saath sath( ff) part 30posted pg 54

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Posted: 16 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: Tafseer
hey gr8 goin......ur ff are very cute n infact gr8.....i have started visualizing those.....cont da other parts soon....

ill continue soon. and continue reading it😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: prithvi_sanyo
Heyy..part 20 was relli gudd...
Yea...d names r relli nyc..

bt i think u shud focus a l'le more on d fatherhood n motherhood respectively naksh have jst experienced...hw dis is a very big responsibility 4 dem..hw naitik hu was d munna of d house loll nw has a munna of his own lolll

And probably sum mention of daddaji hu is over d top after hearing abt d onset of the third generation...

bt overall 'twas great..

Keep it up:)

(PS-desse ws jst a detailed feedbak as u hd askd 4...Hope d suggestions dnt giv u an impression dat m being cheeky)

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yeah naitik and akshara r enjoying their parenting role😊. they r accepting this and it cannot be shown in a hurry. ill gradually make them prepared.
ill mention about dadaji 😊
hey no issues abt ur feedback.im glad u told me this openely.
please provide me with detailed feedbacks for the coming parts also😛

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Fighting Spirit

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Posted: 16 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: naksh_vish
part 20 is nyc....
n name als nyc....

okkk.....keep it up...next update......

thnku for the feedback.😊next update will be put up soon.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: damn_good
this is such a fantastic job u r doing... thanks so much..... you are doing such a great job with the ff..... awesome

thnx for the compliment. im glad u liked it😊.

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ZumSrK.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#155

too good dear ..it was so cute ..cont soon..

Edited by zumra03 - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

#156

well here is part 21 for u guys!!!
well im glad some of u provided me with detailed feeedbacks. im expecting more feedbacks from u.
well here goes the update.

part 21
naitik and akshara performed the 'naamkaran' celebration for their children with the names "neev and "neha" at the end of first month in a very traditional way. All guests blessed the new borns and praised the names. They hoped to bring up the children equally talented, self respectful, self confident. dadaji was busy with soem business dealings and he culdn't turn up for the event.but he had visited akshara's house as soon as he came back and he had gifted both neev and neha with toys.he felt so hapy being with the babies.
naitik din't make a fuss about akshara staying at her house.
he missed her badly.one evening when he was at his office he got a call from bhabhi maa and she said that the kids had turned over and everyone r going to see them. naitik rushed to akshara's house to celebrate it. he was greeted by such a welcoming site.he hadn't been there when the alst time dadaji visited akshara and the babies and he was unaware of howmuch dadaji liked them. neev and neha were sitting on dadaji's laps and he was playing witht hem. he was laughing and even alowed neev to pull his ears and neha seeing her brother id the same. everyone laughed and dadaji himself was laughing. naitik hadn't seen his dadaji so happy and ll the mor he had seen dadaji all serious but tday he was seeing the other side of him.he felt proud as a father .he was gla dadaji was hapy due to neev and neha.
gayatri saw naitik coming and told him about the good news. naitik loked over to akshara who flashed a smile to him which made his heart yearn to get her alone. its 3 months since her pregnancy.he went towards neev and neha and both lokked up at him. neha put her hand forward hinting him to lift her and he did while neev searched fo his mama who was standing by.akshara knew what he meant and she lifted him up. everyone smiled seing the happy family. after some time both neev and neha exchanged places.
naitik was yearning for sleeping in akshara's arms he was getting impatient and one day asked akshara when will she be coming back and she replied that she doesn't know when bauji will allow her to leav. he got angry and said that he wuldn't call her or meet her for one day and then she will understand his desperation. akshara understood his desperation but din't have the guts to ask vishambar about it.naitik left without bidding her goodbye but she knew he wuld be back.she looked at her kids who were peacefully sleeping in the cradle and said lagta hai aapkey papa ko bahut gussa agaya hai. Dekhtey hai kab tak naraz rehtey hai." She was confident he would come back next evening. late that night she was woken up by a sound. her cellphone was ringing and it was naitik on the other hand.he apologised for being angry at her .she said she understood him and reassured him that she'll come back soon I'm craving for you..he said in low voice.akshara blushed and said goodnight and kept the phone.
after a few more weeks akshara was sent to naitik's house after all the relegious ceremonies.everyone at naitik's house was so happy and elated. naitik had decorated the house with baloons .dadaji had helped him buy soft toys. twin trolleys, cars and other baby things.
akshara was happy to go to her inlaws.she was elated to see the house decorated with baloons and toys.
everyone praised naitik and akshara's luck.
both neev and neha were sleeping when reshmi and nandini took one each and sat on the sofa.reshmi and nandini were admiring the kids for their tiny body parts and their cry, smiles in the sleep.
rashmi was saying "dada yeh dekho donon mein kitna farak hai. Ek araam sey sotey toh ek roney ki expression de raha hai."everyone smiled at their cute talks.
after everyone had left and neev and neha back in the cradle peacefully sleeping. akshara took a shower and changed into a light blue night gown. naitik came and took her into his arms.he said he missed her a lot and akshara leaned into his chest.he took her to bed and akshara sat leaning her head onto his shoulders. He lifted her face backwards and bent to kiss her lips. .she was also yearning for this and did not resist and willingly reciprocated his kiss.