My First FF::: Pyaar Hua... Chupke Se, part 15,122 - Page 69

Originally posted by: anveshasharma

hey stuts,like always,superb part dear.though naksh romance was less,but i enjoyed it,it was a lovely part sweety.n thanx 4 d epi update n pm,cont soon...n sry 4 d short comment as i have to go...it was just

Oye teri...😲

Originally posted by: sejal719

wont u join us in cc anvi?😭

waiting for u to come online anvi... miss u loads😭

Originally posted by: sia.k_1

Oye teri...😲

Tera kisses wala part😳 serial mein dekhne ko nahi mile itne😆

Well, I'll be frank, I loved the maneet part and mera interest wahi tha...😳

I remember, Mahi too had merged YRKKH with DMG in her FF once, that too rocked..mergers do rock..and stuti, you have awesome writing skills baby😊... very well written scenes for naksh as well maneet...me loved it😳

im sooo glad u liked it! thanks... 😊

PART 12

Hey ppl... i hope u all are waiting for this part... u noe the summary... bas.. yeh jaanna baki hai... ki naitik akshi ko propose kaise karta hai... kahan karta hai... kya kehta hai woh apni akshi se? Kya hota hai reaction apni akshi ka... so.. widout wasting more time.. i m gonna start this part...

Akshara was waiting from Saturday nite to see what is there in the packet naitik gave her... but.. somehow.. she controlled.. she didn't want to break the promise she had given her beloved...

Finally...the clock strucks 2.30 and akshi rips open the gift wrapped packet naitik had given her..

She is delighted to see the gift...

She moves her hand over the saree... sooo beautiful.. she says instinctively...

She jumps up from her bed and starts to get ready... she takes complete 1 hour to get dressed up...

With her red and black saree worn perfectly.. a small bindi between her eyebrows... kajal, blush on, delicate earings, sweet chain, cute pendant and manicured nails.. she looks stunning...

She is still giving final touches to her look.. her perfectly combed straight long dense and black hair... wen naitik comes to pick her up... he is very excited for today.. he has planned everything very very well... nothing.. no one.. not even god can flop his perfect plan... no rain.. no sun... no winds.. nothing can destroy his plan...

Naitik honks his car... akshi takes her clutch in her hand... and swiftly moves downwards... opens the gate of her hostel.. and waits for naitik to come outside his car... naitik is astounded by akshis beauty... he is completely lost in her... there is a cute eye lock between the today... naitik staring at this heavenly girl.. and akshi.. at this faery's son... who today is looking his best... spotless white ironed shirt,.. and a killing smile on his face!

No sooner do they settle in the car than akshi speaks...

A; naitik.. thank you thank you thank you sooo much.. and hugs him.. mujhe yeh gift bahut bahut bahut pasand aaya... wow... itni achchi saree hai naitik... thank you sooo much...

N; is very happy... smiles... aapke saamne kuch bhi nai hai akshara...

A; naitik... yeh saree bahut mehengi...

N; aap singhanias ki bahu banne wali hai.. mehenge saste ka sochna bhi chhod dijiye!

A; smiles... par naitik..

N; shhh... aaj sirf.. aap, mein aur hum...

A; achcha... lekin karma toh nai hai.. jahan hum band ho sake 😆

N; 😆 aapko toh bahut jaldi hai.. kahe toh le jau mein... kamre mein 😉

A; kya aap bhi naitik... mein mazaak kar rahi thi!

N; mein kahan serious hun...

A; hona bhi nai chahiye... aap hospital pahuch gaye.. toh mujhe itni achchi saree mein hospital aana padega!

N; 😆

A; 😆

Soon naitik parks his car... he tells akshi to close her eyes... she does as she is told to...

Naitik gets out of the car.. opens the door... gets akshi out of the car.. locks the car... and turns akshi so that her back is facing him...

He takes out a red band from his pocket... and ties it gently over akshis eyes... then he takes her hand in his.. and they walk towards that place wer naitik is gonna propose akshara...

Sambhal ke akshara.. yahan step hai.. akshara.. idhar rough ground hai.. sambhal ke... this way.. naitik guides akshi towards the place...

Finally... he makes akshara stand still...

Akshi experiences cool breeze on her face... she cant feel naitik... she gets frightened..

A; naitik...

N; ab aap apni aakhein khol sakti hai...

A; akshi removes the band from her eyes.. and is shocked to see naitik sitting on a wooden groud.. on his one knee...

