My YMLH storyline: UPDATED on 07/15

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hi guys!

I have been making up my own updates for a while. I am gonna pos them now. THey may seem a little older but they sortf of start from a little while ago and take a totally different route from the meri life now!

Thist story starts off as pooja and ronit each hear about sumitra from different peoples veiwpionts, they are sort of confused now and a little angry at eac h other

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YMLH CONTINUATION Basically pooja hears one side of the story and ashmit the other. Pooja's story is dictated by ashmit and rolls around his mothers innocence and ronit hears itthe other way as dictated by his mom and dadi that sumitra is the evil witch whodestroyed their so called izaat. Pooja slowly becomes blinded by ashmit's sorrow and pain and makes up her mind that she should stick by husband's side all the way and that whatever was done was done wrong and so she decides that before she tells this to ashmit she should talk to ronit. For the last time. Ronit and pooja meet. They dispute about the story, each one pouring out their own tale as told by their family member aka ashmit and maya. They argue so much that at one point ronit starts to wonder if this is the pooja he really loved. He can't believe that after only living with ashmit for such a short period of time and seeing what he did pooja can still trust him and defend him. Ashmit and pooja still talk. Some romantic scenes are shared between the two. Pooja cleans cabinets and is about to fall and guess who saves her. Ashmit. And he holds her in his arms for a while and they stare at each other for a long period of time. Pooja finally makes up her mind to talk to ashmit. She tells him that she understands why her hates the gujral family and what has happened to his mom. She agrees to stick by him but asks him a question first that why would he destroy ronit? It is not ronit's fault? Then ashmit asks pooja if she still loves ronit somewhere inside her. She remembers her past with ronit all those college fights their romance etc. pooja does not know what to say but looks at him and replies........................

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YMLH CONTINUATION 2

……….. "Ashmit you are part of my life now. Ronit was my past you are my future. There is no point in the past now for the future is all that I have to look for and prepare for." Ashmit is stunned. He thinks that Pooja means that they will now unite once and for all, but amidst the silence Pooja speaks again. She tells Ashmit before she makes her "akhri fesla" that she need to see Ronit again for the last time. Ashmit agrees and says Pooja, I have so much faith and trust in you that I don't even have in myself. I know that whatever you will do will be right.

Pooja leaves the house. She is very confused on what to do. She calls Ronit and tells him to meet her practically in the middle of nowhere. When Ronit gets there, Pooja tells him that she is about to make her decision and that she will have to stick with her husband no matter what happens. Whatever was done to Sumitra was wrong and for that his dad will have to suffer for his sins. But she also tells him that she is against the fact that he has to suffer because it was not his fault. She assures him that she will do her best to calm her husband down and explain to him not to destroy Ronit. Her father though, she can do nothing about.

Ronit is filled with fury now. He just does not understand why this is all happening. He tells her that fine if she wants to stick by her husband so be it, but that will now not stop him from destroying Ashmit. He tells Pooja that he felt that a woman always stuck up for her first love, and had a soft spot for that man in her heart always. He tells her his luck must have been bad because he was deceived thrice. Once by his friend, second by his family, and third by his love. Pooja tries to hold back tears for this is not what she wanted to happen. Pooja says to herself that she will always love Ronit for he made many sacrifices for her, but she cannot leave Ashmit either because he has done a lot for her too!

Both Pooja and Ronit turn their backs to each other crying silently for a while, Then slowly they part with the music of "Do Pal" in the background.

When Pooja reaches home she quickly wipes her tears and goes to Ashmit. She tells him that she will stick up for him the whole way though there are some points where she disagrees. Ashmit smiles at her and tells her that he loves her very much and if only she had realized this then they would have been even closer. Pooja turns and goes to her room. Many days of silence pass. There is not much discussion between Pooja and Ashmit

Ronit and Ashmit's battle continues, each one victorious at times and failures at others.

Pooja visits her mother-in-law occasionally to look at her face and feel her pain. She tries comforting Ashmit at times when he suddenly starts talking about this mother and then cries. At one point they even hug because Ashmit loses his control when talking about her pain. But Pooja doesn't seem to mind. But Pooja does not tell Ashmit that she is starting to love him.

One day, Sudha does not feel well and she calls Ronit for help. Ronit immediately calls Pooja who wants to put the phone down on him. She tells him not to call her ever again and that her husband will disapprove if he finds out. Ronit says why are you so scared of him? I will help you if you ever need protection! Pooja yells "BECAUSE I LOVE HIM!"

