My First FF::: Pyaar Hua... Chupke Se, part 15,122

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Posted: 14 years ago

#661

awesome part..!😛

thanks for d pm..!

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Sej

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Posted: 14 years ago

#662

wow how did i give u that idea 😕 but ___you for the credit 🤗

and now for ur note i acutlly would like if u explain the peperrations and all it would be sweet to read and while the peperations are going on both naksh dieing to meet each other but cant lol... and i really dont mind if u explain the SR cause i wont feel awkward because i have read many FF's that have explained things in very very detail 😉 so yep do it in any way you want and if u need help just ask :)... and now i have to read 28 pms so ttyl bye :D

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Sej

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Posted: 14 years ago

#663

lovely update Sh loved it and i cant wait to read the next part this is going to be so much fun to read and yay natik is going to propose i cant wait :D... write more sooon :D

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Stuti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#664

Originally posted by: sejal719
wow how did i give u that idea 😕 but ___you for the credit 🤗

and now for ur note i acutlly would like if u explain the peperrations and all it would be sweet to read and while the peperations are going on both naksh dieing to meet each other but cant lol... and i really dont mind if u explain the SR cause i wont feel awkward because i have read many FF's that have explained things in very very detail 😉 so yep do it in any way you want and if u need help just ask :)... and now i have to read 28 pms so ttyl bye :D

lolzz... u only told na.. to increase the trp... post notes!
so.. credit to u...

sej... i noe u wudnot mind a detailed sr... infact we 2 will b the last ones to mind.. but i got to know others point na!
and ya.. i need help.. and i will ask u wenever i need! do u think i will hesitate... ???😡

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Stuti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#665

Originally posted by: Sachi16
Hey Chutki... Nice Update...👏

Well, I don't know Maneet so, can't comment on that... but Yeah Precap looks promising... 😊

Just a friendly suggestion... Make Proposal looks real... too much lovey dovey & eyelock, kisses... looks filmy... and plz don't make proposal location too grand to exist... chose location like normal boy chooses... and Make Naitik propose her like a boys do in our lives... simple yet different which can make Akshi feel Special... 😃 (sorry for too many suggestions... but I like ur FF... like ur way of writing ... so want you to add the real life touch to it... 😃)

Your writing is definately improving from first part... I like the humouros Naitik... makes a joke like we friends do while talking to each other... Naitik definately looks one of us in your FF... and about Akshi.. she is to best.. she is independent, confident, smart and yet she is grounded to Indian Traditions... and that's the best part of your FF.. I like Akshi the most... way to go girl... keep up the good work... 👍🏼

di.. u come online... i will tell u what is my idea! i hope u like it! or else.. ill pm u.. thats better!
glad u liked it... thanx for commenting di!

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Sej

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Posted: 14 years ago

#666

@ sh ohhh ok now i no what u mean

and yes ask away and see u no me so well :)... i wont mind one bit the more wilder the better :)

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Stuti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#667

Originally posted by: sejal719
@ sh ohhh ok now i no what u mean
and yes ask away and see u no me so well :)... i wont mind one bit the more wilder the better :)

i knew it..i told some ppl i already noe few who wont mind more more more more romance! and i can assure u dat... n u noe i meant u

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Sej

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Posted: 14 years ago

#668

Originally posted by: stuti_naksh4eva
i knew it..i told some ppl i already noe few who wont mind more more more more romance! and i can assure u dat... n u noe i meant u

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