge itni mushkil se unhe manaya hai
nk - to phir tu kya karega
rr - idea
nk - kya ???
PRECAP - akshara is waiting for rituraj from last two hours and she starts crying .
Edited by rainanaksh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Nice part raina.. keep continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Please update next part
Awesomely written
Keep it up
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

Nice part raina.. keep continue

thank u dear
Edited by rainanaksh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nakshiranridz

Please update next part
Awesomely written
Keep it up


thanks thanks dear for liking it
Edited by rainanaksh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
PART 5
rr - mere bhai tu aisa kar akshara se koi jhoot bol de mere liye
nk - jhoot aur mai nahi bilkul nahi
rr - pls yaar
nk - nahi
rr - theek hai tu jhoot mat bolna bas use sach mat batana
nk - ok
NEXT MORNING
akshara is sleeping peacefully and alarm rings
ak - aaj ke din to chain se so loon
at 7 PM hey bhagwaan mujhe to mandir jana hai rr mera wait kar raha hoga
akshara gets ready for temple in a beautiful red saaree with a elegent make up and in open long hair
she reached temple at 8 PM
ak - yahan to rr kahi nahi hai , zaror hi mere liye koi surprise hoga .she was blushing while thinking about rr
ak 9 PM tak rr ka wait karti hai
ak - aur kitni der rr ab to aa jao , vo kiitni baar rr ko phone karti hai par koi javab nahi aata
then she starts crying badly
ak - kyu tumne aisa kia rr kyu
tabhi ak saamne se nk ko aate dekti hai aur uske paas jati hai
ak - nk tumhe pata hai ki rr kahan hai
nk - nahi mai nahi janta
tabhi ak ke pass rr ka phone aata hai
ak - hello rr tum kaha ho yaha kyu nahi aaye
rr - sorry ak actually mere dad ki beemeri ke chalte unhe delhi lekar aa gaya , lekin agar tum chaho to mai shaam tak aa jata hu
ak - nahi rr tum uncle ke pass raho mera bday to hum kabhi bhi mana sakte hai
rr - ha ,ok bye ak doctor bula rahe hai
ak -bye rr with a teary eyes
nk - tum ro mat ak rr jald hi aa jayega
ak - shayad tum theek keh rahe ho rone se kya faida, mai ghar jati hu nk bye
suddenly nk holds akshara's pallu
nk - mandir aayi ho to god se prayer bhi kar lo
ak - kya zaroorat hai nk koi saath bhi to ho
nk - mai hu na akshara mere saath bhi to prayer kar sakti ho
ak -to chale prayer karne
naksh takes their blessings together in temple and return from there
ak -bye naitik
nk - ak mujhe tumse kuch kehna tha
ak -mujhse kya nk
nk -actually mujhe ek anath ashram jana tha vo uncle ne mujhe kuch poor bacchon ke liye gifts diye hai ,mai yaha naya hu isliye yaha ke baare me mujhe kuch nahi pata , kya tum mere saath chalogi ,if u are free
ak - ha free to hu par
nk -ha to pls chalo mere saath
ak -theek hai vaise tum aaye kisse ho
nk - apni bike se
ak -bike se vaise mai bike par kabhi nahi baithi na isliye
nk - koi nahi aaj baith jao
ak sat with nk on bike but she was very uncomfortable on it so she hold nk very tightly
ak -nk mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai
nk -kuch nahi haga ak mujhpe bharosa hai na
ak -bharosa hai tabhi to tumhe apna pakka dost mana hai
they reached at asharam and doing lots of fun with children playing,dancing with them like a child .nk gave all the gifts to the children
after that they return from there at 5 PM
ak - accha nk ab to mujhe ghar drop kar do pls varna bahut late ho jayega
nk -ak pls mere saath ek aur jagah chalo mujhe waha bahut hi important kaam hai ls
ak - par mai kyu jaoon
nk -dosti ki khaatir hi chalo ,nk put his hand in front of ak
ak -ok ,and she holds nk hands
nk -chalo
naitik takes akshara to sea sight
ak -nk hum yaha kyu aaye hain
nk -vo mai ...ak tum wait karo mai abhi aata hu
ak -par nk suno to
but nk goes from there after some time a voice calling from behind
akshara
ak peeche dekhti hai
ak - antara tum yaha
an -ha vo mai yaha ghumne aayi thi btw happy bday yaar soncha ki aaj tumhe disturb na karoon tumhe apne lover ke saath rehne du
ak -thanks
an -to kya kia aaj tune
ak -kuch khass nahi subah temple gayi, phir asharam aur ab yaha hu tere saamne
an -to aakhir rr ne teri har ek wish poori kar hi di ,tujhe yahi sab to chahiye tha na tere bday ke liye ,maine tujhse kaha tha ki rr tujhse kitna pyaar karta hai jo tere liye kuch bhi kar sakta hai ,accha tu ab apne lover ke saath time apna romantic time spend kar mai chali
ak -par an meri baat to sun
and an bhi waha se chali jati hai
ak - kya antara jo kehker gayi sach hai ,i mean yeh sab hi to maine apne bday ke liye manga tha aur meri saari wish poori hui ,par poori bhi kisne ki ??
ak -kya nk ko sab kuch pata tha
here nk come with a lots of gifts and a cake
nk - ye lijiye akshara ji ye aapke liye
ak -angrilly ,ye sab mere liye kyu laye ho nk
nk -ak vo mai
ak -mai janti hu -kyu kar rahe ho mujhpar ehsaan
nk - ehsaan ! nahi ak
ak - mujhe pata hai ye sab tum mujhe mere bday par khush karne ke liye kar rahe ho na ,ye gifts ye cake kyu
she takes all the gifts from nk and threw it away and walked from there
then nk holds her hand and said " ruko akshara"
i want to show u something

