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Jaishrikrishna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

again superb grt ff n ya preacap seems good just like ak waiting for natik i am also eagley waiting for ur next update keep writing

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raina verma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Nakshiranridz
Awesome part
Please update next part as early as possible

thanks dear and i will update soon

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raina verma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: neeru84
again superb grt ff n ya preacap seems good just like ak waiting for natik i am also eagley waiting for ur next update keep writing

thank u dear for liking it

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Nakshian4ver

@Nakshian4ver

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

i rarely visit forum these days as i find nthng much interesting bt loved ur ff

update soon so that i will come ol lol😆

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raina verma

@NAKSHMYJAAN

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

PART 12
NEXT DAY
IN EVENING
akshara is wearing her dress and jwellery for her egagement
vr- itni sundar dikh rahi hai par chehre par ye udaasi kaisi..thora to has de
an- kaisi kushi isse to tension ho rahi hogi kyu ak?
ak- nahi yaar tum dono bhi na..accha batao mai kaisi dikh rahi hu?
vr and an -beautiful
ak- thanks..ab chale hotel varna late ho jayenge
ha kyu nahi..and trio went to hotel..
here rr is worry about nk
rr -ye nk bhi na pata nahi kaha gaya ? usse kitna kaha tha ki bhai mere saath chalna par nahi..ab to phone bhi nahi lag raha..
rr dad- beta jaldi chalo hotel
rr - ha dad aata hu and he also went to hotel
rr and ak both reach hotel on time and looking each other
rr- wow ak u looks gorgeous
ak- tum bhi kafi handsome lag rahe ho
rr- tabhi to hum ek duje ke liye perfect hai
ak-hmmm..vaise rr nk kaha hai ?
rr- pata nahi kaha gaya..par vo zaroor time par aa jayega
ak- mai abhi aati hu and goes from there
she is waiting for nk to come and try to call him many times but no answer
kaha ho nk tum..pls jaldi se aa jao
tabhi pandit ji rr aur ak ko stage par bulate hain
pandit apne mantron ko padhkar dono ko rings pehnane ko kehte hai tabhi
ak- rr pls abhi thora ruk jate hai nk ko aa jane dete ha
rr -par ak tum chinta mat karo vo aa jayega
ak-hmmm..while continously looking at main door
they both exchange their rings and everybody is very happy for them.
all are come together for dancing...rr put his hand for ak to dance with him..she was about to put her hand but quickly a big smile passes on her face..nk ! and she suddenly runs from there
ak- nk tum kaha chale gaye the?
nk- mujhe kuch kaam tha
ak- kya?
nk- yahi ki mai tumhare liye kuch gift lene gaya tha
ak- gift ? par mere liye...
rr- hey nk kaha tha tu
while talking both nk and rr went from there
ak- par mere liye to tumhari kushi hi sabse bada gift hai nk..
in engagement all couples are dancing together..so as ak and rr
nk was standing in a corner watching them
tabhi antara waha aati hai
an- yaha kya kar rahe ho nk chalo na dance kare
nk- mera maan nahi hai
an- chalo na...she holds his hand and take him on dance floor
ak with rr and an ith nk..
while dancing ak and nk continuosly watching eachother..
just then rr starting kisses ak on her ears and then neck..she started to feel uncomfortable with it ..she tried to push him but could'nt..he was holding her more tightly..nk could'nt bear this...
nk ak ko uncomfortable dekhkar gussa ho jata hai..vo ak ko aise nahi dekh pata..tabhi nk ek waiter ko drink le jate hue dekhta hai aur use dhakka de deta hai...saath hi poori cold drik ak par gir jati hai..
waiter -sorry madam maine dekha nahi
ak-koi baat bahi galti sayad meri hi thi..its ok
rr- koi baat nahi tum washroom jakar saaf kar lo
ak- hmm..mai abhi aayi
akshara goes to washroom and message nk
pls meet me on terris
nk repied her " ok "
ON THE TERRIS
ak is waiting for nk eagerly
kya baat hai mujhe yaha kyu bulaya hai "he came and asked her
ak- thank u so much nk
nk- kis ke liye
ak- mujhe itni acchi tarah samajhne ke liye
nk- maine aisa kya kia?
ak- aaj tak jo tumne mere liya kia hai shayad hi kisi aur ne kia ho
nk- yahi kehna tha
ak - ha nk..par tum mujhe aise kyu baat kar rahe ho?
nk -kuch nahi ak bas thora thaka hua tha
ak -to aaram kar lete
nk- ek baar tum dono ki shaadi ho jaye uske baad to mujhe yahi karna hai
ak - nk mai tumhare liye wish karoongi ki jald se jald tumhe ek pyari si ladki mil jaye jiske saath tum hamesha kush raho
nk -thanks ak par shayad iski koi zaroorat nahi padegi
ak - kyu ?
nk - kyunki mujhe vo ladki mil gayi hai ...aur jis din tumhari aur rr ki shaadi hogi usi din mai bhi shaadi karke yaha se hamesha ke liye chala jaoonga...shimla
ak -with teary eyes..tum shaadi kar
nk - ha kyu nahi...tum khush nahi ho mere decision se
ak -nahi nk i am very happy for u and she hugs him while controlling her tears..i am very happy for u
nk - thanks..ab chale
aur vaha se jane lagta hai..
nk ...ak said from behind
nk - hmm
ak- kya tum shaadi me nahi aaoge
nk -just smiles and goes from there
ak started to crying loudly...sorry nk sorry
PRECAP - ak is ready to confess her and nk's relationship to rr in marriage..

Edited by rainanaksh - 10 years ago

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

thanks for update early as always nice part and keep cont. soon

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raina verma

@NAKSHMYJAAN

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Nakshian4ver
i rarely visit forum these days as i find nthng much interesting bt loved ur ff
update soon so that i will come ol lol😆

thanks dear for your such a nice comment..i am really happy to writing this ff for u all

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raina verma

@NAKSHMYJAAN

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

leap comming soon in my ff

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avisha

@avinaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

I have seriously fallen in love with your ff [8->] its simply amazing and I am kind of addicted to it... thanks for the update and plz plz pllzzz update the next part soon

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raina verma

@NAKSHMYJAAN

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: avinaksh
I have seriously fallen in love with your ff its simply amazing and I am kind of addicted to it... thanks for the update and plz plz pllzzz update the next part soon

thank u so much dear for your such a sweet comment...due to u all now i am writing 13th part of my ff...and definately i will entertain u all my friends with my ff...so keep reading it...:)