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Posted: 14 years ago

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moonum koodi akshiye peduthum😳😆

pinalatha a nalukal enu varum
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pinalatha a nalukal enu varum


enikku druthiyayi😆😆
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part 15

Karan wake up @ saw akshi was not there he saw them coming down he acted as he was asleep

Ak:thank god karan abi tak nah uda

Nt:toh hum upar chale!!!

Ak:nt??..(hitting him)

Nt:ha??apko sharam nah aati apne pati par hath udathe huwe

Ak;aur apko toh apne patni se iss tarah baat karthe huwe kabhi sharam nah aate honge na ab chup chap jaakar so ja aur mujhe b sone de

They came on either side of karan,she caressed his hair,natik bent down 2 kiss him but he thought he was going 2 kiss akshi so he punched him on his chest.they become surprised 2 see him wake up.karan saw the red mark on natiks cheek

Ka:(touching those red marks)ye kya h

Akshi become embaressd 2hearing this

Ak:vo?..vo?.karan?.vo toh??.

Nt:aj holi h na isiliye?

Ak:nt?..

Nt:sh?..

Ka:par holi toh bheedh gay

Nt:vo?.han?..yaham ki holi aj h na isiliye mamma ne papa ko rang lagaya

He gave a wink at akshi

Ka:mujhe b holi khelna h

Ak:(in a lower voice)ab iska jawab b de do

Nt:karan zaroor khelenge lekin kya h na hum colours lana bhool h gaya ek kam karthe h jab hum vapas apne ghar jawoonga na tabholi khelenge teek h

After little thinking he nodded they slept

2day was their day of surprises

Natik brought her @karan 2 the house boat by covering their eyes,he opened their eyes wen they reached the ground floor

Ak;wow house boat I cant believe this??toh ye tha apka surprise

Nt;ha?kaisa laga

Karan jumped in 2 his hands

Ka:bahuth acha

Nt:kitna acha

Ak;itna acha itna acha h ki apko inam dene ki man kar raha h .h na karan

Karan nodded @ kissed on his cheeks,akshi was about 2 gave her share wen natik hold her

Nt:apse mein baadh mein loonga

Karan went 2 his room @ naksh sat on the balcony which was in the ground floor,akshi got a call 4m varsha but natik didn't leave her 4m his arms

Ak;nt?chodiye varsha ka phone h?.

Nt:toh kya huwa?ap ladkiyam b na ek baar baat karna shuru kiya toh phir karthe h rahenge isiliye baadh mein kar lena

Ak;chodiye nt varsha kya sochenga

Nt;kya sochenge??ab unhe b pata h ki hum yaham pooja pad karne keliye nah aya h,jo sochna h sochne digiye

She somehow freed herself @ moved a little distance away 4m him

@phone

V:ha?..ak tu itni deer se phon kyon nah uda rahi thi

Ak;vo mein karan ke sath thi??.

She turned back @ rolled her eyes at him

V;karan ke sath ya natikji ke sath?..

Ak;dhattt!!!!!!

V:tu toh abi b utna h sharama rah h jitney pehle sharamathi thi

Ak:varsha?.tu bata ghar mein sab kaise h?

V:sab teek h tu bata tum log kaise h?

She felt is arms moving around her

Nt;hum bilkul teek h bhabhi??.(looking at her)

V:natik ji ap ap hamari akshara ka khayal toh rakh rahi h na???

Natik looked at akshi with a naughty eyes @ kissed on her cheeks 4m back

Nt:vah toh rakh rahi h??.. h na akshara

Ak;(pinchimg him)acha varsha ananya kaise h?mujhe toh tum sab ki bahuth yaad aa rahi h

Nt:apko toh mere siva baaki sab ki yaad aati h

Varsha overhears this

V?kya?natik ji ne kya kaha????

Ak:kuch nah varsha vo toh isse h mazak kar rahe h

V:hm??.ab tum log kaham h

Ak;hum ab house boat mein h tujhe pata h ye kitne sundar jagah h?????????????????????

