NaKsH- A jOuRnEy TiLl EtErNiTy (ch 7 is @ pg 21)

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

AngelicDesires

@AngelicDesires

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: Naitik04
wow grt update 👏 i loved Naitik's bday wala part 😍
n NaKsh are goin to Paris together sounds so interesting *its my fav destination* 😊

eager to read more & thanks 4 the pm ❤️ update soon!!

thanks a lot!!! wow paris is ur fav destination!!! good.. 👏

Quote

AngelicDesires

@AngelicDesires

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#132

Chapter - 7

i have specially posted this for moonlight08 aka kaumudi
hope she likes it 😊
happy birthday girl

naitik gets puzzled on hearing sounds of clapping and happy birthday.. he turns back and is surprised to see the whole family gathering singing a happy birthday song for him..

he is very happy.. but his eyes are finding his lady love.. his jaan...his akshara...
he looks up on the stair case and is surprised to find akshara standing there like a fasion goddess...

...
naitik keeps on gazing her as if he was seeing her for the first time..
she comes towards him
ak:- happy birthday naitik
nk(hugs her):- thank you jaan
ak:- naitik chodo.. sb dekh rhe hain...
nk:- dekhne do... aj ap itni sundar lg rhi hain ki koi bhi apse pyar kr baithe...
ak:- dhatt(and runs away from there)
the whole family wishes him and gives him gifts and shagun
anshu and varsha decide to have a dance competion after the cake cutting ceremony...
varsha:- suno suno suno... cake cutting k bad... hm 1 competition rakhenge or jo jeetega usko 1 surprise gift milega..
akshara and naitik:- ha.. thik hai.. hm dono ready h competition k liye
rashmi:- main bhi ready hun...
varsha:- main to ever ready hun🤣
shourya:- main bhi karunga
anshu:- main koshish kr skta hun(every one laughs at this)
ak:- pr competition m krna kya h??
varsha:- vo 1 surprise h... naitik ji... chlo cake katte hain..
nk:- ji bhabhi.. chaliye
they reach the table...
naitik starts cutting the cake and everyone else is singing.. happy birthday...
naitik gives a bite each to ak g3 dj bm rb...
after that to the maheshwaris also...
varsha pushes anshu to a side
anshu:- kya hua bhabhi... mujhe cake to khane do
varsha:- anshu..cake bhi kha lena.. abhi meri bat suno.. abhi hm dance competition rkhenge.. or please sbhi ache songs lga dena... thik hai??
anshu:- ji bhabhi..

varsha:- chlo ab sbhi competition k liye ready ho jao...jo hai 1 dance competition
everyone in chorus:- DANCE!!!!!!??????????
varsha:- ha dance competion.. ab isme sbke pair banege...
aksharak sath naitik g
mere sath shourya
rashmi k sath anshu...
or hme judge karenge... dj bm or g3 maa

to shuru kre??

anshu runs and plays the songs.. every one takes his/her respective position and start dancing...
naksh have a perfect eyeloc scene like this

every one enjoys dancing... they stop when dj tells them to stop(almost after an hour)
dj:- thare sbka nach acha tha.. pr mujhe 1 jodi ka nach bohot bhave hai...
or wo h munna or bahu ki jodi..
every one is happy and claps for them..
varsha asks dj to give naksh the surprise gift...
and tells naksh to open it afterwards...
naksh have a sweet but short eyelock
ak:- maa.. ap sab thk gye honge... main ab khana lgwa deti hun...
g3:- ha beta.. chl.. m teri madad kr deti hun
ak:- ji
ak puts every thing on table and calls every one for dinner
naitik:- wah.. itni jldi khana bhi lg gya!!
g3:- ha beta.. chalo ab shuru karo...
naitik opens each and every bowl
daal bhati

palac paneer

pulaw(guys image is not displaying, i dont know the reason)

kheer

his mouth starts watering at the sight of all this..(ur mouth is also watering isnt it???)
nk:- woow.. yeh sb kisne banaya h??
g3:- aksara ne banaya hai.. khas tere liye
ak looks at g3 but she signals her to keep quite

nk:- thank you akshara.. apne sb kuch mera favorite banaya hai..
ak:- welcome naitik... chlo..ab jldi se shuro kro...or btao ki sb kuch kaisa bna hai??
naitik:- ha.. hm sab sath mein khayenge...

ak:- dj.. ayiye.. khana lg gya hai..
dj:- ha bahu.. chal.. hm aawe hain.

