Tum Dena Saath Mera-Naksh FF part 13 @ pg 47..

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Posted: 15 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: divi4u
hey very nice part yaar👏👏......so romantic😳
cont soon👍🏼

u didnt PM me this time😭😭😭

m so sry divi.. actually i was very busy.. i actually wrote this part in 10 mins.. n i ddn get tym to pm u all..

but i promise.. next part will soon be ready.. n i'l pm u pakka.!!!!!

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Divya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: moonlight08
m so sry divi.. actually i was very busy.. i actually wrote this part in 10 mins.. n i ddn get tym to pm u all..
but i promise.. next part will soon be ready.. n i'l pm u pakka.!!!!!

its ok yaar.......u need not to be sorry🤗

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sia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#203

awesum part yaar....😃.. keep up the gud work⭐️

Edited by sia.k_1 - 15 years ago

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@--Pravz--

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Posted: 15 years ago

#204

wowwwwwwww!👏👏! ....sry for d delay coment😕 ..i din see ua upated partt😕 ...nywy i loved it ..soooooooooooooooooo cuteeee! .😳😳😳😳
..update it soon yaa😉 ..um w8itng for akshiz masti n all .😉😉😉.

cuteely updateddd! .👏👏.loved it ..😛😛😛😛

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sapna

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Posted: 15 years ago

#205

very nice part yar....5⭐️

Edited by sapnashinde1 - 15 years ago

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sapna

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Posted: 15 years ago

#206

plzzz pm me when u update next part. soooooooooo nice👏👏👏👏👏👏😃😃😃😃😃😊😊😊😊⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Edited by sapnashinde1 - 15 years ago

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priya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#207

Very sweet update dear👏👏👏👏. Like it. Finally both NAITIK & AKSHARA are all alone in big SINGHANIA house....

Parrty time.

But AKSHI is very smart...MAHARAJ ji Ur GULAABO ko bhi chutti de di. like her that craetivity. But NAITIK kabhi nahi sudharega........poor AKSHI ko rula diya tha. JAAIE AAPSE BAAT NAHI KARUGA....ye bhi koi baat hai...

But innocent AKSHI NAITIK ka joke bhi nahi samajhti hai

She always give that expression only Shocked

😆

But KULFI & LASSi idea is gr888. Waiting for nice scenes & romatic scenes. And ya Sure AKSHI look gr88 in pink sareee. Waise unpar sabhi coilue suit karte hai..isiliye toh NAITIK unpar fida rehte hai.

My fingers r crossed 4 beautiful LASSI & KULFi scene Fingers Crossed

For ur tremendous job.......

Loved your update. But also I m sad...u didnot PMd me Why????/

Edited by pankhi - 15 years ago

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..Akaisha..

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Posted: 15 years ago

#208

hey awesome part..continue soon nd plzz pm me...

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457639

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Posted: 15 years ago

#209

@ pankhi..

really sry ayr.. actually was in hurry dat's y ddn get tym to pm u.. next tym pakka.!!

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457639

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Posted: 15 years ago

#210

hello guys..

frist of all.. heartfelt apologies to all for not pm'ing u the update.. actually was in a hurry.. n also.. sry for updating after sucha long tym.. just got busy with the skool work.. neways.. here u go with part 9...

Part 9..

akshara and naitik reach the place where they are supposed to eat kulfi.. the car hasn't even stopped properly but akshara.. who is so excited to eat that she starts to open the car door..

Naitik ( jumping forward to hold her hand..) : arre.. arre akshara.. kya kar rhi hai aap.?? gir jaati to.?? mujhe gaadi to dhang se rokne dijiye..

Akshara (on realising wat was she trying to do) : oh.. sry naitik.. vo main rok hi nhi payi apne aap ko.. ab to aapne gadi rok di hai na.. to ab to jaane dijiye mujhe.. chodiye na mujhe..

Naitik : nhi.. main nhi chodunga aapko.. vo kya hai na.. aapko kulfi nhi mil sakti aaj..

Akshara : arre.. par kyon.??

Naitik : kyonki mere pas paise nhi hai..

Akshara : paise.?? diye to the maine paise aapko ghar se nikalte hue..

