naksh ff ** tum mile ** PART 33 on PAGE 59

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raina verma

@NAKSHMYJAAN

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

hey friends i think no one is liking my ff ,only a single like and just a one feedback , so i think i should stop writing my ff i thougt i can write a good ff not the best one but i will try .but i think its a very bad story that u friends ignore it .so thanks its a great time here and i am very happy about that .
thank u all friends for these beautiful comment.

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

pls update soon i am eagerly waiting for next part

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raina verma

@NAKSHMYJAAN

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

PART 7
NEXT DAY IN COLLEGE
ak, vr and an in there classroom
vr - hey ak ji to kaisa raha kal aapka birthday
ak- very very nice
an- kyu nahi hoga rr jo saath tha
ak- rr nahi nk mere saath tha
vr and an became shocked - kya !
ak- ha kyu kya hua
an- rr tere saath nahi tha phir bhi itni happy hai
ak- ha kyu nahi reh sakti kya problem kya hai vaise bhi rr apne dad ko delhi lekar gaya tha to maine socha ki kyu na bday nk ke saath hi mana liya jaye
vr- good going ak aur tujhe bura bhi nahi laga
ak- bura kyu lagega mai to khush ho ki rr sabki kitni chinta karta hai
IN THE CAR
rr and nk is on the way to college
rr's dream
vo ak se kehta hai mujhe maaf kardo ak maine tumse jhoot bola tha mai bday par nahi aa paya and ak in angry mode slaps him in front of all students.
nk- rr kya hua tujhe kya soch raha hai?
rr- bhai mujhe bahut chinta ho rahi hai
nk- kis baat ki
rr- yahi ki ak ko meri baaton par vishwaas to hoga na
nk- ha kyu nahi hoga tujhse itna pyaar jo karti hai
rr- ha vo to hai tabhi to mai ye sab kar paya
nk- uska vishwaas tod kar ( in a low voice)
rr- kya kaha tune
nk- yahi ki college aa gaya
rr- ha chal
nk and rr both went to ak classroom
ak saw rr and quickly hugs him
ak- thank god tum a gaye maine tumhe kitna miss kia
rr- maine bhi my love
ak- ab uncle ki health kaisi hai
rr-kaun uncle?
ak- tumhare dad
rr- oh ha ab vo bilkul theek hai
suddenly the bell rings
rr- accha friends ab mai apni class mai jata hu lecture start hone wala hoga bye all
nk and ak too join their seats
both are not talking to each other
after some time
nk- sorry akshara maine tumhe bahut hi hurt kia hai
ak- ha nk
IN FLASHBACK
jab rr ke dad shop se chale jate hai
ak- nk koi mujhe batayega yaha kya ho raha hai
nk- vo ak
ak-pls nk pls mujhe batao ki ye uncle yaha kya kar rahe hai?
nk- bataonga par tum mujhse vaada kar ki tum iss baat ko dil par nahi logi
ak- theek hai ab batao plss
