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shwetha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#291

Originally posted by: yusra12
lovely update....it was gud to read that naitik felt guilty.....update soon nasco...

thnx for the comment

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shwetha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#292

Originally posted by: zummi03
awesome update...naitik feels guilty for akshara's condiyion was really good...continue soon..

thnx for the comment

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shwetha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#293

Originally posted by: ArchanaSub
definetly luved it dear..........it was so surprisin tht it was aks who hugged him....datz so sweet...................update soon yar......waitin n waitin n waitin n waitin.............

thnx for reading!!

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shwetha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#294

Originally posted by: shristi sarda
part 15 is really nice......
first to comment on 15th part......
thanx for the pm..........

thnx for reading dear.
yeah ur the ifs one to comment!!

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shwetha

@LegolasGondolin

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Posted: 15 years ago

#295

well this might be record guys 4 back to back updates within 4 days??
don't forget to press the like button!!😉

naksha broke the hug and then naitik went down to take water for akshara since she had to take her medicine.he went down and was filling the jug when he heard a car pull up.he came out of the kitchen and saw rajshri, varsha ,shaurya aand vishambhar standing there dadaji was talking with them and he took blessings from rajshri and vishambhar.he realised that it was time for akshara to take medicine and he ran upstairs with the jug.
downstairs
gayatri maa told them that akshara was not well and she was having fever.gayatri got tensed but bhabhimaa told her not to worry since akshara is taking medicines and will get better in a few days.
rajshri,vaishambhar, shaurya and varsha went upstairs to meet akshara while bhabhima and gayatri retired in the kitchen to bring snacks and drinks.

naksha room.naitik gave akshara the capsule and she gulped it down with the help of water ,naitik took her tonic and was abt to take it tinto a spoon when akshara said that she don't want to take it.
naitik asked why and she said that it had an odd taste and she feels like vomiting whens he take sit.
naitik asks her to be a good girl and take the tonic and akshara after soo much persuausion from naitik took the tonic.well she tried to gulp it down and half of it went down ehr throat and she started coughing.naitik helped her while she couughed and he supported her by holding her .
all this was seen by rajshri,vishambhar ,shaurya and varsha.sharya tapped on the door and akshara also saw them.😳😳
she was really happy and she hugged rajshri.rajshri got emotional and she asked akshara if she was allright and everything.vishamabhar came and sat by her to and asked about her college.
all of them were happy.
after sometime shaurya vishamabhar,rajshri and varsha went back to their homes.
naitik was by akshara's side the whole day and akshara felt that naitik really loved her.he was soo caring and he got worried even if she sneezes or coughs.
simran was not o happy because her plan failed and it din't even help creat problems between naksha.
she was really pissed off at this and she got more angry when naitik shooed her off when she went to ask him abt some business dealings.naitik said that he was not free now as akshara is not well and he had to take care of her.he told simran that they'll discuss about it later.
simran decided to draft a new plan to seperate naksha.
she said to herself(while in college naitik belonged to her en though he considered as a frnd she had loved him soo much.she din't want to lose naitik now)

akshara kept on tosing in the bed.she was not feeling comfortable and naitik noticed this.he got up and sat up on the bed.he asekd akshaar if she was alright .akshara said that she is allright .naitik ruffled her hairs and soon akshara dozed off.naitik gave ehr a cute kiss on her forhead.he slept next to her holding her hands 😊

well i'll be posting small updates on week days from now on.
ill post bigger updates on weekends!!
my clasess have strted and i have to study!!😊

Edited by nasco - 15 years ago

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ZumSrK.

@ZumSrK.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#296

nice part..simran making another plan to seperate naksh....hope this time also her plan fails....continue soon..

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Archana

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Posted: 15 years ago

#297

dat was damn CUTE shwetha.....I really dnt understand hw cum u write such great stuff.......so simran makin plans again.....Im very sure tht she wil try her best bt nothin wil work...naitik n aksh luv 4 each other is too strong.......................