Originally posted by: Hinakshara
Saru di,beautiful part.first of all i want 2 say sorry 2 u di.as i said i didnt give u a longer comment 4 ur previous part.i know this time also im late.due 2 roza i didnt get time 2 read ur part.now read it nd i luvd it.girls plan was superb.their each reasons were amazing.i think it would b more rofling if u gave d boys reasoning also.nd d most luvd part is ofcourse naksh's ni8 walk.i giggled when they made diff reasons 4 escaping 4rm der respective rooms.luvd d naitik's words,beautiful di.nd der convo,wow.nd u always put naksh's previous memories like in this part ek saal pehle ka n8 drive,some other part u mentioned abt d shawl that naitik bought 4rm shimla,etc.these r closely connected ur ff with d show.nd i luvd d last naksh scene,that too beautiful,flower rain 4 naksh.i always dreamt abt this scene 4 our naksh.show mein nahi mila,but u did it 🤗Now eagerly w8ing 4 d match.i know it is going 2 b hilarious.i think d nxt part will b on new thread.congrats di.HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY 😃
hey rasha... its ok dear... thanku so much for the awesome n long comment... I'm so happy that u liked the parts... n haa I wrote the dialogues to impress men too... but thought they will be boring n so removed them... as u want to know them too I'll post here...
Here in the boys side… they r also trying the same way to convince the men. They start complaining on girls.
Shourya: woh log sirf humare nahi aapka bhi burayiyan keh rahe hai…
DJ: ke??
Naitik: bhabhimaa ne kaha ki woh sirf sab ke saamne aapko dekhkar darne ki natak karte hai… lekin sach mein toh aap unse darte hai… (DJ: kee??? Aise kaha humre baare mein…. )
Naitik: haa daddaji bhabhami naa aise hi kaha… mein kyu joot bolunga… aur bauji ko maa ne kaha ki bauji bhi maa se bahut darte hai… isiliye woh high command bula bulakar unke peeche peeche hi ghoomta rehta hai… (RB: gayatriji ne aisa kaha??)
Shourya: aur bauji maa ne kaha ki aap ko unki chinta samjhta hi nahi… hamesha kaamon mein doobi rehte hai… (vish: pata nai yeh shourya ki maa chinta mein kya kya bolti rehti hai…)
Mohith: isiliye hum sab ne cricket khelne ka bet rakha hai… lekin aap log is umar mein kya khel paauge?? Lagta hai hame anthakshari ki tarah ise bhi haarna hoga…
DJ: kyu haarna hai?? hum bhi kuch kam nahi hai… hum itne bhi budhe naa hai ki hum khel na saku… mein aaj bhi roj sair par jatha hu… mein bilkul teek hu…
RB: haa… bilkul sahi kaha aap daddaji… hume jeetna hi hoga…
Vish: ji… yahi teek hoga…
I removed them as I felt they may be boring... there may be many grammatical mistakes too in that as that portion was not corrected by chotu... 😃...
Even I would like to memorize previous parts naksh... there r really awesome moments in the show which they spent together... I'm so glad that u liked them... 😃... I hope next part also make u smile... 😃
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