nk- ak vo rr delhi nahi gaya hai balki vo...
ak- nahi gaya hai to phir vo kaha hai?
nk- actually uske liye ek rishta aaya hai to vo unse meeting ke liye gaya tha
ak- oh to ye baat thi vo mujhe pehle bhi bata sakta tha na isme kaun si badi baat hai
tum bhi na ab shaadi ke rishte to aayenge hi na .par mujhe rr par pora bharosa hai ki vo mujhse hi shaadi karega
nk- ha kyu nahi
ak- accha hua tumne mujhe ye sab bata diya varna mai na jane kya soch baithi thi
nk- ab chale ghar
ak- ha
IN PRESENT
ak- ha nk hurt nahi par ek best dosti nibhai hai aur ye friendship mai marte dum tak nibhaungi
nk- mai bhi
ak- ok nk lecture khatam ho gaya baad me milte hai
nk- bye
aur ak ,vr and an class se chali jati hain
nk- sorry ak maine tumhe puri baat nahi batayi par mai ye kaise kar sakta hu rr aur ak dona mere friends hai aur mai unhe alag hote nahi dekh sakta
aur mai rr ko ak ke saath dhoka dene nahi donga usse samajhna hoga ki ak usse bahut pyaar karti hai
IN CANTEEN
ak and rr talking to each other
rr - i am sorry ak mai tumhara bday celebrate nahi kar paya
ak- koi baat nahi phir kabhi celebrate kar lenge
rr- nahi abhi celebrate karte hai
ak- par kaise aur vo bhi yaha
rr- nahi tum aao mere saath
rr ak ko liberary lekar jata hai
rr- ha yaha abhi koi nahi hai
ak- par yaha kaise
rr- yahi ak tum aankhen band karo
ak- ok
she closes her eyes
rr gives her a packet
ak- isme kya hai
rr- tum hi dekho
she opens the packet
ak- wow rr ye wahi dress hai na jo uss din maine mall me dekhi thi tumhe yaad tha thank u so much
(a beautiful black sleevless gown )
rr- tumne jo kaha tha isliye. accha chalo ab tum mujhe ek aacha sa gift de do
he pointed on his lips
ak- ji nahi ye sab shaadi ke baad hi
rr- kya ak jab bhi mai aisa kuch kehta hu tab tum yahi kehti ho
ak- to galat kya hai mai aisi nahi hu
rr- to theek hai raho jaise rehna hai
aur vaha se chala jata hai
ak- par rr suno to
ak coming from liberary with a sad face and nk saw her
nk- hey bhagvaan phir dukhi
ak- pata hai nk mai kabhi kabhi ye nahi samajh paati ki rr mujhse pyaar karta bhi hai ya nahi
nk- kyu nahi karta aakhir tum itni pyaari jo ho tumse to koi bhi pyaar kar le
ak- shayad par rr ko mujhse kuch aur bhi chahiye
nk- kya ak
ak- tum nahi samjhoge
nk- mai kyu nahi ? khair jane do mai tumhe ye batane aaya tha ki rr ne aaj tumhare liye aur tumhare saare friends ke liye tumhare bday ke liye ek party di hai
isliye tum shaam ko ready rehna mai tumhe pick karne aa jaunga ok
ak- tum aaoge
nk-koi problem hai mere saath aane me and he become sad
ak- ji nahi koi problem nahi hai aur vaise bhi bike par baithne ki mere practice bhi ho chuki hai
they both laughing together
PRECAP- IN PARTY AK SAW RR WITH BINDIYA