She continued her chit chat while natik was getting bored so he begin his mischevious his aim is 2 annoy her so that she should easily end up her chat,he caressed her hair @ put it aside then slowly tickled her using his fingures in her shoulders @ neck she was trying 2 hide her smile infront of varsha

But varsha understood this

V:haa?ak mein tumhe bhaadh mein call kartha hoo nah toh natik ji mujhse naraz honge

Ak;kyon

V:kyonki unki akshara ka vakhth cheenne keliye

Ak:varsha??

V:vaise b mujhe kabab mein haddi nah banne h

She cut the phone

Nt;varsha bhabhi ko b mere feelings ke bare mein khayal h pata nah apko kab samajh mein ayega

She was about 2 say something wen karan came back @ sat on her lap @ was trying 2 impress akshi with his deeds,natik was feeling jealous he also wants the same attention 4m her so he also laid on her lap karan didn't like this natik continued his mischevious this time his aim was 2 disturb karan

Nt:karan tu hut,ak sirf mera h

K:nah ye mere mumma h(huggng her)

Natik sat up :bilkul nah tere mamma mujhse zyaada pyaar karthi h,he kissed on her hand

Karan face turned down he hold akshi more tightly

K:(with a crying tone)mamma ap mere ho na???.

Ak;ha?beta??papa mazak kar rah h tujhe rulane keliye keh rah h

Nt:nah nah mein seriously bol rah h

He take karan 4m her lap @ placed him beside her @ he huggd her completely

Karan started crying

Ak:(taking karan)ye kya h natik hadh hoti h kyon bache ko rula diya, karan mamma apki I h sirf apk

She hugggd @ kissed him a lot of times 4 assuring that she was there

Nt:dekha ak ye kitna jhalthi h issa ro raha h kaise mein apko udakar le gaya ho

Ak;nt,ye bacha h isko kya pata ap maza kar rah h ya na mein jitni apki hoo utni karan ka b hooo

Ntkehne keliye toh h;par ap zyaada importance aur dhyan isko deti hoo

Ak:appki shikayaatein kabhi khatam nah hoti

Karan was still hugging akshi @ sobbing,natik alsao felt guilty @ asked sorry ,he also forgive him

Karan went 2 watch his favourite cartoon

Natik take her 2 the otherside of the boat @ pulled her above him

Ak:nt,ye kya kar rah h chodiye vaham karan akele h

Nt:vo abi cartoon dekh rah h,ap jo b karan ko diya vo mujhe b digiye phir apko jaana h toh jaa mein nah rokhoonga

Ak:par kya???

Nt:kisses @ hugs!!apne h toh kaha h na ki ap hum donom ko equal importance deti h toh ye sab b equal hona chahiye

Ak:bilkul nah mein nah doongi apko koi kiss viss

Nt:ap zyaada bahas mat kigiye shuru kigiye

Ak:meine kaha na nah aj kal ap mujhe black mail akrke bahuth leti h ussise kam chal ligiye ap chahe toh ek hug deti hoo

She tighly hugged him,he hold her

Nt:koi baat nah ap dena nah chahthi h toh na sahi mujhe koi problem na h

He began 2 kiss her suddently they heard karans crying,akshi ran 2wards his room,he was standing infront of tv

Ak:kya huwa karan???

K:mamma cartoon nah aa rah h

Natik went @ checked

Nt:oh?no?ye teek nah hoga connection mein kuch problem h

Karan cried loudly hearing this

Natil take him 4m her

Nt:har baat par maa ki tarah rona zaroori h kya?

Ak:acha toh apki tarah har baat par gussa hona chahiye ab mere b koi quality hona chahiye na?.

Nt:isse ap quality kehthe h ye toh apki weapon h??hame patane keliye??.. chaliye karan hum hide @ seek khelthe h

Karans face lightened up

Ak:hide @ seek??. yaham

Nt:haa?bahuth maza ayega

Ka:ha mamma khelo na

Ak:teek h

Nt:ladies 1rst??pehle ap?..