both the families have dinner... and are now at the entrance(maheshwari's are going)
every one once again wishes naitik a happy birthday... dj gives his blessings to everyone and they leave..

all are moving inside and so is akshara... but naitik holds her hand...
ak:- naitik...
nk:- ssshhh...
akshara..aj ap itni sundar lg rhi hain ki mera dil kr rha aj bs apko hi niharta rhu.
he lifts her and moves inside the house.
ak:- naitik..yeh ap kya kr rhe hain... koi dekh lega.. naitik niche utariye mujhe..
nk:- apne mere liye itna acha surprise plan kiya hai... to iska return gift dena to banta hi hai...
ak blushes and hides her face in the pallu of her sari
nk:- arre ap sharma kyu rhi hain.. dekhiye.. yha koi nhi h... or ab to hm apne room mein pahunchne wale hain...
he slowly enters the room and bolts it from inside...
he throws ak on the bed n gets over her... ak has closed her eyes...
nk is moving his hands all over her body... ak is taking very deep breaths...

then naitik takes oout a packet from his bag...
ak:- nk yeh kya h???
nk:- ap khud hi dekh lijiye..
ak opens the packet and makes a shy face face when she sees a night gown like this

nk:- ab jldi se ise pehen kr ayiye...
ak:- abhi???
nk:- nhi.. subha..maa k samne pehen lena..
ak:- acha baba.. abhi pehen kr ati hun...
nk:- hmmm.. gud

ak or nk ko thodi private msti krne dete hain... or ap log enjoy kro... main thoda naksh land se real land pr jati hun... 😳😳

precap:- naitik and akshara are sleeping and g3 is constantly banging their door

so kaumudi... do tell me how was the update???
acha tha, so-so tha.. ya bekar tha???

or baki log... please like or comments ka dhyan rkhna... writers ko in dono ki bohot bhuk hoti hai... 🤪🤣🤣

Edited by jasminedayal18 - 13 years ago

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

50ShadesOfMe

@50ShadesOfMe

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#133

Nice one!! 👏 Enjoying Naitik's birthday!!😊

Edited by AvniMaheshwari - 13 years ago

Quote

1cuties

@1cuties

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#134

nice part👏
continue soon😊

Quote

geetika

@geetu_naksh

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#135

nice part

enjoying it

continue it...

Quote

AngelicDesires

@AngelicDesires

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: AvniMaheshwari
Nice one!! 👏 Enjoying Naitik's birthday!!😊

thanks a lot!!
ha.. zarur enjoy kro... fr bad m mt kehna ki party jldi khatam kr di!!🤣

Quote

AngelicDesires

@AngelicDesires

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: dipshikaGUPTA
nice part👏
continue soon😊

thanks..

abhi party ka nasha to utarne do...fr update karungi... 😆
ab next update shayad tuesday ko hogi...

Quote

AngelicDesires

@AngelicDesires

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: geetu_naksh
nice part
enjoying it

continue it...

thanks a lot
ya sure... pura enjoy kro...😆

next part on tuesday 😊

Quote

Rana yasmin

@devakshi19

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#139

Very nice update. Naksh romance was gr8. Luvd it loadz.

Quote

Kanza

@Kanza04

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#140

lovely update Jasmine 👍🏼

& thanx 4 the pm.. do continue soon...

Edited by Naitik04 - 13 years ago

Quote

1 ... 12 13 14 15 16

Posted by: BangBang_Shilpa · 2 months ago

They perhaps had a son named Krish. Were they ever shown in Gen 3 or later? Naksh would be grandfather by now, and where's Varsha and Jasmeet?...

Expand ▼

Posted by: shahsb_26 · 4 months ago

not my idea... Bass instagram par dekha and thoda sensible laga... https://www.instagram.com/p/DJ87FNNTech/?igsh=MXBxNXBwMXBsZ2pqaw==

https://www.instagram.com/p/DJ87FNNTech/?igsh=MXBxNXBwMXBsZ2pqaw==

Expand ▼

Posted by: Maanbhira · 8 months ago

Though I might don't ask this question but still I wanna know.. Naksh was described ax a real brother of his sister and a real paraller lead vs...

Expand ▼

Posted by: Maanbhira · 3 months ago

The first material we see is the promo. They make it larger than life,huge set,costume big dailogues.. good locations. We felt happy, They...

Expand ▼

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".

NaKsH- A jOuRnEy TiLl EtErNiTy (ch 7 is @ pg 21) - Page 14

Related Topics

Explore Topics