aite so i no im late and u might be ready to kill me but i was a bit busy and i wanted to be 1st but since you like to update on days im not on i cant really do anything bout that 😆...
loved the part very very cute.. had my fav parts the LETTER it was cute very cute and touching loved this line the best "i can not live widout u... aap se mera din hota hai... aapse meri raat.,.. u are everything to me..."
i even like the family intro they all seemed nice and sweet now i hope they stay like that and not become annoying 😆😆😆 cause if they do i will be very very upset and hurt them...( yes them not u cause your my sh and i cant live without you so i must hurt them 😆)...
i also liked the beach idea i love the beach and so it was the best now all i want is for them to get married and have very lovable moments lol... and oh ye that reminds me i also like the part when natik says akshi is 8 hrs and 30 mins late and i liked his response i laughed at that 😆...
awesome part loved it so much ur an awesome writer and ur story is getting better ever part so keep it up sh 🤗
now the song i loved the song you picked it so cute and u have to teach me how to do that as well so be ready to teach me on my ff on monday pretty plz 😛
loved the part plz write more soon and tty soon love you my sh and i wont say thnx for the pm cause thats against the rules 😆
tc
lots of love
Sejal <3
Edited by sejal719 - 14 years ago
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