Then she puts the phone down quickly and we see Ashmit in the doorway………………

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YMLH CONTINUATION 3

…………………Ashmit seems shocked. But in a way that he wanted to hear this all this time and after hearing it he can't believe it is actually true. For a moment, Pooja and Ashmit silently stare at each other, with sparkling eyes, eager to say something, but nothing comes out of either's mouth. They each remember past memories, how Ashmit met Pooja, how he saved her, how she joined his company, how he gave her a loan, how he kept on pushing her to reach her goals, how he taught her to speak English properly, how they got married, how he respected and cared for her all this time, and how he cooked for her when she was sick. Slowly Ashmit starts walking towards Pooja, and we hear the title song of Kuch Kuch Hota Hai in the background. He tips her head toward him and asks her to say what she just said again. Pooja confesses again that yes she is truly in love with him. Her respect and admiration towards him had slowly turned into love and she never even realized. She says that she hopes that Ashmit is her husband for her next (saat janams), because that would truly mean to her that her pagwaan is happy with her. Tears swell up in Ashmit's eyes. He has nothing to say but he brings her close and hugs her so tight that she understands his answer without a need of words. They hold on to each other tightly each one with tears of joy in their eyes. Ashmit tells Pooja that he knew someday she would find a place for him in her heart but he couldn't believe that day had come so soon. He tells her that this has made him stronger than ever knowing that his love, Pooja, and his respect, Sumitra, are with him together now, and so no on can stop him from destroying the Gujral family and getting his revenge from them.

Now let's take a look back at Ronit, who is stunned when he hears what Pooja had just said, before she slammed the phone down on him. He can't believe his ears and tries to call out Pooja's name into the phone a couple of times just to make sure that she is not still there. But to his disappointment she has hung up on him and left him alone in his world full of problems, hatred, and confusion. All of a sudden his inner conscious appears in front of him and laughs. Ronit is once again confused. His inner conscious tells him to wake up and see the world from his own eyes and that if he wants to reach anywhere he needs to become selfish and that his love for Pooja should not stop him from saving his family, and destroying Ashmit. Why? His inner conscious asks. Why can Pooja fulfill her duty side by side with her husband and forget that she is hurting him, and he be held back from saving his family just because he loves her too much to hurt her? No this is not right, his inner conscious tells him. If Pooja can be selfish, you can too. Then in the end she will realize her mistake the hard way because she didn't listen to you, and she will come back to you and you will win her heart again. This will also make her realize once again how much you love her and how her soft heart was blinded by Ashmit's cunning words. Abruptly, just as it had appeared, Ronit's inner conscious disappeared into thin air, leaving Ronit too taken aback to even think. Ronit's decision is to follow his inner conscious and save his family at the cost of his love……………..

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YMLH Continuation

…………..now back to Ashmit and Pooja. Ashmit is considering himself the luckiest man. Suddenly, his cell phone rings. Ashmit picks up the phone and puts worried look on his face. He tell Pooja that he will have to leave her for an hour and will try to come back as soon as possible, and although leaving her tonight is against his wishes, he has to for this job needs to be completed. Pooja understand that this has to do with the barbaadi of the Gujral house, but lets him go because she has some things she needs to do with him out of the house for a while. As soon as Ashmit leaves the house, Pooja calls Ramu kaka and tells him to get her lots and lots of red and white flowers for today she needs to decorate their room just like it would be for their suhag raat which they never had. Ramu kaka seems a little confused but does as told. Pooja starts to decorate their room rearranging some things and adding lots and lots of flowers all over the room and puts rose petals on the bed. Then with the help of Ramu kaka she even hangs flowers all around their bed.

Ashmit calls and says that he will be home soon and that he has already eaten for he had to take some business associate to dinner. Pooja says ok.

Then Pooja lets Ramu kaka off and by herself takes rose petals and sprinkles them from the door to their bedroom. She then dresses up like a dulhan and sits on the bed with her dupatta over her head like a nay nawaylee dulhan, waiting for Ashmit to come get her. On his way home Ashmit stops by a flower shop to buy Pooja a huge bouquet of roses. Then he quickly heads home to his awaiting bride. Ashmit enters the door slowly hoping to surprise Pooja with his arrival, but to his surprise Pooja has surprised him first! Ashmit takes a long look at where the rose petals leads to and decides to follow the trail.

As he slowly opens the door, Pooja looks up straight into his eyes and then looks down again shyly. Ashmit smiles and says, Mei to tumhe surprise dene wala tha par tum to iske bhi zyada surprise mujhe dediya! Pooja still doesn't look up, but softly smiles to herself. She has decided that tonight she will dedicate to Ashmit and then tomorrow she will open her heart and calmly explain to Ashmit once again that what he is going to do will not only destroy the Gujral family, but will destroy many live and leave them miserable because by giving someone hardships, one only gets hardships in return.

Ashmit walks toward Pooja and sits down on the bed in front of her. He lifts her chin and tells her that today is the most special day for him and that the days to come will only be more rejoiceful if he has her saath and if he is kaamiyaab in his maksad of destroying the gujral house. Pooja slowly nods her head and puts on a fake smile because in her heart she still doesn't feel that Ashmit should destroy the Gujral family, but at the same time she doesn't want her husband to be upset with her. She hugs him tight and night falls slowly………………….

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Posted: 20 years ago
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👏wow

😃 i'm impressed 😃

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that so good please write more pls pls pls

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please continue and try getting ronit and pooja together
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datz gus wish i cud rite lyke dat
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Excellent~5.5 stars !!!👏

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