TS: Aftermath of Sagai (ft. Poonawala) part 2 last (10 Feb..) - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
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It is amazing...pls continue...😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#12
Simply superb yaar. Ty for pm. Please continue
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Posted: 6 years ago
#13
Pehli baar Rakesh sir ka character acha lag raha hai
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Posted: 6 years ago
#14
It's just a good script
Pls also update the samina milan story .
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Posted: 6 years ago
#15
Hey nice story...would love to read further
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Posted: 6 years ago
#16
Part 2 ( last)




Rakesh: toh kya tu zindagi bhar meri beti ko intezaar hi karwayega...kyunki itna accha mauka toh tu gawa raha hai...Naina bata rahi thi ki theek thaak natak toh kar leta hai tu...aur shakal bhi teri achi hi hai...toh kyun nahi kar leta iss parstav ko svikar...aur haan puri zindagi dono humpe hi bhoj banake rahoge Kya...isliye kehta tha mein Naina se ke yeh apni zindagi mein kuch nahi kar sakta...aur dekh tunne Mujhe sahi saabit kar diya...zindagi sirf pyaar se nahi kaati jaati...mujhe dekh ghar mein sabse kam kamata hoon aur meri izzat koi nahi karta...ab isliye sab chinta chod aur maan le yeh prastav...tujhe Naina ki chinta hai...aaj mein vaada karta hoon tujhe ki jab tak tu laut ke nahi aata teri Naina meri zimmedari...

This idea and being responsible towards her daughter by Rakesh was shocking for Sameer but than he just smiled...because in last some months he had come to know of Rakesh's new and original self...he had come to know may be he is a short tampered person but unlike his mother the happiness of his children mattered to him...

After his indirect advice to Sameer Rakesh turned to go down...when Sameer back hugged him...

Sameer: Thank you papa...

Rakesh:haan Haan theak hai...jao ab...

By having hitted by the truth from Rakesh forced Sameer to think upon his decision once again...

Sameer: sahi toh kaha papa ne...Naina ab meri zimmedari hai...par mein kya kar raha hoon...mujhe Naina ki responsibility uthani chahiye par yahan mein khud chachaji par bojh bankar baitha hoon...Meine promise kiya tha ki Naina apna pehla kadam humare naye ghar mein rakhegi...aur meine khud se bhi toh vaada kiya tha ki mein Naina ka har sapna pura karounga...haan kaha tha meine naina se ki na toh mein usse aisi acting karte dekh sakta hoon aur na khud aisi acting kar sakta hoon...par Naina ko vo har khushi...maan samaan aur uske har sapne ko pura karne ke liye mujhe yeh karna hi hoga...mujhe Bombay jaana hi hoga...

And with this Sameer was determined to go to Bombay...

Sameer informed of his decision to the family members and the happiest was Naina of all...And then everyone slept with a smile in wait of a new tomorrow bringing new hopes for them...

Next day arrived and preeSamaina told the gang members about their decision...

And it was decided that the next day Sameer would go to Bombay...

At night in nirmal jyoti society...

The night was up with star shinning and a full moon scattering the lights making night more beautiful...but two souls beneath this serene view were experiencing different kind of emotions...

The two souls being one preparing themselves for a yet another exam thrown on them by their life...preparing them for yet another heartbreaking departure from each other...but what have them the strength was their upcoming beautiful future the way they dreamt of...

Naina had been laying her head on Sameer's shoulder and they were just sitting in the lights of moonlight...grasping the scent and belongingness of each other to survive for the upcoming separation...

Naina: I will miss you...

Sameer: Naina...miss toh mein bhi tumhe bohot karounga...par tum hi batayo dil se kabhi dhakan dur rahi hai bhala...toh Sameer aur Naina kaise alag ho sakte hain...mein aur tum toh kabke ek ho chuke hain...

Naina just hugged Sameer and placed her face in his warm hold...

Sameer: tumhe Mujhe promise karna hoga ki tum apna dhyan rakhogi aur tension nahi logi...

Naina: Sameer yeh promise toh tumhe mujhse karna chahiye...mere saath toh sab hai yahan par tumhare saath...tum toh wahan akele hoge...

Sameer: mein akela kahan hunga Naina...mere saath hoga na tumhara aur mere apno ka pyaar aur vishwaas...

And like this the couple talked till eternity until they realised that the morning is to be arrive and they yet again envisioned a sunrise of their life together...difference being that this sunrise marks a new beginning towards a future of togetherness...

Sameer left from Ahmedabad leaving his soul in the hands of the person he has come to worship her Chachaji...And her father...whose although hurtful words depicted care for him...

