My YMLH storyline: UPDATED on 07/15 - Page 3

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Really Good Job!!!U Guys Are Talented Writers.😳
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Posted: 20 years ago
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please write more fast i cant wait
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Posted: 20 years ago
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.........one day ashmit gets a severe headache. He doesn't take it seriously at first. But these headaches continue so he decides to go see the doctor.. After the tests are over the doctor tells ashmit that he will give him a call as soon as the results are in. Ashmit thanks him and leaves..

At home pooja greets him with a delicious dinner. She tells him that it has taken her the whole day to prepare it so he better have worked up an appetite. Ashmit smiles and says just the smell has made his appetite bigger. As they sit down and eat, suddenly once again ashmit gets this dizziness again. Pooja rushes to him a glass of water and asks him if he is ok. He says he is fine and that nothing will happen to him as long as she is with him.

When dinner is over pooja asks him if he can take her out. She hasn't been out for a while and she feels very depressed at home. Ashmit smiles and says whatever you say ma'am, and they head out the door. He tells pooja that he will take her to see a movie. Pooja happily says ok.

Meanwhile, Ronit is very depressed and sad at home. Dadi is always looking after him and making sure he eats and stuff but ronit doesn't even eat anymore. Dadi is very worried about him and says she know what needs to be done.

One day she goes into inder and Maya's room and tells them about ronit and his mood these days. She tells them the only solution for him is to get married again. She explains that Ronit needs a life partner who can support him through this crisis in his life and help him with the child. Maya nods and says that she will talk to some of her friends about finding Ronit a suitable wife. In her mind, she thinks that this is her chance to get the kind of bahu she always wanted.

Back to Ashmit and pooja. They go to watch some scary movie and we see pooja digging her nails into Ashmit's arm, while ashmit happily enjoys a huge bag of popcorn. Aww......

When the movie is over, Ashmit and pooja walk to the car, and ashmit looks down at his clawed on arm and then looks at pooja, and laughs. Pooja asks him what he is laughing for. ashmit just seriously looks into her eyes and asks her if she was scared during the movie to which our brave pooja replies no not at all. I am not scared of these things. Ashmit laughs again. This irritates pooja very much and she says Ashmit you have been laughing on forever will you let me in on the joke too?

Ashmit point at the marks on his arm and asks so who did this? Pasgayee Pooja! Um, Mene nahi kiya, wo wo um kya hai ke uh uh me vo uh me bas, ok ashmit aap jeetgaye, haan me toree si dargayee thi, stuttered pooja. Ashmit goes up to pooja from the back and hugs her and says, meri pyaari biwi, tum bohot dargayeethi, vo to acha that ke jo tumhare paas beta tha, tumhara bechra pati tha varna..........to this pooja gets upset and starts hitting ashmit playfully and chasing him. What a cute scene!

Now to Maya. Maya is cooking up a storm at the moment and is looking for a perfect bahu. Now that she has the chance, she wont let it slip out of her hands. She is determined to find the best and the prettiest for her only son. So at the moment she is busy in chit chat with her many friends.

In the gujral house the phone rings. It is Inder's sister calling to say that she is sending Koyna , her daughter, to stay at his house for a while. Koyna wants to go to a good college and she has figured that her choice will be St. Martins. Inder happily says sure she is more than welcome.

Meanwhile Ashmit gets call on his cell phone. It is his doctor. The doctor tells Ashmit to come quickly as the reports have come and he needs to tell Ashmit something important. Ashmit says yes doctor I will be there right away. Ashmit makes an excuse to pooja saying he has some work to finish. Pooja says ok I will wait and in the meantime make lunch.

When ashmit reaches the hospital the doctor is waiting for him. He says Ashmit here are the reports, but I am sorry to say that..........................................

~*RANI*~ thumbnail
Posted: 20 years ago
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ok sos here is the next update. hope u all enjoy! i cant take all teh credit for writing this because the idea for teh plot has been given to me by a friend named kavita. I couldnt haev done this without her help! thanks kav!
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Posted: 20 years ago
#25
thanks Rani and Kavita. great job👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
#26
plz post the next part soon plz its toooooo good!

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hey, great story. Is Ashmit ill? Wonder what the medical reports will say? Thanks Rani and Kavita.
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Posted: 20 years ago
#28
suspenseful!! keep up the good work!👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
#29
PLZ PLZ PLZ continue the story its really good
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Posted: 20 years ago
#30
please write more fast i cant wait

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