Drabble : Aap Koi Nahi Hain!

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"Maine pucha aap aise Kyun Chali aayin?" Aman said, in a louder tone. He was getting restless with Roshni's silence. She wasn't someone to be silent, at all, and if she is, there is some serious going on in her head. "Main aapko jawaab dene ki pabaand nahi hoon." Roshni said while looking elsewhere. (Churaofied the dialogue from my favourite YKS, don't come on me please. 😳) Aman neared her and looked in her eyes. "Main aapka Shauhar hoon." He said gaining her look. She looked into his eyes, those same brown eyes she found cute once but maybe, not anymore. "Yeah, Shauhar, Sahi kaha. Ek mahine ke liye Shauhar. Sorry, mujhe aapne bataya nahi na ki aap Shauhar hain mere. In fact, aapne toh kuch nahi bataya mujhe. I didn't know, Khaandaani log itne jhoothe hote hain. Aap koi nahi hain mere. Allah knows best, mere saamnein aaj ke Baad ye sab faltu ki harkatein mat kijiyega." Roshni said sarcastically and distanced herself from him. The things in air fell on the kitchen top. The door came back to its position and Roshni left from there leaving Aman speechless. For once, he couldn't retort her. He felt guilty. He knew he didn't mean any of those things he said to his Mom but, but he said mean things, things she didn't deserved to be said. He wished he could take those words back, but maybe, it's too late already, very late already!





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The confrontation was nice but I wanted it to be lil different, so I just wrote it. šŸ˜› Sorry to bore you guys!😳

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Posted: 5 years ago
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This was so so good! The intensity ā˜ŗļø

His guilt! ā¤ļø

Nawaab sahab hamesha khud ke pair par khulhaadi maarte hain🤣

Although I can't visualize Roshni saying Shauhar but okay šŸ˜†

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Originally posted by: Mannmohanaa

Res me first

Unres

This was so so good! The intensity ā˜ŗļø

His guilt! ā¤ļø

Nawaab sahab hamesha khud ke pair par khulhaadi maarte hain🤣

Although I can't visualize Roshni saying Shauhar but okay šŸ˜†


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Roshni never uses those heavy Urdu words I wonder why. Lucknow ka feel toh rakhna maangta😳


Thanks MahišŸ¤—

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Originally posted by: Octothorpe


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Roshni never uses those heavy Urdu words I wonder why. Lucknow ka feel toh rakhna maangta😳


Thanks MahišŸ¤—

Haina? Yeah I too feel she should mouth some Urdu words. Rosh se zyaada Urdu mujhe aati hai🤣

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Originally posted by: Mannmohanaa

Haina? Yeah I too feel she should mouth some Urdu words. Rosh se zyaada Urdu mujhe aati hai🤣


True! It's just

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Yeah roshni used nazakat type words in beginning but she is toned down now...

I love how they are keeping the Lucknow theme constant.. Like the flying car had UP number plate...

Jennifer in BP had lots of urdu n it gave her quiete a hatke feel....

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Originally posted by: zooni.blue

Yeah roshni used nazakat type words in beginning but she is toned down now...

I love how they are keeping the Lucknow theme constant.. Like the flying car had UP number plate...

Jennifer in BP had lots of urdu n it gave her quiete a hatke feel....

Jenni ( zoya )urdu in bp was šŸ‘ŒšŸ»I remember harshad character ( aditya hooda )reactions when she spoke Urdu šŸ¤¦šŸ»ā€ā™€ļøšŸ¤£šŸ¤£šŸ¤£

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The best Lucknow feel I've got so far is in the movie Jolly LLB2.

The language, the diction and the dialogues. Amazing! Specially those of Anu Kapoor. Mindblowing.

Muskurayiye aap Lucknow mein hain🤣

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Originally posted by: zooni.blue

Yeah roshni used nazakat type words in beginning but she is toned down now...

I love how they are keeping the Lucknow theme constant.. Like the flying car had UP number plate...

Jennifer in BP had lots of urdu n it gave her quiete a hatke feel....


I wish they gave Roshni more of those Urdu words considering its Lucknow. 😳



Thank you for reading😃

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Thank you for reading and appreciating😳

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