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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey!!!im back guys!!
sorry for being inactive for sumtime.i gave my best shot to my xams!!
will be updating my other posts soon!!
well so yeh rishta has been going good!!

we have to wait till monday to watch another episode and i can't stop thinking abt naksha.
so here is another oneshot well i hope its not bad!!

here goes it......1 ...2 ...3 go!!

naitik and akshara thurrowly enjoyed thier reception.they were really overwhelmed by the surprise given to them by (mohit,reshmi and nandini).most of their guests had left and naksha was downstairs to bid goodbye to akshara's family.it was emotional as usual many hugs and rajshri had tears in her yes.it was a mixed feling.the pain of leaving ehr daughter behind and she was happy at the same time as her daughter is showered with love by naitik's family.
akshara was also teary. bhabhimaa understood this and asked akshara naitik to go upstairs as they may be pretty tired by now!!
naksha went upstairs and naitik saw that akshara was feeling sad.he held her hand and akshara was taken by surprise.she looked up at him and he said that he understands her and he said akshara"i wasnt u to be happy always,now plz smile for me. plz..."
naitik wiped the corner o her eye and gave ehr a cute msile.akshara smiled back.they went to their room .
akshara went to the dresser table and was removing her jewellery .she culdn't open her necklace and she was struggling to remove it.naitik saw this and he came behind akshara and akshara saw him in the mirror.naitik helped her with it and then akshara turned to face him.they had an eyelock sesion and naitik was abt to kiss akshra when our (kabab mein haddi )arrived .
gayatri mom came to their room calling naitik
naitik: ji maa
naitik:yeh maa bhi naa .he makes a pouting face.
akshara laughs and then gayatri came inside. naitik went to his cupboard and took his dress out.he went out to change an gayatri maa said:akshara tum bhi change karlo
akshara :ji aun .. ji maa
gaytri went outside and akshara closed the door and went to change.she started removing the pins and was about to take a saree out og her suitcase when varsha's words flashed in her mind.she took her night dress and wore it.she checked herself in the mirror .one culd say that she was not too comfortable wearing this but she looked decent.
she was abt to remove her earrings when sumone knocked on the door.she wen tto open it and saw gayatri standing here with naitik.
she noticed naitik's reaction.he was stunned to se her.gayatri checked her from top to bottom but din't say anything as rajshekhar called her.naitik entered the room and he closed the door behind him.akshara was pulling at the sides og her dress and she went to remove her earrings.
she felt two hands wrapping around her waist and she saw naitik smiling at her.he removed her hand and he himself removed her earring and he kissed her earlobe.akshara shyed and looked down.hje id the same with the othe earring.
naitik brought his hands forward and cupped her face.he looked at her face an then he unclipped her hair.(woow....)she looked beautiful and he placed a kiss on her forhead.he rested his lips on her forhead for a minute and akshara could feel his breath.
he then said sorry for doubting her and making her sad on the most important day of their life.
akshara fel like crying but she controlled her tears.they went and sat on the bed.naitik liad down resting his head in akshara's lap.
akshara ab mein tumhein meri dil ki bat kehna chahta hoon!! I LOVE U!!!I LOVE U AKSHARA"akshara looked at his face and she culd see the love in his eyes.and he further said that the sole reason why he was heartbroken on their wedding day was he din't want to lose her as he loved her soo much!!



akshara said that she was hurt but now she is so oo happy to have him in his life and naitik promised her that he will be with her for the rest of her life .he took akshara's hands and placed a soft kiss on it 😳😳
he then got up and looked at akshara's face.he said that he made her shed tears and from tday he will make sure that she wuld be happy always.akshara said that she was o happy to get sumone like naitik as her husband.who is soo caring, helping and most importantly loving.and naitik came closer to her.
akshara smiled at him and she said app woh teen sunnna chahta hain na?? .ii .... i love u!!naitik felt that it was the happiest moment in his life.it was the day when they both confessed thier feelings for each other.
naitik came closer ...more closer and then naitik noticed her lips.he wanted to kiss her and culdn't restrict himself and both thier lips met.akshara was shy but she also culdn't control her emotions , she felt a current pass thru her when their lips met she reciprocated the kissthey kissed for a few minutes and broke off when they culdn't breath.
akshara's heart was beating fast and so was naitik's.he akshara blushed relaising what she had done.
naitik ran his hands through her hair and their first date incident came to their mind. both akshara and naitik said "yaad hain hamara 1st date??"
both said it at the same time and they laughed.naitik wispered in her ears that she was looking so beautiful tday and akshara lowered her gaze.naitik kissed her cheeks and then her collerbone and then suddenly akshara agve him acut ekiss on the forhead.akshara was shocked and so was naitik.akshara din't know what had coem into her.naitik smile dat her and both hugged.akshara hid her head in naitik's chest and naitik hugged her tight pulling her closer to
him.they fell asleep soon as they had a long and tiring day!!
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hope u all liked this oneshot.
well waiting for ur comments!!
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nasco

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow tht was sooooooo cute..........do write more😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sooooo romantic😳😳😛!
haha im glad rajshekhar calld gayatri.!
Loved how naitik apologized and made up for it!
Nice oneshot!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Really awesome! i liked it a lot...hope this happens...but i really doubt...i think SR2 will also get spoiled coz of gaya3.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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yay i was the 1st one to comment........cant wait to see the real sr.............
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Posted: 16 years ago
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it was awesome as usual....good work nasco👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hayyeee.. i really really wish the same thing happens.. hehe
awesome awesome oneshot yaar.. too gooodddd
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ohhh just loved it to da core..........n da 'kabab mein haddi' was very nice........ 😆
n their sweet romance was very good.....aaaj Akshara bhi....??? wah maza aa gaya padhke.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey sweatha it was sooooooooooooo good..rlly...liked it sooooooo much..it was soooooooo romantic.......loved it...a total stress-buster for me after studying..thnks....
evn my sis read it n liked it alot....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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WOW loved the way us said kabab mein haddi. Hope this actually happen next week.

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