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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hinakshara

Kya yaar tumne ff strt bhi kiya.i thought u will strt it 2morrow.der4 i went offline.online aayi tho 6 pages...hey stuti,mast title suggestions yaar.im laughing like mad.i thought tum logone sej k ff post ko cc bana dali.d title is just jhakhas.vry attractive.ab isko highest trp milne se koi nahi rok sakthi.ab title hi ithni mazedar hai tho ff tho waisa hi hoga na.hoga na sej?nice intro yaar.ek aur baath,tum stuti ki baath mat manna,i want longer parts.mein tumhari ff ki fan banne ki main reason yeh hai ki u writes longer parts vry beautifully.sorry stuti,mujse naraz mat hona,plzzz...hey sej,w8ing 4 d 1st part.thanks 4 d pm.


seju.;.. credit mein mera aur ss ka naam add kar.. chal chal... add kar🤣
rasha di.. y will i get angry on u?? 😆

seju... mere ff ki trp badhane ki jimmedari ab teri... plz... increase the pages yr.. plz!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
Every Day May Not Be Good But
There's Something
G o o d
In Everyday

G o o d
M o R n I n G
Have A Blessed Day
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53


Here is part one :D.. ok one thing I want to tell everyone is that in this FF or any of my FF's you will find minimal Hindi the main reason being I don't know that much of Hindi I can understand and talk in it but writing it get a bit confusing so sry to those who want Hindi parts I will try to incorporate some sentences but the whole part will never be in Hindi.. Other then that enjoy the part and happy reading :D

Part 1

It's a beautiful morning in the city of Mumbai the sun is rising the birds are chirping singing there melodious songs to wake up the sleepy town all in all everything looks perfect. The light dew on the green grass, flowers opening to the morning sun to take in the nutrients.. soon the city will be full and packed with people coming and going to work. Sigh… this is going to be a perfect day I just know it. You know how sometime you wake up in the morning and know it will be a day filled with excitement and joy…well yep that's what I feel today.

I admired the beautiful morning out my window when I heard my alarm go off… I couldn't get my self to go to sleep because I was waiting for today for almost a week now… so I thought I would admire the rising of the day and I'm glad I did. I glanced at the clock on my wall and panicked to see the time 7:15Am YIKES im going to be late.. I cant afford to be late for my first interview.. I rushed in the bathroom to get freshened up.. and take a quick shower.. Pulled on my outfit for the day and rushed down stairs to see my whole family gathered in front of the temple to pray… I slowly creped behind my brother and stood there not uttering a sound. The prayer was done I took blessings from my elders and rushed out the door in order to reach my destination on time and promising my family I will tell them everything once I'm back…

After all the yelling and pleading with the taxi driver and the traffic I finally reached my destination… Oberoi Empire!. I rushed inside and told the receptionist my information and was escorted to the waiting room… I waited for 10 measly minutes before I was called in the exclusive manager for design's cabin (Mr. Arun Oberoi) . I took a deep breath sent a silent prayed to god and knocked on the door.

May I come in sir… come in was all I heard… good morning sir I am…

Arun: Oh Ms. Akshara Maheshwari please be seated I was just waiting for you..

A: shocked to see such a young guy for a manager.. Smiles and sits down..

Arun: so how about we get the interview started. He took my file that I was holding as if my life depended on it and gave that to him.. I was trying to read his face while he was reading the file.. was he impressed not impressed… So why designing?

A: huh… I looked at him bewildered… he smiled at me and said don't be nervous I won't kill you… I asked why are you interested in designing and that to fashion designing… Oh.. well you see sir I feel that someone's clothes can really tell someone about them self's and there personalities.

Arun: but what if someone is not comfortable with lets say the modern fashion clothes but they are just wearing that to fit in..

A: the discomfort shows up on there face, no matter how hard they try to hide it. And I believe one should not be discouraged or afraid to unleash there discomfort when it comes to clothes and fashion. If someone is wearing clothes just to fit in I would really look down upon those people because I feel everyone has the right to wear and do what they want and so you should not be scared of anything.. you should live your life fearless…

Arun: hmm interesting.. so why should we hire you?

