FF: zindagi ke safar mein IMP NOTE ON pg 28!! - Page 15

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Posted: 13 years ago
interesting , fast and feeling part mariam. super I like ak feels when nk went America . nk went America one twist of case file to interesting and fast track . friend . well done friend in pre cape ak follow down in stair ! ho :( eagerly waiting to next part . thanx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nycc Part plz cont soon & thanks for PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part...👏
par kyu dono ko alag kardiya ek min keliye bhi naksh ek dusre se alag muje bilkul bhi pasand nahi hai
jaldi dono ko milavo
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow nice part maya 👏
n precap sounds interesting 😃
continue soon...
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waiting eagerly 4 next part
this part was awesome mayo
naksh ka alag rahana kaafi interesting hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice part mayo 👏next part me naksh ko mila dena..precap is interesting..do continue soon n thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 13 years ago
nic prt..waiting fo ur nxt update...👍🏼
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beautiful part
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey guys thank you so much, im so glad you guys have been liking the FF!! and sorry about the short updates..getting very less time these days actually and thats why i've been taking so much time to update new parts, also.. sorry i cannot say thank you by quoting all of you personally cause my laptop is dead slow and takes ages to post only one reply, so thank you all for the love and support its really encouraging..
anyway so here it is what you've all been waiting for!!
i know this isnt very long either but im running out of ideas, if you guys have any interesting ideas then please PM them to me.. i can change them a bit and add a little spice to them and make them a part otherwise i will stop writing this FF because i dont want it to be boring.
part 13
2 months go by...
akshara is coming downstairs for breakfast in the morning and all of a sudden she feels something in her heart, she feels happy then after a few moments she realizes why.,. who's standing on the end of the stairs ..its her very own naitik!😃
she starts running down the stairs to finally let herself be in his arms, to feel his cosy touch and his arms around her but all of a sudden her foot hits the railing and she falls, she rolls down the stairs and naitik comes running towards her..
who knew this was going to be the way they meet..😭
he runs towards her and sees the her blood on his hands as he touches her head,
naitik: maa!! bauji!!!
everyone comes running, at first they dont notice akshara and smile but when there eyes see their beloved daughter covered in blood , they panic and their facial expressions completely change🤢 shaurya calls the ambulance and they rush to the airport,
naitik gets extremely worried about his darling love!
they are all waiting for the doctor,
the doctor comes outside and says '' ap log itna pareshan mat hon, patient ko kuch nahi howa bas sar pe thori gehri chot ane ki waja se woh unconcious hogaye thi, ab woh theek hain.. lekin woh so rahi hain, tou it's better if no one disturbs her for now''
everyone breathes a sigh of relief to know that akshara is fine,
they all wait for her to wake up outside,
meanwhile naitik goes to akshara's room and sees her sleeping peacefully. he sits next to her and strokes her hair!
nk: akshara ap kitni careless hain na, mujhe dekh kar itna excited hogaye ke neeche gir pari! main ap ko ab kabhi nahi chod ke jaoon ga, kabhi bhi nahi.. aur meri waja se apko itni takleef howe hai us ke liye tou main apne aap ko maaf hi nahi kar pa raha hoon, i love you so much akshara!''
then he goes outside.. after a while the doctor wraps a bandage around her head and discharges her..they make her sit in the wheel chair and take her outside,
naitik carries her up to the room..
where she lies down on the bed
ak: naitik apko kiya laga ke main so rahi thi? ap ne jo kaha main ne woh sab suna .. bas us waqt meri ankh kholne ki himmat nahi horahi thi.. naitik! ap ki kiya galti hai?
she takes his hand and holds it
ak: acha lagta hai ye jaan kar ke apko meri itni parwa hai..i love you too!😊😳
she gets up to hug him but he doesnt let her, he makes her lie down again
Nk: main apko takleef main nahi dekh sakta akshara, ab ap theek hain na? ab se ap koi kaam nahi karengi.. you'll rest as much as you can
the next day, early in the morning naitik gets a call from america.. and he gets angry on them
''ye koi waqt hai call karne ka. ab case khatam hogaya hai mera is baat se koi lena dena nahi hai''
akshara:kya hua naitik,,suba suba kiss par gussa kar rahe hain?
nk: akshara ap bhi na ap rest nahi karti hain bilkul bhi apso jaye foran (in an irritated voice)
ak: lekin naitik
nk: ap meri baat kabhi sunti hain ya nahi.. ap ko tou bas wohi karna hai jo apka dil chahta hai (in an angry tone, hangs up the phone)
akshara starts tearing up and she feels very depressed and emotional by lying down in bed all day..
naitik sees this and comes and sits next to her, he hugs her😳
nk: im sorry,
he kisses her forehead and wipes her tears😳
ak: naitik main bohot bura feel kar rahi hoon, bed par pare huwe mujhe bohot ajeeb lag raha hai,, main promise karti hoon koi kaam nahi karoon gi leking mujhe kam se kam neeche tou aane deeje..''
nk: acha theek hai
a week goes by with akshara recovering..
naitik decides to take her out on a drive to cheer her up..
he takes permission from the elders and they go..
they go near a place near the sea, where there is fresh wind and nice weather, they stand far away on a balcony type place where naitik gives akshara pretty red roses!
she smiles looking at them, they both sit there enjoying the weather
till they see a swing nearby.. akshara goes on it and sits onit,, naitik pushes her '(jadoo ye kya chal gaya bg)
ak: ap bhi aye na
nk: sirf ek jhoola hai, ap jhool leejay
ak gets off and forces nk to sit on it then he makes a face so she sits on his lap...
they both try swinging but the swing breaks and falls instead
they both laugh and hug🥱
then they go homeee



precap: naitik invites the whole family to a dinner cruise, naitik and akshara fall of the boat😲😆

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