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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi

i have chosen something for FF
sorry i cant write each and every duologue so plz help me
In rituraj's marriage

Every one arrives in rr house in evening
Both families
Maheshwari And Singhania
there is shortage of rooms so akshara and natik are sleeping in different rooms
akshara with rashmi varsha and Nandini
and
natik with mohit rituraj and shaurya
natik is not comfortable
so he goes out in garden
akshara is busy in gossips with all three
and when she lay down for sleep then natik comes in her mind
that he cant adjust
phir vo natik ko dekhne jaati hai ki if is sleeping she will let him sleep otherwise they can talk for a while
the vo dekhti hai ki natik is not there
she starts finding him
she didnt found him even in the garden
what v call that made of cloth somthing jhula type on which v can lie

natik is on that
natik is watching her and akshara comes to that like in back way means ulta chalte chalte usse takara ti hai
and natik gives a big hug to akshara from back
pulls her up on that swing

and akshara is actually verry surprised like thodi darri hui and thoda khush that its natik

akshara and natik talks for sometime and sleep there only


in morning

akshara wakes up wen sunlight comes on her eyes and see that she is sleeping there

and see natik is in deep sleep she shakse natik and say uthiye natik..
natik says plz.. akshara sone dijiye na and turns to another side and falls from that jhool type thing
and akshara ki to hansi chutti ..




wiil continoe soon plz help in adding duologue plz..

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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice start dear
cont. soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hahahaha!very funny there....................nice one, dear.......continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi very cute and funny too :-)😊😊 keep up the good work and continue
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice one please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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impressing start... continue soon... regarding dialogues..... take help from aparna... shez a gud writer... m sure she'll b able to help u out.!!
neways continue soon.!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice start dear !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Keep writing.😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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sorry guys
i have much more pressure of my studies
so may be i would not b able to continue

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