Naitik : arre main vo paison ki nhi.. doosre paison ki baat kr rha hu..

Akshara : kon se.. chillad.?? aap chinta mat kijiye.. mere pas hai vo.. chaliye ab..

Naitik : meri bholi si wife.. main un paison ki nahi.. kisi aur paison ki baat kar rha hu..

Akshara : aur kon se paise hote hai naitik.??

Naitik : vahi paisa.. jo aapke hontho se mere gaal tak aaega..

Akshara (on realising wat naitik is trying to say) : kya hai naitik aapko.. mera kulfi khane ka itna man hai.. par aap hai ki mujhse kiss maang rhe hai..

Naitik : dekh lijiye.. jab tak mujhe meri fees nahi milegi.. tab tk aapko main kulfi bhi nhi khane dunga.. baithi rhiega fir aap.!!

Akshara : abi to main aapki baat man rhi hu.. aap ghar chaliye.. fir dekhiye.. kaise fees deti hu main aapko..

n she very quickly kisses her husband.. that kiss.. though was on the cheek n lasted just for a few seconds.. was full of love.. naitik was completely mesmerised by akshara's beauty.. the way she talked.. the way she bestowed her love on him.. for naitik.. the world stood still.. just with a small kiss from akshara..

Akshara : ab naitik.. plz chaliye..

they both enter the kulfi shop.. and akshara ordered 2 kulfis..

Naitik : aap do kyon mangwa rhi hai.?? ek hi mangwaiye.. main nhi khaunga.. sirf aapko khate hue dekhunga..

Akshara : to maine to aapke lie mangwai hi nhi hai.. aap ko bhi khani thi.?? sry naitik.. main bhul gyi.. 2 kulfiyan to main apne lie mangwaiye hai..

Naitik is shocked.!! after all.. uski biwi ko uska khayal hi nhi aaya.!!!

she takes both the kulfis.. has the first bite from her right hand.. n second from the left.. n den gives one of them to naitik..

Naitik : kya karu main iska.??

Akshara : kha lijiye..

Naitik : kyon.?? aapko nhi khani.?? mera man nhi hai khane ka..

Akshara : soch lijiye.. itne pyar se pooch rhi hu.. vo bhi kulfi ke liye.. aisa mauka zindagi mein fir kabhi nhi aaega.. baad mein mujhe mat boliega.. ki maine aapko kulfi nhi khilayi..

Naitik : accha.. meri jhansi ki rani.. kha rha hu..

n he has a bite.. while eating the melted kulfi.. he is looking at akshara.. so innocent.. yet so mature.. so simple.. yet so elegant.. naitik is completely smitten by his wife.. he is finding himself the luckiest man on eart.. to have found akshara as his wife...

they share the kulfis.. pay the shopkeeper his share.. n den come back to the car.. they now are going to central market..

in the car.. naitik is secretly smiling..

Akshara : kya hua naitik.?? aap muskura kyon rhe hai.??

Naitik : hm.. soch rha hu kuch..

AKshara : kya.. mujhe bhi btaiye na..

Naitik : soch rha hu.. ki kya yeh vahi akshara hai jo ghar mein sabke kaam karti rehti hai.. chup chap si rehti hai..

Akshara : ha.. naitik.. main vahi akshara hu.. vaise main aapko thank u bolna chahti hu.. NAITIK..

Naitik sudedenly stops the car..

Naitik : kya hua.?? itni tez kyon chillayi aap.??

AKshara : main apna thank u wapis leti hu.. aapne kya socha.?? ki aap mujhe apni baato mein uljha ke rakhenge.. aur main lassi peena bhul jaungi.?? bahut chaalaak hai aap naitik..

Naitik : oho akshara.. ye bat thi.. mujhe dhyan tha... par pta nhi maine roka kyon nhi.. shayad main aapki baton mei kho gya tha.. (he tries to cum closer to her.)

Akshara (pushing him backwards) : bus naitik.. mazaak bad mein.. abhi lassi tym.. chaliye..

Naitik : accha.. chaliye..

both order a glass of lassi.. n share it.....................................................

to be continued..

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