NEW FF: PYAR TOH HONA HI THA(part10 at page 15) - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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soo nice part
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey dear i luved ur alll parts i m tooo much interested in it plz cntinue it soon sorry i cant cmnt b4 coz i dnt know u have updated more parts bt now i have read ur all 4 parts n waiting 4 more do cntinue it soon luv it👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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plz update soon 😊 waiting for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 5

Naitik didnt able to sleep whole night thinking that as he done right choice to choose Shena as her dance partner

Next day in Collage (dance rehersal going on) (Miss Riya asked akshara to help her in dance,so akshara is also dr)

Naitik-shena chalo practise karni hai baise bhi tum 1hr waste kar chuki ho

Shena-(on phone) naitik just chill ok practise ka kya hai ho jaygi as i'm d best

Naitik-(angrily) pls shena take it seriously huma 1st ana hai

(Shena ko practise karna ka koi maan nahi tha she was making excuses not to do, naitik was full in anger but he cant do any thing as shena was her choice)

Riya-naitik why ru not practising?????? Naitk-mam shena is not here'. Riya-oh!!!!!! but don't worry u continue ur practice'.. Naitik-how can I dance alone it's a couple dance?????? Riya 'not to worry''(she calls akshara) (Akshara comes) Akshara-yes mam!!!!!!!!! Riya-u have to dance with naitik''. Akshara-but mam shena???/ Riya-shena is not here nd naitik cant dance alone so ''''

(Akshara first hesitate but after that she readly except) Music starts a very Romantic tune Naitik gives his hand to akshara nd akshara also respond d same (their first touch ever) dy both lost in each others eyes nd doing dance perfectly, every 1 was seeing them but dy were lost in each other any 1 by seeing them can say tahat dy r in luv Music ends lekin naitik akshara were dancing than alekh nd sadhana shakes them sadhana-oye!kaha kho gaye tum dono?????? Alekh-music khatam ho gaya both embarrassed nd together say 'vo actually ragini-(start singing) Aankhon ki gustakhiya maaf ho akshara-shut up tum logo ko koi kaam nahi hai (from d door shena was seeing dis she enter) Shena-naitik ne tumha choose nahi kiya uska babajud tum uska saath dance kar rahi hooo??? Tum yeh chati hona ki naitik mujha chod kar tumhara saath dance kara???tumha meri place chahiya na?????? Naitik-shena aisa kuch nahi ha u were not here toh mam na kaha akshara ke saath pracitse karna ke liye'' Sadhna-aur tum jaise ladki chi aur tumhari place chahiye bhi nahi!!!!!! Shena 'kya kaha mujh jaise ladki?????? What does it mean???? Ragini-agar tumhara pass dimag hai na toh u can understand what does it mean???? Akshara-phi toh gayi bhas pani mei😉😉 (All laugh naitik also ) Shena '(to herself) tum logo ko pata nahi hai ki shena kaun hai''..Akshara u just wait nd watch tumhara saath kya hoga?????????

kya higa shena ka plan do read in next part???????hope u guys like it!!!!!!!! sorry yaar editing mei problem ho gayi aur ye ff teda meda post ho gaya but next time aisa nahi hoga...sorry

Edited by shurtiekta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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me first...

ya ya i relly likes ur all parts i m a huge fan of this FF pyar tohh hona hi tha😍 thanx sooo much dear for introducing a new story n having a beautiful change in both characters plz continue soon😃