In a span of two years this man (chachaji) has become the much needed father figure for him...although no one can replace his nanu in his life...but the guidance and assurance Chachaji has provided him has encouraged him...And the things he did for saving samaina's relation...had earned him the respect of being treated equal to the God by him...

And with this Sameer moved towards his new destination to test himself...to embrace himself of the struggles in his coming life...

Like this six more months passed and now it was final exams for Samaina...(seeing Sameer Naina's love and Sameer's dedication principle allowed Sameer to skip classes and appear in exams only)

The shooting for Sameer's movie has been completed just before two month the final examination...And without wasting a single moment Sameer immediately started his journey towards his life...his city...but more of place where he belongs was the happiness to be with her...to be home...because where ever they maybe...his heart is her home and so is her heart to him...because rightfully it was their only home to reside...

Kissi ne bade shauk se pucha ki ghar kahan hai tera...
Mere dil mein bs khayal unka tha...aur hothon par naam bhi...
Kyunki aye duniya...mein rahoon kahin bhi...
Ghar mera toh humesha hoga dil unka hi...

Sameer was to surprise Naina with his early arrival but he was unaware of the surprise or you can say shock he would be in for...

As soon as train arrived at the Ahmedabad station...Sameer was the first one to get off from it...for he was eager to be at home...he took an auto from the station to Aggarwal house...

Reaching there Sameer got a shocker of his life...there was the person Sameer least expected sitting happily chatting with her...with his Naina...

Seeing her his expression changed...
One can easily depict that he was not very pleased seeing her their...

He entered the house but the two souls engrossed in talking failed to notice his presence...

Sameer faked coughed to gain the attention...

And both the ladies looked towards him...

Sameer (to Naina): yeh yahan kya kar rahi hain...

Vishakha:(yes the other lady was Vishakha) Sameer meri baat toh sun ek baar...

Sameer: Naina inse keh do ki chali jaayein yahan se...yeh inke bhai ka ghar nahi hai...jahan unki marzi chale...aur jahan se mujhe jaane ke liye kaha jaaye...

Naina goes to him and held his shoulder to calm him...

Naina: Sameer unki na sahi meri baat toh sun sakte ho na tum ek baar...plz...

Sameer:theak hai tum kehti ho isliye Sun leta hoon...(to Vishakha) aap ko jo kehna plz jaldi kahiye...

Vishakha: Sameer sabse pehle toh I am sorry...mein janti hoon ki meine jo kiya wo maafi ke laayak nahi...par phir bhi apne papa ki parwarish pe bharosa karke mein tujhse maafi maangti hoon...tune sach kaha tha ki dusri baar teri shaadi Naina se hum khushi se karenge...kyunki tab tak hum usse jaan chuke honge...yeh bachi sach mein bohot achi hai...meri hi aankhon ki shaq ki paati ke kaaran mein usse nahi pehchan payi...

Sameer: oh...ab aap ko yaad aa raha hai ki aapka ek beta hai jiske liye sirf aapki haan ya naa hi mayene rakti thi...waah mummy wah...peechle ek saal mein toh yaad nahi aayi aapko apne bete ki...kabhi janane ki koshish ki kaisa hoon mein...jab meine ghar choda toh mein kahan gaya...kya khaya...kya peeya...kahan raha...aur ab achanak aapko apne bete ki pasand ko manzoori deni yaad aa gayi...

Naina: Sameer ek baar puri baat toh sun lo unki...

Sameer: nahi Naina ab bas bohot ho gaya...yeh apne husband aur bachon ke saath chain se jeeyein na...yahan kyun aati hai baar baar...khud bhi chain se jiye...aur humein bhi chain se jeene dein...

Vishakha: haan sameer...manti hoon ki meine apna maa hone ka farz kabhi nahi nibhaya...par aisa toh nahi ki mein tujhse pyaar nahi karti...Sameer beta hai tu mera...tujhe pyaar karna toh mein chah kar bhi nahi chod sakti...aur teri fiqar har waqt hai mujhe...mein nahi janti tujhe meri baaton or vishwaas hoga ya nahi...lekin sach yahi hai ki teri sagaai ke baad se ek bhi din aisa nahi tha jab meine tujhe baat karne ke liye phone na kiya ho...mein roz phone karti thi yahan...par tere mamaji humesha koi kahana bana dete thi ki tujhe mujhse baat nahi karni...ya tu Naina se milne bahar gaya hai...par sachai ka pata toh mujhe tab laga jab meine teri iss ignorance ke kaaran yahaan aane ka faisala liya...aur phir Mujhe tere mama mami ki sachyai ka pata chala...