A: smile (feeling more confident in her self).. Because sir I believe that I can bring more innovative ideas and creations to this business, which will help the business reach at a different level a higher and successful level… it would also give me the opportunities to learn from experts like your self and also give me a chance to improve my skills in designing.

Arun: But you do know if you do get hired you will be working under me and you wont be called a designer.. you would be a semi designer.. and you will have to escalate upwards.. I nodded my head signaling I know.. ok one last thing if we hire you.. you will be working long hours and on weekends and you will have to give us new creations every other week. Will you be able to accomplish all the tasks and short notices given to you?

A: yes sir, I am a fan of fast paced environments, and I love challenges and new tasks it makes life more interesting…

Arun: hands back my file… alright we will call you tomorrow morning giving you the information on when and where to go for your orientation and training.. Congratulations and welcome to Oberoi empire.. I'm sure you will make all of us proud..

I was shocked beyond my own life was he joking or was I dreaming… when realization slowly drawn upon my tiny head I was way to excited to listen to anything and I guess Mr. Arun saw that and so he just smiled and told me I was free to go… Thank you so much sir.. im so happy and yes Sir I promised you will not be disappointed with my work..

Arun: good.. ( as I was making my way towards the door) oh Akshara one more thing.. Everyone in this company is like a family so we call everyone by there first name so please call me Arun no sir ok?

A: I smiled at him and nodded and stepped out of the cabin.. walked out of the building and jumped in glee…. Yippee I did it I did it I got the job in Mumbai's best designing firm yes…. And with that excitement I headed towards home…

Preview Natik's appearance and Naksh meet… will it be on a good foot or bad only I know that ( ok I lied even I don't know yet it depends on how I feel lol )

Hope you liked part 1 it came out shorter then expected sry :P

And I will give a more clear picture all the characters once Natik is introduced :D

If any questions then plz ask.. I mean I know I went from Akshara talking to her thoughts to her actions and it may have confused ppl so sry bout that.. but if you did get lost then tell me so for the next part I write it more clearly thnx…

I want lots of comments cause I said that spamming is allowed in this FF so comment away.. and LONG ones as well and press the like button plz :D

PS: if anyone wants a PM plz add me to ur buddy list :D

Pss: sry for any mistakes didn't have time to re-read :P

Edited by sejal719 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
res!
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im back wid my first post.. yippeee😆
so seju darling... thanx for liking a bad siggy too... oopzzz... i remember SH... no thanx!

u wanted a long comment na.. chalo bhai im chatting here only...
ok.. ok.. i wnt violate rules sej... chill... if i do violate them.. my gujju power will save me from getting banned😆 missing jaanu yr...😭

ok.. coming back to ur ff...
loved it... its awesome.. waiting for naksh meet.. dnt u dare tell me b4 hand.. that the pehli mulaakaat is gonna b a fight or not a fight😉 i wanna read it myself!

lovely awesome fantastic part👏
dnt need to say cont soon😛

p.s. if this is SHORTER than expected.. wat WAS expected? anyways.. perfedct length i ges!

😉
Edited by stuti_naksh4eva - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
wow seju,,,,,,gr8 work as usual👏👏👏👏,,,,,,ur writin is jst fab⭐️⭐️⭐️
akshara as a designer,,,,,,nt bad,,,,,nw waitin badly fr naitik,,,,bring him soom...😃😃
waitin fr ur nxt part😃😉😉
Edited by .aastha. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
seju... 1st part is too good... morning scene was explained so beautifully... n different story too... loved it so much... hatsoff to ur writing skills dear... do continue this as soon as possible...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
wow seju your ff was nice i like the way potary the ff and must say your FF IS like i am reading a interting novel you done fab job👏 yaar
next part please pm me yaar do not forget
Edited by fazeel - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58

awesome update...u r a very good writer.keep up the good work...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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seju.. trp badha... reply to my comment.. kab se wait kar rahi hun meri sa!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very Nice and this ff looks different from other Naksh ffs I have read before Concept is innovative...I liked it😃...waiting for Naitik's entry😛...Thanks for PM

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