She closed her eyes @ karan @ natik went 2 hide she started searching she was sure that natik would hide in such places were he could easily watch her.@ her calculation doesnt went wrong

Nt:apko kaisa pata h ki mein yahi chup rah the

Ak:apki dil ki awaaz jo h na apki muuh ki awaaz se teza h acha chalo ab apki baari?.

Nt:dekhligiye mein b apko kaise doonta hoo

She fastly take karan @ went 2 hide but karan didn't like it as he wants 2 play alone so he tried 2 get down 4m her lap but akshi didn't leave him natik heard their murmering @ came behind her he was about 2 spot akshi but he take the name of karan,karan knew that he become out due 2 akshi so he gave some hits at akshi 2 went

Akshi went 2 hide natik followed her they were sitting behind a sofa natik take the opportunity @ wrapped around her,he slowly placed kisses on her face

Ak:nt?..kya kar arh h?.

Nt:vah jo ab kar rah h

Ak:nt?.

Nt:sh?.itna acha mauka h karan hame doonthe rahenge aur hum yaham?..

Ak;toh apki ye plan tha chodiye?.bhadmash kahika

Nt: bhadmash ho ya shythan mein apk nah chodoonga

Akshi :pls?..

Nt:toh mujhe ek sweet kiss digiye

She gave it on his 4head

Nt:ye toh bless kiss h mujhe sweet kiss chahiye

Ak:ye kya naya shuru kiya apne

Nt:mein samjhata hoo na apko

1. He kisses her on 4head ye h bless kiss

2. '''''''' Cheek sweet kiss

3. Neck romatic kiss

4. Lips passionate kiss

and next hota h hot kiss but before that she pushed him away

ak:pata nah apko ye faltu batein kaham se milthe h

nt:apke pyaar me se

karan was still searching 4 them as usual he applied his usual trick he acted as if he was crying and he increased his volume were he found the probability of finding her,akshi heard this but natik hold her back

nt:ap mat jayiye vo apko ullu bana rah h

akshi dint hear his words @ ran 2wards him.as soon as he saw her he screamed""mamma ko pakad gaya""

akshi felt angry

nt:meine kaha tha na mat jayiye

she was about 2 sat something natik @ karan said it 2gether::""jaisa baap vaisa beta""

nt:yah h na hum samajh gay

she went @ sat on the sofa natik @ karan came @ sat beside her

ak:ab mujhe aur pareshan kiya na toh mein,,,mein iss pani mein khoo doonga

they smiled seeing her anger

nt:ak,hamare baarre mein na sah yahaam ki logon ke baaare me toh sochiye phir unka kya haal hoga

ak;matlab me itni buri hooo

they began 2 ran through the whole house boat,whenever she got him she hitted him 2 he tried 2 defend her, 2 they reached on the aove floor they stopped there @ laughed out loudly

he gently pull her 4ward as he steps the rest of the distance between them

nt:I love u ak

ak:lv u 22 natik

he put her hair 2 a side @ kisses her on shoulder he widened their arms @ hold each other(titanic posse)

nt:isse kehthe h titanic posse

ak:vo kya hota ??

nt:ye b nah jaati,titanic film me hero heroin titanic ship jo duniya sabse khoobsoorat ship tah uske edge par jaakr isse khade hote h

ak:acha aur uske bhadh??..

he turned her @ put his lips on her @ kissed her tightly

nt:aur uske bhadh? hero heroin ko isse kiss karthe h

akshi hitted him 2 hide her shyness

ak:toh ye b hoga na apke uss film me

nt:nah har ladki apki tarah thodi na h jo apne pati se door bhagthe rahethe h

ak:dhat?..

nt:chaliye hum uss chair par baitthe h

ak:vaham toh ek h chair h

nt:toh kya huwa hum b ek h na!!!!!!!!!

he sat on the chair @ make her sat on his lap he trapped her in his eyes

nt:aka p roz dj aur baaki ghar waalon ko kush karne keliye bhajan ghati h par aj tak mere liye kuch nah gaya mere liye ek gana gaa digiye

ak:yaham nah,,,bhadh me?

nt:(caressing her)kya bhadh mein?.pls..

ak:teek h par apko b mereliye ek gana padega

nt:teek h

ak:hm?toh mein kaunsa gawoon??