Edited by akshi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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goo1 ..plzz plzz continue soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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plz update soon 😊
I'm waiting for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nyc..pls. continue soon..eagerly waiting fr nxt part..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 5
miss riya called all d students to her house for preparation...
All reached to her house
Naitik to himself-akshara bhi ayi hogi mei usa thanku boldunga or sorry bhi ...lekin akshara kyu aygi vo toh kisi mei participate nahi kar rahi
Alekh-kya hu naitik kya badbda raha hai??????
Naitik in his thought-akshara
Both alekh nd ranvir shoced akshara
Naitik reliases what he said just now🤢
Ranvir-toh aap akshara ka kahalo mei koha hua haiii
Alekh nd Ranvir starts couhing
Naitik-haa nahi vo mei soch raha tha ki agar vo yaha agyi toh sara maza kharab ho jayega...
den dy show girls coming
Ragini-hello boys
BOYS HELLO
Alekh-thank god tum log time par agay
Sadhana-hum toh hamesha time par ata hai
Akshara was not dr naitik feels bad but he dont know why????????
Alekh-Akshara kaha hai??????
ragini-vo akshara
Ranvir-ye lo shaitan ka naam liya aur shaitan hazir
Naitik face brighten up
Sadhna-shaitan ka saath saath musibat bhi agayi (she meant shena)
Akshara-sorry sorry sorry mei late ho gayi...
Shena also comes dr
Shena-hello boys
Boys kuch reply kar saka ussa phela
Sadhana-alekh hama mam ka pass jana hai toh chala...
Alekh-haa chalo
Ragini also take Ranvir with her
only 3 of them were left
Shena-naitik chala yaha se huma apna time aisa waste nahi karna she takes naitiks hand
Akshara didnt like dis but she also dont know why???????
After some time
Shena-ya hi sahi mauka hai akshara se badla lena ka...
Naitik akshara ko baar baar stare kar raha tha usa akela mei akshara se baat karni thi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Shena knowingly akshara ki upar uska drink gira deti haiii
Shena-sorry akshara pata nahi kaisa
Akshara-(in anger)kaisa pata hoga tumha jab tumha apna makeup se hi fursat nahi hai (she goes to wash room)
Shena smiles
Naitik sees akshara going-lagta hai akshara akeli hai I should talk to her naitik akshara ka peecha jata hai...
Naitik-(shouts)akshara
Akshara-(confused) naitik tumna mujha bulaya
Naitik-ha mujha tumsa baat karni thi
Akshara-karni thi
Naitik-mera matlab hai karni hai
Akshara-haa bolo
Naitik-bahar baat karta hai agar hamre dosto na yaha dekh liya to voh phir se suru ho jayenga
Akshara-thik hai
First time dy talk to each other matlab fight nahi ki
Shena-lagta hai mera plan sucessfull ho gaya lekin uski cheekhna ki abaj kyun nahi aayi mujha check kar lena chayia
Shena enters d washroom aur woh fisal jati hai ns shotus loudly
Naitik akshara heras her sound
akshara-ye toh shena ki abaj hai lekin wih cheekh kyun rahi hai lets see her while akshara was going naitk catches akshars hand dr eye lock😳😳
Naitik-thanku akshara (akshara feels good)
Akshara-ur welcome naitik😊 naitik mera haath
naitik leaves her hand aur apni duniya se nikal kar dy goes inside nd sees shena ko pakad kar room mei le ja raha hai
Akshara-shena ko kiya hua???????
sadhna-washroom mei gir gayi...
Ragini-pata nahi ye wash room mei oil kisna girya hai aur usi wajah se!!!!!!!!
Akshara-oh ye sab toh mera liya tha
Ragini-matlab???????
Akshara-Shena na mera upar apna drink gira diya mei isa saaf karna toh washroom ayi thi par mei
Sadhana-usna phela se hi ye sab plan bana liya tha
Ragini- ha abhi andar chal kar dekhta hei
Doctor was called
Doctor-fecture
Shena-kya fecture hai??????
Doctor-yes aur tumha 1month ke liya rest karna hoga varna aur problem ho sakti hai...
Shena-ye sab akshara ki galti hai
Naitik-shutup shena akshara ne kiya kya?????
evry one was shoced ki naitik akshara ka liya argue kar raha hai
Riya-shena cant dance isliya akshara will be naitiks partner
Shena ko bahut gussa araha tha uska andar toh fire jaal rahi thi...
Every 1 was very happy natik also...
hope guys like it thoda boring ke liya sorry!!!!!!!!!
Next part will update soon ...



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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice part shruti lovely 👏
continue soon...😃
Edited by dipshikaGUPTA - 13 years ago

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