SHORT STORY II : Crown Prince and his Commoner Princess:Part 21 Page15 - Page 5

Originally posted by: MANSHITA

Aha ! Finally I got the new thread. I must say that fantastic update. Egerly waiting for next.

Thank you so much for reading it and commenting . I am glad you liked it. Hope you will like the upcoming one too.

Originally posted by: apoorva_j

Awesome update. Mr. Somani and Vishakha ko to 440 V ka jhatka laga.

😆. And the twist was awesome.

Yeah , for now , they have got it but one shouldn't underestimate the opponent. Will have to see what they are up to and how the young leader is going to protect his empire.

Fab chapter

Ashu Di, I can't tell you how much I loved the update😳

Originally posted by: becool97

Wow what a long update😊i came across your story few days back and read all of it in one go.hope you are well now.You are magician.The way you play it words is very deft and your descriptions are very vivid.Loved the Rohan and sameer bond.Sameer has turned into a very shrewd businessman.The way he turned the deal in his favour speaks volumes about his vision.The somanis are still in shock.It will be intresting to see how they retaliate.I guess you are hinting at Rohan and preeti relationship here too.I am waiting to see how they fall for each other.And tara will never change.She is always mean to naina.I like they way sameer introduced naina to everyone.He love naina with all his heart and will always stand by her.And i loved the way you wrote the charecter of rohan.Rohan may separate from his father and become more strong person.keep playing with your words.Waiting for the next update eagerly.👏😃

Thank you so much for reading this story and I am so happy to know you liked it. Rohan and Sameer are two sides of the same coin. Their loss is somewhat similar and you will understand why soon. Sameer has always liked this lil brother its just that he fears if this lil fellow will turn out like his dad...but now that he is grown up , he decided to let go that fear and give life a chance...I hope you will like the upcoming chapter.

Originally posted by: rituka7

Lovely

Thank so much , happy to know that you loved this update.

Originally posted by: Kkadss

Thanks for the update

Continue soon

Thank you so much , hope you will like the upcoming chapter.

Originally posted by: dimple2011

What a wonderful update !!!!! Hope you are feeling better now.

Yes feeling better. Thanks for asking. I am happy that you liked this update. and I hope you will like the upcoming one too.

Originally posted by: Janhavik

Wow...

Loved the update

Jr SJM haa...😆I loved this name for junior Sameer

Sameer ko moke fayda uthana achhi taraha ata hai😉kash thoda hame bhi janane ke mauka milta ki room me kya hua

Waiting for Tom and Jerry fighting😊

Glad you liked it and thank you so much for sharing thoughts on the same.

Originally posted by: Mariarexiline99

Superb update and hats off to your writing skills. Waiting for next update.

Glad you liked it and thank you for sharing your thoughts on the same. Hope you will like the upcoming ones.