Nt:jo b

Ak:hm?

Nt:to hap mujhe dekhiye ab jo b gana apke man me ayega vo gaa digiye

Akshi turned mischevious.she wrapped her arms around his neck 2 gave a romantic look at him.he closed his eyes expecting a very romantin c song soon he opened his eyes hearing

Maa ka Laadla Bigad Gaya

Maa ka Laadla Bigad Gaya

Maa ka Laadla Bigad Gaya

She hummed these lines 2 laughed out ,natik sat there with a serious face clearly proving he didn't like this joke

She smiled seeing his cutness @ sing these line by palacing her hands on his cheeks

Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz
Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz

Na koi hai na koi tha zindage mein tumhaare siva
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz

Ho chaandni jab tak raat deta hai har koi saath
Tum magar andheron mein na chhodna mera haath
Ho chaandni jab tak raat deta hai har koi saath
Tum magar andheron mein na chhodna mera haath

She completed singing continuously looking in 2 his eyes even with out blinking

She brought herlips 2 his eyelids @ melted her love on it,she heartfuuly smiled at him 2 asked him 2 sing

Nt:nah nah ak me apki tarah itne ache se anh gaa saktha

Ak:koi baat nah nt,me ye koi completion thodi na h ap dil se ga didiye

Nt:nah aka p kuch aur kahiye

Ak:teek h

She angrily got up 2 go but he started singing while bringing her in his lap

Ho?????????????????

ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga
Ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga
Jaise khilta gulaab
Jaise shaayar ka khwaab
Jaise ujli kiran
Jaise van mein hiran
Jaise chaandni raat
Jaise naghme ki baat
Jaise mandir mein ho ek jalta diya
Ho ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga

when he completed singing his singing he embraced her realizing her presence in his life she caressed him back as if she was other half of him...

precap:: continuation of these surprises!!!!

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Edited by i4naksh - 14 years ago
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ashattiye im speechless...fantastic update 👏👏👏👏 thudakkam thanne gambheeram...karaninte koode ulla masthi adipoli...kissinte varieties kollam...hot kiss entanennu paranjillallo😉 songs rendum ente fav aanu...so loved it...ee partinu ente vaka ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ ithirikkatte😃 hide and seek ugran aayirunnu...cvs ithellam kandu padikkatte...ennum vazhakku undakkunathilalla midukku vendathu...ithupole nalla imagination venam..hats of to u ashatti😃😃👏👏👏⭐️⭐️
Edited by pvlaks - 14 years ago
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wow asha superb as always thanks 4 the pm
Edited by nishi755 - 14 years ago
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asaual fantastic👍🏼 feeling short of words khud hi samaj lena...👏👏👏👏👏
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that was a lot of kisses awsomeee update loved it

Edited by shayal1436 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pvlaks

ashattiye im speechless...fantastic update 👏👏👏👏 thudakkam thanne gambheeram...karaninte koode ulla masthi adipoli...kissinte varieties kollam...hot kiss entanennu paranjillallo😉 songs rendum ente fav aanu...so loved it...ee partinu ente vaka ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ ithirikkatte😃 hide and seek ugran aayirunnu...cvs ithellam kandu padikkatte...ennum vazhakku undakkunathilalla midukku vendathu...ithupole nalla imagination venam..hats of to u ashatti😃😃👏👏👏⭐️⭐️

hot kiss ariyanam alle😉😉😳😳kallii athu ningalku vittu thanirikunnu😳😳😳 thank u so much😃
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Originally posted by: i4naksh

hot kiss ariyanam alle😳kallii athu ningalku vittu thanirikunnu😳😳😳 thank u so much😃


ennalum ashattide vayeennu kekkan nalla rasamalle😳😳

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