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Posted: 14 years ago
The current track is pathetic. I like their friendship scenes too....it gives me hope and in one way its good that they are focusing on the progress of their relation. Had they just blindly shown him accepting Pooja's marriage proposal after being heartbroken that would have bugged me more....but if they take things slowly like this....there is hope for Akshari still. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
LOVE COMES SOFTLY

PART 2

Akshay tried hard not to let his personal feelings affect his task of helping Ajay to get the girl of his dreams. Or rather their dreams. It wasn't easy to accept that he would always be just the friend....but he wasn't complaining. He preferred it to losing her completely. At least this way he thought, he would always be able to see her from afar and protect her.

The key to any party is to dress well, talk well and dance well. Ajay had his own style which didn't need any improving but formals was a new territory for him; Akshay could take care of that part. And he had already proven his talent as a dancer so there was no scope there either. Ajay was a rough dude...who needed a little softening. His pure heart would automatically take him the rest of the way.

At the day of the party....Manjari needed some help with the decorations of her best friends surprise birthday party. For this she called both Ajay and Akshay early that morning. She could use all the help she could get. Ajay, unlike his usual casual style, dressed in a black formal shirt, pair of ragged blue jeans and a black coat. Simple yet sophisticated - as Ajay liked to call it. As soon as Ajay entered, Manjari couldn't help but stare in his direction. Akshay came in from behind him wearing a crisp white shirt and black trousers...he immediately caught Manjari's blush and saw that she was staring dazed at Ajay's new look.

He was invisible to her, as always. He decided to ring the bell..maybe that would get her out of her daze. On the loud sound of the bell...she regained control over self, the blush quickly vanishing from her face.

Manjari - "Itni der kyun laga di aane mein??" she askd commandingly.

Ajay - "Woh actually....main....woh...."
He went blank. What would he say....that he needed time to get ready for the party. That would sound soooo.....GIRLISH.

Akshay - "Woh mujhe thoda time laga tayar hone mein...aaj bhot kaam tha aur cafe se bhi late aaya. Sorry."

Ajay passed a grateful glance towards his brother for saving him from that answer.

Manjari - "Thats strange...yeh toh usually ladkiyon ka bahana hota hai..." she chuckled.

Akshay just smiled n nudged Ajay with his elbow as if to signal him. Ajay quickly realized what his bro was indicating.

Ajay - "Aaj tum bhot khubsurat lag rahi ho"

Manjari - "Matlab baaki din buri dikhti hoon kya!

Ajay - "nahi mera woh matlab nahi tha...main bass...bol raha tha...that ur looking pretty"

She tucks a strand a strand of hair behind her ear before replying.

Manjari - "Btw...tum bhi.... formals mein acche lag rahe ho"

Ajay (smiling widely) - "Thanks"
Ajay beamed with happiness. Akshay was now standing in the corner n watching them from the distance. Ajay winked at his brother that his advice had helped. Akshay gave him a thumbs up....and started working on the decorations.

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Posted: 14 years ago
Akshay started filling up balloons while Ajay started with the wall hangings. Manjari was taking care of the ceiling portion. As she was standing on top of the stool, akshay noticed that one of the legs was shaky. Before anyone could realize it....Manjari lost her balance...just then Akshay rushed to catch her...which he did just in time.

She had closed her eyes...n held on tight to him. She slowly opened one eye to see that Akshay and held on firmly to her. For a fraction of a sec he felt like she blushed but he yelled at himself in his mind for even still hoping.
He immediately put her down gently. Ajay rushed to her and held her hands in concern.

Ajay - "Tum thik toh ho na!! Kahin chot vot toh nahi lagi...." his frantic eyes scanned her for any wounds. On finding that shes quite well, he breathed a sigh of releif and smiled at her.

They gazed in to each other eyes during which Akshay found himself fighting another pang of pain inside his gut. He wished so much that he didn't still love her but he did. He always would.
He slowly took a few steps back from them...to return to his corner.

The party was a huge success! Ammu loved all the gifts and decorations and specially thanked Akshay for the great food! He felt nice to see her so happy. It made him forget his own sorrows for just a few mins.
The music was contiuned in the background and people soon got on to the dance floor. EVeryone broke up in pairs.

Akshay - "Tum usse dance k liye kyun nahi puchte.." he suggested.

Ajay - "Patah nahi bhai...usne mana kiya toh"

Akshay - "Tum dono ek saath dance competition jeet chuke ho...woh tujhe mana kar hi nahi sakti"

Ajay slowly and nervously approached her. He held out his hand for her and politely asked

Ajay - "kya tum mere saath dance karogi"

Without saying anything she looked in to his eyes, smiled and softly placed her hand in his. This was all to familiar to Akshay. Her falling in to his arms and then walking off
with someone else. He remembered the time when the same had happened with her dance partner Rishi. This time it was even harder for him to see, coz this time her dance partner
was none other than his own brother, Ajay.


Authors note - I know you must be wondering how there are so many Ajay - Manjari moments when the story is primarily Akshari. Well I wanted it to seem realistic and wanted it to be somewhat of a continuation of the current story line...so Akshay - Manjari would progress a bit slowly. :) Kindly leave your comments and feedback and I will try to improve
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Posted: 14 years ago
@ forbiddenlove
Awesome story going on 👏 👏 👏..........
Dont worry I can wait a lot to see AKSHARI together .......take your time........😍
But it seems u didn't used the idea i gave 😉...........lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sorry but Ajay is cool.....you r making him look like a freakshow some sort of a loverboy.....:)
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Posted: 14 years ago

yaar plzzzzzz koi yeh bata de kay is show ka hero kaun hai?

kash akshay ho hero.

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Posted: 14 years ago
@ dua44 First of all WELCOME to AKSHARI CC...........dont forget to press the like button on the first page if you want to get ur name added..........
Actually there are three lead heroes of the show...........
1) AKSHAY ........who is Manjari's childhood friend andd loves her truly a lot........but didn't said that ever 😍
2) AJAY .........who is right now Manjari's new friend.....but he is falling in love with Manjari 😊
3) The new guy RANBIR who has just entered the show.......
Right now no one can say who is the main hero........lolzzz
I also wish AKSHAY is the main hero.........😍
Edited by frenz4u - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: frenz4u

@ forbiddenlove

Awesome story going on 👏 👏 👏..........
Dont worry I can wait a lot to see AKSHARI together .......take your time........😍
But it seems u didn't used the idea i gave 😉...........lol



Areh...I tried!! My computer kept crashing when I went to post a new topic 😕 This also i was able to post after half an hour of trying!! Kum se kum yeh toh aaya 😛

Btw, thanks for the compliment!! glad ur enjoying it 🤗
Edited by forbiddenlove - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Whitestallion

Sorry but Ajay is cool.....you r making him look like a freakshow some sort of a loverboy.....:)



I never said he is uncool. Nor was it my intention to depict him that way. I am just showing him a bit nervous towards impressing her which is rather common for ANY guy. Thank you for reading and commenting. And do remember that my story is an Akshay-Manjari story, so it likely that you wont like the way I write about Ajay in the coming few parts. I would like constructive criticism rather than just a insult to my characterization 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Raunaoq suits with both girls. He is lucky actor to have such a good personality with natural acting. His career seems to be bright. All the best to Raunaoq.

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