NEW FF: PYAR TOH HONA HI THA(part10 at page 15)

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asha nair

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

happy 2 see another ff abt naksh i m sure nakshians will surely encoruahe it so all the best...congrats

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maha_femir4ever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

hmm nice intro and part waiting 4 next part...:)

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nasreen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Nice FF part dear...👏

waiting for next part...😃

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ANN91

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

superb creation continue ur creative wrk 👏

Edited by ANN91 - 13 years ago

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TanuDDian

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

heey nice story dear...waiting update soon

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Shruti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

PART 2
All are getting ready for disco
Akshara wear d same dress that she wore in yrkkh sucess party nd naitik white t-shirt & jeans both r looking stunning...😳😳
IN DISCO
Akshara-main tum logo ke liye drinks leke aati hu😊
(meanwhile naitik coming from table holding drinks & both didn't see eac other nd drink falls on akshara dress)
Naitik-dekh kar nahi chal sakti kya😡??????????
Akshara-kya?ek toh sari galti tumhari hai sorry bolnaki wajah mujhar chilla raha ho😡😡
Naitik-mei sorry kyu bolo ????? u should say sorry!!!!
Akshara- ulta chor kotbal ko data
Naitik-Tum jaise ladki maine aaj tak nahi dekhi?????
Akshara- dekhoga kaise main tumhara samna pheli baar aayi huuu
Naitik-very funny
(All dr frnds came)
Ragini- kya hua akshara??????
Akshara- isna mere dress kharab kar di aur upar se sorry bhi nahi bol raha hai????????
NAitik-tumha dekh kar chalna chayia tha
Alekh-pls aap apni frnd ko chup kariye!!!!!!
Sadhana-oye!jhala apna dost ko bol sorry bola...
(dr fight increse all people arond them was staring them ragini nd ranvir dy were matured so dy stopped dr fight nd goes from dr)
AT NIGHT
Akshara- mei un boys ko zarur maza chakahungi
Ragini-madam apne kya unladkose unka address pucha tha???????
Sadhna-address toh nahi pucha ab kya karenga ??????
both laughed
Akshara-kabhi na kabhi toh zarur milenga hum...
Precap-all r in same collage
hope u gyus like it sorry for delay!!!!!!!!!!

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nasreen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Nice part dear...👏

i liked akshara line dekhoga kaise main tumhara samna pheli baar aayi hu...😆

please cont soon...😃

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ammu4u

@ammu4u

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

nice part dear..loved it..👏.short hai lekin bohauth acha hai👍🏼...naksh ka fight 😆. 😆😆😆...well written...do continue soon..

ps:plz pm me when u update ur ff