#RuSha - ONE SHOT - 'I trust you' - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: foresight

Your pree cracked me up....kya comedy chal raha tha bechari ka and Rudra and bubbles took full Maza of it.

👏🏼😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼🍿🍿🍿🍿💯

Hain na? But I feel this innocence is there in her.....😛

Rudra is always ready to take maze....😆

As we all miss bubble in the show, I brought her here....😆

Thanks for reading......🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Nichuss


ha ha ha ha ha


Bubble - Pree talk....🤣🤣


Everyone need a friend like Bubble in your life.😆

Specially for people like Preesha who is very innocent. Also, Bubble has experience na. She was passing her wisdom to Preesha 🤣

Thanks for reading. 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rudreesha

Was imagining our Abrargun and OMG it turned out to be so so so hot. Yaar, now I'm blushing and flattered with your ff, I don't know what will happen to me if such scenes happen in real life. This is beautiful, funny, cute, romantic, and HOT for sure. 💥💥

Thanks for reading 🤗

I don't want embarrass Abrar and Sargun 😆

I am glad that you liked all the emotions in the story. 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: kalyani246

wow...seriously it is necessary to survive this track..

and rudra is finally acting matured n preesha is so cute...i always wanted this in the show jo nahi hoga shayad..but you made it

its beautiful..if possible keep writting untill this track ends


I'll it for you to imagine 😆

Isn't Rudra already like that? I mean in current track he is going bonkers. 😆 He is understanding, don't we all feel that?

Preesha is cute and innocent.

I feel she is like that only.

Anyway, thanks for reading 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: girlTalks

Done..finally .

Mansi-:how you wrote this long? I had to force myself to continue reading but must say it was worth the effort 👍🏼

Rudra and preesha emotions, interactions and feelings, all perfectly written.

I loved Bubbles, she actually spoke like the best friend..loved it.

Maza aa gaya Padhke.

Too good.

Keep it coming


Yeah I know it become a bit long. When I was proof reading, I couldn't edit any line because each line has its own importance. Can't cut on on Preesha's pov nor on Rudra's lines. Bubbles was needed for comic relief.

Anyway, I am glad that you liked it in the end 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: TheRevere

Hain na? But I feel this innocence is there in her.....😛

Rudra is always ready to take maze....😆

As we all miss bubble in the show, I brought her here....😆

Thanks for reading......🤗

the innocence is there but she gets bold with Rudra....Haq se. she backs off when he returns favour but she is more open with him for sure.

He is .....and more open to her taking his maze too...he enjoys that and it is endearing to him....not just the caressing of her face but general teasing and fun she does with him and only him


It was beautiful and thanks from making me smile and laugh, needed it so much 🤗🤗🤗🤗


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Posted: 4 years ago
#17

Superb writing...I too wanna see somewhat similar to this in our show ...naive Preesha n naughty Rudra...

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: luxm6

Superb writing...I too wanna see somewhat similar to this in our show ...naive Preesha n naughty Rudra...


Thanks for reading ❤️

I am glad you liked it. 😊

Yeah we deserve it, hope to see in show 😉

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Posted: 4 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: TheRevere

Thanks for reading 🤗

I don't want embarrass Abrar and Sargun 😆

I am glad that you liked all the emotions in the story. 🤗

Embarrass, nope. I guess they'll feel proud to have such a creative fan. U r just so amazing. Plz write some more ff. ☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rudreesha

Embarrass, nope. I guess they'll feel proud to have such a creative fan. U r just so amazing. Plz write some more ff. ☺️


Thanks for your kind words. 🤗

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