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

eagerly waiting for next part

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raina verma

@NAKSHMYJAAN

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

so friends here is next par
PART 8
AKSHARA'S ROOM
akshara is confused in her dresses
ak- kya ak tu apne bady party ke liye ek aachi dress bhi nahi choose kar pa rahi hai
after some time she chooses a dress which was gifted by rr
ak- ha ye hi theek rahegi
she wore a white coloured miniskirt with sleevless top and from back it was backless
she take atleast 2 hours to get ready
ak- aa ha ak tu to badi hot lag rahi hai dekhna jab rr tujhe dekhega to paagal ho jayega
aur vaise bhi mai aaj use uska fvourite gift bhi doongi jo vo chahta hai
after some more time she heard a voice of car honk
ak apni balkani se deekhti hai
nk neeche uska wait kar raha hota hai aur vo neeche aati hai
nk apni car ka mirror clean kar raha hota hai
tabhi ak " sorry nk wait karane ke liye"
its ok ak " he did'nt notice her
ak- kaisi lag rahi hu
then nk saw her and surprised to see her in this attire
nk- acchi lag rahi ho par
ak- par kya nk sach batao
nk- uss red saaree me zyada khubsoorat lag rahi thi
ak- tumhe kya pata nk par rr ko ye hi acha lagta hai
nk- to tum rr ke kuch bhi karogi
ak- ha kyu nahi ab chale hum hotel
nk- ha
he opened the car door for akshara and while sitting her top sring was about to open suddenly nk holds it " akshara he said
ak- kya hua aise kyu chillaye
nk- ye vo tumhare top ki dori open ho gayi hai ye lo
ak became very much embarras infront of nk
maine dekha nahi thank u nk
nk- hmmm
nk aur ak dono hotel pahuchte hai
whole hotel was fully decorted with white nd curtains baloons and flowers with disco type set up .all decorations were very expensive
ak is astonished to see the surprise.
rr vr an all are coming from there to welcome akshara
rr- happy bday my love
ak- thank u rr and hugs him
vr aur an bhi ak ko wish karke waha se le jti hai
here nk and rr
rr- thanks yaar jo tune ye idea dia aur itni jldi sab arrangement bhi kar liya tu mera saccha dost hai
nk- nahi yaar apne friends ke liye to kuch bhi kar sakta hu accha ab tu ak ke paas ja
rr- ha tu bhi aa ja cake cut karte hai
bday girl ak apne saare friends ke saath cake cutting karne jati hai tabhi
a girl came infront of her
happy bday akshara she said
ak- aap kaun ? sorry maine aapko nahi pehchna
she said " i am bindiya "and here rr and nk shocked to see her
ak- sorry
bin- mai rr ki friend
rr ki jaan me jaan aati hai
bin- rr tumne apni friend ko mere bare me nahi bataya
rr- ha nahi sorry bindiya mai bhool gaya
nk cuts in between chalo ak cake katoo
ak- ha
she cuts the cake and feed to rr nk vr and an
all are dancing with eachother in disco light but bindiya is standing in corner
rr- hey jaan chalo na dance karte hai
bin- nahi ,kyu na hum bahar chale yaha bahut shor hai
rr- ok and they both went out from there
here ak is dancing with nk
ak- nk rr kaha gaya ?
nk- pata nahi abhi to yahi tha
ak- mai dekhkar aati hu
nk- ruko ak and he also goes behind her
here rr and bin gets cosy with eachother
he is kissing her lips when ak saw them
ak- ye sab kya aur mai paagal but she went from there without saying anything
here nk comes
nk- rr ko dekhkar
aap log ye kya ?? rr mujhe tujhse kuch baat karni hai vo bhi akele me
rr- ha bol
nk- ak tujhe dhoond rahi pls andar chal
rr- theek hai mai bindiya ke saath aata hu
nk- nahi tu ja mai use lekar aata hu
teeno wapas party me jate hai
suddenly antara came and said" guys tum yaha ho aur waha ak ko dekho kitni drink ki hai usne
nk and rr ak ke paas jate hai
aur uski haalat dekhkar pareshaan ho jate hai she was totally talli.
rr -mai ise ghar lekar jata hu
bin- tum kyu jaoge rr ?
rr- vo mai theek hai aisa kar nk tu isse pls ghar le ja
nk- par mai kaise vo bhi iss halat me
rr- in nk's ear" pls bhai le ja varna mai gaya
nk- ok and he takes ak in his arms and goes from there
it was already late night aur ak ki aisi halat
IN THE CAR
ak resting her head on nk's shoulder
nk- ye ak bhi na pata nahi kya zaroorat thi itni peene ki
ak- - (in babyish voice) maine nai pi hai nk ye mera dukh rr bindiya kiss bday party tum friends hai
nk- pata nai tabse kya bak rahi hai?
when his car stops on a empty jungle type road
nk- ab ise kya ho gaya ?
he came out from his car "ab dekta hu"
aur car theek karta hai .
nk- chalo te theek to ho gayi ab le chalo madam ko apne ghar
he is about to sit in his car but found akshara missing
nk tensed- ye ak kaha chali gayi .kahi jungle me to nahi
nahi mai ak ko kuch nahi hone dunga and ready to search her calling ak ak every where
jungle me har jagah dekne ke baat nk sadly ek pond ke pass baith jata hai
nk- kaha gayi tum ak
tabhi nk talaab me kisi ko tairta hua dekhta hai
white dress ye to ak ne pehni thi matlab ye ak
he suddenly jumps in pond and brought ak safely on the ground.
nk- ak pls apni ankhen kholiye dekhiye mai nk
but she is unconsious .
PRECAP- naksh romance in cottege its dream or reality ?