PRECAP ak rr ke dad ko agle hi din ek shop par milti hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice one.. naksh on the bike good.. precap looks like akshara gets to know about the truth of rr.. continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

Nice one.. naksh on the bike good.. precap looks like akshara gets to know about the truth of rr.. continue soon

thanks dear for your comment i always waiting for your beautiful comments
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 6
nk- mai tumhe kuch dikhana chahta hu ak
ak- kya dikhana chahte ho nk ki tum kabhi bhi kisi ko khush kr sakte ho apne dost ke kehne par
nk- nahi ak tumne mujhse dosti to kar li par shayad vishwaas nahi kia ,mai hamesha apne dil ki karta hu
ak- vishwaas kia tha tum par varna tuhare saath yaha na hoti par tumne hi use toda hai
nk- nahi ak ye dekho ye gifts ye cake iss par kya likha hai
ak unhe dekhti hai " always keep smiling" dekhkar vo rone lagti hai
nk- shayad tumne dekha nahi ki inpar kya likha hai hamesha muskurate raho ,pls ak ab ro mat
ak- theek hai nahi roti ab chalo cake cut karte hai aur waise bhi mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai
both ak and nk cut the cake and feed eachother
nk- chalo ak mai tumhe ghar drop kar deta hu waise bhi baarish hone waali hai
ak- pls nk kya hum kuch der yaha baith sakte hai
nk- ok as ur wish
ak- to chalo nk hum us boat par chalte hai
there was a small boat under a tree near the beach where both sat next to eachother
ak- ye shant jagah kitni pyaari lagti hai na
nk -hmmm
ak- tumhe bhi aisi jagah pasand hai
nk- ha jab bhi mai apne mom dad ko miss karta hu to aisi hi kisi jagah jata hu
ak- bahut akela mehsoos karte hoge na
nk -hmmm
ak- mujhe bhi lagta hai par iss baat ki kushi hai ki koi meri itni parwaah karta hai
nk's face lightens up
ak- rr uska pyaar mujhe saari kusiyaan deta hai
vaise nk tum kisi ko pasand karte ho kya?q
nk- kyu
ak- bas aise hi ab dost ke baare me sab kuh pata to hona chahiye na
nk- waqt aane par tumhe zaroor pata chal jayega ak
ak- ???
then nk realises some waterdropes on his face
nk- chalo ak baarish start ho gayi
suddenly they got up and again ak slips in nk's arm they both fell in the boat akshara is completely over nk and nk hands on akshara's waist
tabhi baarish tez ho jati hai aur dono bheeg jate hai
nk and ak both in awkward position
ak waha se utkar apni saaree ko theek karti hai aur kehti hai
ak- sorry nk ye meri saree bhi na pehli baar pehni thi to phass gayi aur mai gir gayi
nk- ( still feel some awkerdness) its ok ak hota hai, chale
ak- hmmm
ON BIKE
both are silent after that incident
after some time
nk- ak tum theek to ho
ak- ha nk mai theek hu
nk- thand to nahi lag rahi
ak- nahi
nk saw ak through mirror while she was shiviring
nk- ak tumhe nahi par mujhe bahut thand lag rahi hai mai aisa karta hu ki pass me hi ek shop hai waha chalte hai aur kapde change kar leta hu actually mujhe cold bahut jaldi ho jata hai
ak- shimla me rehker bhi cold tab to tumhe pure saal cold rehta hoga
nk- very funny ha ha ha
ak- theek hai nk jaldi chalo mujhe ghar bhi jana hai
nk and ak reached at the shop
where nk select a shirt and jeans for him
nk- mai change karke aata hu
ak- jaldi aana
kuch der baad nk aata hai
but ak is still shiviring
nk- ak pls tum kapde change kar lo varna fever ho jayega
ak- par nk mai apna purse nahi laayi hu
nk-in angry tone mai bhi paise de sakta hu itna to hai mere pass
ak- sorry nk jati hu
akshara choose a top and jeans and went to the changing room
idhar nk payment ke liye jata hai
here ak
ak- nk kaha gaya zaroor paise dene gaya hoga tabhi vo ek person se takraa jati hai
ak- sorry uncle maine dekha nahi
man - its ok beta maine hi aapko nahi dekha
ak is shocked to see him
ak- aap
man- tum mujhe jaanti ho
ak- ji unlce aap rr ke dad hai
man- yes
ak- par aap to
man- kya beta
tabhi nk payment karke waha aata hai aur ak aur rr ke dad ko saath dekta hai
ak unse kuch kehne jati hai tabhi
"dad " nk unhe peeche se bulata hai
man - nk beta tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?
ak is still in shock
nk- inse miliye dad ye meri aur rr ki dost hai ak
man- hello ak u r a very sweet girl
ak- thank u uncle
accha beta mai chalta hu mujhe apne doston se milna hai bye
vo nk ke sar par hands rakhkar kehte hai" good choice beta"
nk shocked
ak- ye sab kya tha nk koi mujhe batayega
nk- ak vo mai ??
PRECAP - ak slaps rr in canteen and nk said sorry to her
Edited by rainanaksh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey raina please update soon love to see ak slaps rr for his mistake

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