A; naitik...

N; tum paas aaye... yun muskuraye... tumne na jaane kya... sapne dikhaye...

Ab toh mera dil... jaage na sota hai... kya karu haye... kuch kuch hota hai...

Kya karun haye... kuch kuch hota hai...

Akshara... meine jabse aapko dekha hai.. tabse meine aapko chaha hai... akshara.. aapko dekhne se pehle.. milne se pehle.. pyaar kya.. eh mein nai jaanta tha... aapne mujhe pyaar ka matlab samjhaya... aapne mujhe jeena sikhaya... aapne mujhe sapne dekhna sikhaya.. mujhe chahna sikhaya... care karna sikhaya... treasure karna sikhaya... aap meri hasi hai.. aap meri zindagi... kya aap mujhe apnakar karke mujhe duniya ka sabse lucky insaan bana degi? Kya aap mera haath thaamkar mujhe sahara dekar mera sapna haqiqat bana dengi? Kya aap mujhse shaadi karengi?

Akshara if filled with tears of joy.. she experiences the best moment of her life... she is crying happiness... she holds naitiks hand...

A; tum jo aaye... zindagi mein.. baat ban gayi.. (she sings while crying)

Ishq mazhab.. ishq meri.. zaat ban gayi... (she puts forward her other hand for naitik)

Sapne teri.. chahton ke.. sapne teri.. chahton ke..(naitik gives his other hand)

dekhti hun.. ab kayi... (she makes him stand while singing)

din hai sona.. aur chandi... raat ban gayi... (naitik on his feet now)

ho... tum jo aaye zindagi mein... baat ban gayi... (they hug each other)

wen she hugs him.. she realizes that she can see nothing but water ahead of her...

they separate from their hug...

a; naitik... yeh hum kahan hai...

naitik turns akshi.. she is surprised to see...

a; naitik... yacht?

N; hmm...kaisi jagah hai naitik...

A; wowww... aapne itni saari planning ki naitik... wow...

She takes a look at the whole yacht...

A; wow naitik.. yahan bas hum do hi jan hai? Aapne yeh poori yacht hamare liya book ki?

N; haan sweetheart... he holds her hands...

She hugs him tightly...

A; thanx naitik.. mein bahut lucky hun...

N; mein bhi...

They both exchange a smile..

Akshara goes to the end of the yacht.. to experience the cool breeze brushing over her face...

Naitik comes from behind, and puts his both arms around her stomach... and his face.. on her shoulder...

They both enjoy the cool breeze for some time... then naitik kisses her collar bone.. then her neck.. then her cheek... he turns akshi.. and kisses her forhead... her cheek... her neck.. and her collarbone...

Akshi is enjoying... she is a bit nervous though...

Naitik is worried what will akshi think if he gets further.. he stops after this... and asks for a lip kiss...

Akshi is a bit nervous... she thinks a little.. and then closes her eyes putting forward her lips...

Naitik comes closer to her.. and kisses her forehead... and says...

N; mere paas uske liye puri zindagi padi hai...

A; smiles... kisses his cheek.. and they both go inside the yacht for dinner...

During dinner... both of them stare at each other.. theres soft romantic music playin in the background.. they both are extremely happy... they do not want to get out of here...

But, alas! They have too...

They both reach home safely by 10, and spend the night dreaming bout each other...

TO BE CONTINUED...

I hope u all like this part...

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wat a lovely part stuti👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
loved it❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
naitik is jst 2 cute,,,,n the way of expressing his love was jst mindblowin😍😍😍😍😍n akshara was also so good😃😃😃😃
u write with such a passion sweety,,,loved ur each n evry line👏,,,,u chosed very nyc songs as well👏👏👏😍
nw waitin fr more n more😍😍😍😍😍,,,,,,continue soon...😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

woww chotu... nice onee... compeltely loved the way he proposed...
n their kisses r also too cute... akshi in red saree n naitik in white shirt... wowww... superb...
they r so sweet n sooo cutee... ofcourse they r romantic too... 😳

n haa u made me wait for so long for this part... finally intazaar ka phal meeta hua hai...(sorry if i spelt it wrong)...

ok chotu... I'm going to continue this more as u need long comment... haa forgot to say it before... ur song selection is superb... I can imagine akhsara herself singing it... but naitik needs background singer yaar... 😆😆... but that part was alsooo sooo cute... loved it...

lolz.. i wil update soon yr! chil... still writing the part