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Riddhi

@NoMoreAFAN

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Awesome part
Please next part today itself
Can't wait

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

ya i think now ak will fall for nk pls update next part soon

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raina verma

@NAKSHMYJAAN

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

PART 9
nk took ak from there nd in a jungle way
nk- ab kaha jaao ak ko dhundhte waqt maine raasta nhi deka ab
then he saw a small cottage in jungle
nk- chalo yaha kuch to dikha yahi sahi
IN COTTEGE
nk- yaha koi hai kya ,lagta hai yaha koi rehta tha tabhi ye aag yaha jal rahi hai
nk ak ko ek hay ke dher par leta deta hai
nk- ak pls aankhen kholiye
she was shiviring badly due to cold
nk- ek to inhe hosh nahi aa raha aur upar se ye thand .inke to saare kapde bhi geele hain
aur mai inke pass kaise jaao mai bhi to bheega hu .
he took off his shirt and came near ak
nk ak ke pass to jata hai phir door ho jata hai
"mujhe inhe heat deni hogi aur inke kapde bhi change karne honge " he said
nk apni shirt se akshara ko cover kar deta hai
nk- ha ye theek hai mai inke clothes utar kar kisi tarah ye heat ak tak pahuchata hu
and he took off all akshara's clothes too
nk took ak in his arms and brought her infront of fire
he brought some hay in front of fire and laying ak there.
nk apne haath se heat lekar ak ke haath pairon me malta hai but usko thand lagna band nahi hota
nk- ak ki halat to aur bhi kharab hoti ja rahi hai mai kya karu?
while thinking
ha nk tujhe ye karna hi hoga
par mai ye nahi kar sakta ak meri friend hai
par agar use kuch ho gaya to tu rr ko kya javab dega
nahi mai ak ko kuch nahi hone dunga
suddenly he realise the reality
and he took off the shirt which was covering akshara and lay on her to give his body heat to her and start kissing her here and there
IN MORNING at 3 am
nk saw ak sleeping besides him peacefully and get up from there
tabhi nk ko bahar se kuch aawaz aati hai aur vo bahar chala jata hai
here ak wakes up
ak- uff mera sir ! aur ye mai kaha hu mere kapde sab kaha hai?
tabhi nk andar aata hai
ak is shocked to see nk here
ak- nk tum? aur ye hum kaha hai?
nk- happily tumhe hosh aa gaya ak, but suddenly notice her ,par pehle tum apne kapde pehen lo ak mai abhi aata hu
ak- shocked mere kapde
AFTER SOME TIME
nk- kya mai andar jaoon
ak- hmmm
nk- thank god ak tum theek ho pata hai mai kitna ghabra gaya tha
ak came infront of nk and slaps him
ak- tumhari himmat kaise hui mere sath ye sab karne ki
nk- ye sab matlab kya?
ak- itne bhole mat bano nk tum sab ladke hamesha ek hi baat sochte ho
nk is blank
ak- jaha ladki dekhi nahi bas unke saath yahi sab karna chahte ho hai na batao
nk- nahi ak tum mujhe galat samajh rahi ho
ak- mujhe tumhari ya tumhare dost ki koi bakwass nahi sunni hai
aur waha se jane lagti hai tabhi
nk- jana hai to jao ak par itna sun lo ki agar mai tumhare saath raat bhar na hota to shayad tum ...
ak- to mar jaane diya hota mujhe nk mar jane
and she begans to cry
" jisko itna pyarr karti thi aur aaj bhi karti hu usi ne mujhe dhoka dia hai nk"
pata hai nk maine aaj tak jisko pyaar kia hai sab mujhe akela kar gaye hai chahe vo mere mom dad ho ya phir rr koi mere saath nahi raha .
nk- tum aisa kyu keh rahi ho ak?
ak- maine rr ko bindiya ke saath dekha tha
nk- vo dost hai ak aur kuch nahi
ak- jhoot bol rahe ho tum maine unhe kiss karte dekha hai
nk-kya ?
ak- ha nk isiliye mujhe nahi jeena hai
aur tum ne bhi mera vishwaas tod diya nk ,rr aur bindiya ke baare me kuch na batakar
suddenly she took a burning wood from fire and try to burn herself but nk stops her
nk- paagal ho gayi ho kya aise koi jaan deta hai kya bhala
ak- to kya karu mai nk ? mujhe nahi jeena
while crying she hugs nk tightly
nk-pls ak tum ro mat ok
ak-mujhse nahi hoga nk
nk -shhh...
ak-nahi
just then he cupped her face and kisses on her lips passionately
in return ak closes her eyes...
sorry friends i know this part is not so romantic but i will try it in my next part
PRECAP- nk promises to ak that he will not tell anyone about them
sorry for many grammatical mistakes