'RALLU KE BAUJI' - UPDATED details on pg 1

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Renu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

thanks dear friends......😳 😳 😳 😳........

suddenly lete lete.......these lines just flowed thru mymind....n i quickly penned them down............

thanks alot...........

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desertrose21

@desertrose21

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

naach uthe hain hormones!! LOL i am glad you didn't forget those! ;)

I can't stop laughing, hilarious lyrics!! 🤣

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Renu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: desertrose21
naach uthe hain hormones!! LOL i am glad you didn't forget those! ;)

I can't stop laughing, hilarious lyrics!! 🤣

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HOW could i have forgotten the HORMONES?????????... 🤪

they were the very INSPIRATION behind this poem............ 🤣

thank u....btw...... 😛

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mahi

@mahi06

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

its to funny renu yaar..........................

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Crazzmatazz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Fantabulous Renu di !!!!!!!!

Iss shayar ko mera salaam 👏

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Charu

@Krinya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

this is a masterpiece..i wanna frame it :D

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San

@sanw

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+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

cant believe

we have so much talent in this forum

good FF, VMs, shayari & now such good poem

great work renu!

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Renu

@-renu-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: _charu_
this is a masterpiece..i wanna frame it :D

o charu......... 😳 ....how sweet of u to say that.....thanks so much......it means a lot to me u know......... 😳.....

u know.....i think i should disclose the names of the 2 people who have inspired me to attempt poetry.....

first, my vedu........he writes beautiful poems u know.......for a 10 yr old....... ⭐️
..n how can i forget the other person...the one n only.....Roshesh Sarabhai....... 😆

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Renu

@-renu-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#19

thank u so much...
..each 1 of u for your support n inspiration.....

...i've joined the forum only since a month now.......
..but i already feel as if i now have an extended family....
.....thanks so much...... 😛

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Nandalala

@Nandalala

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Posted: 15 years ago

#20

Renu, this one's for you, yaar! Thanks for letting me share! Btw, your poem is fantastic...Rallu ke Bauji would be so proud ⭐️...ab toh Sallu koh bulana hi padega...😉

RajS: Hello, kaun?
Sallu (off-screen): Shhh...Raj...kuch na kaho...sirf meri suno...
Arz kiya hai....
Rajshri ne kiya aisa ishara,
Ki Sallu bechara hogaya deewana
Hai, yeh kumbaqt ishq nahi aasaan
Jab tera tamboo hoh aas paas...

Tamboo ko jaana hoga
Mujhe hi kuch karna hoga
Pehle Vish ab yeh tamboo
Dono ko mein uda doonga..

Dil deewana bin sajana ke maane na,
Yeh pagala hai, samjaah ne se samje na
Jaana, mein aarahaan hu...mera intezaar karna...

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