SHORT STORY II : Crown Prince and his Commoner Princess:Part 21 Page15 - Page 4

Wow...

Superb update and hats off to your writing skills. Waiting for next update.

Congratulations for the thread

Thanks for such a beautiful and long update. Hope you are well.

Lovely update.

Wow what a long update😊i came across your story few days back and read all of it in one go.hope you are well now.You are magician.The way you play it words is very deft and your descriptions are very vivid.Loved the Rohan and sameer bond.Sameer has turned into a very shrewd businessman.The way he turned the deal in his favour speaks volumes about his vision.The somanis are still in shock.It will be intresting to see how they retaliate.I guess you are hinting at Rohan and preeti relationship here too.I am waiting to see how they fall for each other.And tara will never change.She is always mean to naina.I like they way sameer introduced naina to everyone.He love naina with all his heart and will always stand by her.And i loved the way you wrote the charecter of rohan.Rohan may separate from his father and become more strong person.keep playing with your words.Waiting for the next update eagerly.👏😃

Awesome update. Mr. Somani and Vishakha ko to 440 V ka jhatka laga.

Aha ! Finally I got the new thread. I must say that fantastic update. Egerly waiting for next.

Hi Ashu Di,

Originally posted by: RangnRia

Hi Ashu Di,

What an update!!!Romance,thriller,A perfect business deal ,brothers ki ghar-wapsi,Jeeja -Saali bonding,Family ties...what not!!!How did you manage?

One thing I have noticed in your other story as well as here you have kept Rohan as a positive character amongto the pack of Somani wolves...

Truly said that matching up was when Mrs Maheshwari was up against the Queen of the jungle.

Di was Parth not supposed to be in this party? Have these hyenas done something to him?

Coming back to the update..loved everything about it...The room,the description of the house,how Rohan was both confused on how to function in that house and still jealous of Preethi being so easily accepted by Sameer,the deal being snatched away right under the nose of those treacherous hyenas,cheap tactics of the so-called princess and absolute correct analysis of everyone by Sameer..One word for you - Applause.

PS:My apologies Di for questioning whether you belonged to sun-sign Gemini in my reply to your last update..Please don't mind and don't be angry on me...But kasam se I have bookmarked this story for my future husband as a ready reckoner for open communication...

Loads of love,

Ria

Thank you so much for your comments. In fact I need to go through all the comments of the previous thread. I am recovering slowly. Allergic Wheezing takes time ...so I am hopping back to my usual self. Regarding your question, ...yes I am born in June.. 😉 I have lots to write in the next chapter...intimacy is not something that is easy to write and its taking a lot of time. Every time I write I feel its a lil too crude and I re write...so yeah the next chapter might take time...but when its updated , I hope you will like it. Once again thank you for taking time and reading this story.