Flashback...

Vishakha decides to come to Ahmedabad but no one is aware about this...she comes home and the main door was open as usual so she entered inside and the conversation she heard shook the floor beneath her...

Mami: Acha hua ki Vishakha didi yaahan nahi aati...uss din sagai mein jo hua uss se vo itni dukhi hain ki yaahan aana hi nahi chahti...saal bhar hone ko aaya hai...roz phone karti hai...roz bahana banana padta hai...ab toh thak gayi hoon mein bahaane banate banate...poonam aur devang bhi ab gudiya ke saath Bombay mein shift ho gaye hain...meri maaniye toh iss se pehle ki didi yahaan aaye aur Sameer ko saari sachai pata chale ki kaise uss kammo ke tauji ki madad se kakusa ki will badlawai hai...sab kuch bech kar humein bhi Bombay chale jaana chaiye...aur rahi Sameer ki baat uss kammo ke chakkar mein wo kabhi iss ghar mein dubaara nahi aayega...Waise manana padega iske parivaar ko...Sameer ke ghar baar sab chodke uske ghar mein reh raha hai ghar jamai bankar...par phir bhi uss kammo ne choda nahi usse...

Mama: yeh yeh baat tune sahi kahi parbha...pyaar toh ekdum bole toh ekdum sacha wala karte hain yeh dono ek dusre se...aur inke pyaar ka faida ho raha hai humein...sach kahoon toh apne karobaar me nuksaan se mein bohot Preshan tha jab Vishakha ben ne phone kiya...Sameer ki zimmedari mujhe dene ke liye...aur tab mein toh mana kar deta agar tere dimaag Mein kakusa ka yeh karobaar aapne haath mein lena ki baat nahi aati...aur Dekh apne devang ko wahan Bombay Mein naukri karta hai...khud ka karobaar chodke...pata nahi kab bhagwan budhi denge iss ladke ko...

Vishakha: bhai sahab...

Both mama mami are shocked seeing Vishakha there...And then after following some legal events mama mami are thrown out of the house and business...And they move to Bombay to live with devang...

Vishakha stays there to look after business until Sameer returns...And decides to mend her mistakes and relation with Naina too...

Flashback ends...

Naina: tumhe pata hai mummyji abhi do din pehle hi yahaan aayi thi...jab unhe sab sach pata chala aur uske baad vo turant yahan aayi tumse milne...

Sameer : mujhe nahi vishwass inki baat par...poore ek saal mein inhe pata hi nahi chala ki meine ghar chod diya...yaa yun kahe ki inke pyaare bhai me mujhe ghar se nikal diya...

Naina: Sameer dekho ab bohot ho gaya...tumhe mamaji mamiji par yakeen hai par apni mummy pe nahi...tumhari humesha yahi complaint thi ki wo tumhari taraf kabhi haath nahi badati...aaj tum bhi toh wahi kar rahe ho na...

Suddenly Sameer realised the hidden meaning of her words and all the moments of Vishakha abandoning him flashed in front of him in a moment...then he saw Vishakha spreading her arms for him to embrace him...And he like a five year old child ran to her and hugged her...

Sameer: I am sorry too mummy..mujhe bhi gusse ke bajaye...aapse normally baat karke aapko bata na chahiye tha ki Naina ki kya maayene hai meri life mein...par sach kahoon toh apno ke dhoke ne tod diya tha mujhe...apne bhi mujhe nahi samjha...aur phir mere jeene ki wajah Naina ko khud se dur hota dekh dar gaya tha mein mummy dar gaya tha...And he cried like a child in his mother's embrace...

Wo kehte hai na...maa ke anchal ka sukh har sukh ke upar hota hai..

Although Sameer never shared a warm relation with her mother...but being in her embrace once he shed all his walls and let her soak all his fears in it...

Vishakha: ( caressing her hairs and said in his ears ) sh sh bs ab Chup ho ja...warna naina Kya sochegi ki kaise rotalu pati mila hai usse...

Sameer chuckled a bit at this and let go off the hug...

Vishkha:ab chalein ghar...akhir Naina ko dhumdham se waapis lene bhi toh aana hai...aur iss baar wo apne ghar mein ho grah pravesh karegi...tere nanaji ke ghar mein...jaisa unhone chaha tha Waise hi...

Meanwhile the Aggarwal family which were busy in their own works have long back joined the conversation going on,on hearing the commotion...also became happy...

Vishakha:chaliye bhaisahab ab hum chalte hain...akhir tayari bhi toh karni hai shaadi ki...phir inke exam bhi hai(I know the dates aren't matching but plz adjust with that)

Sameer:mummy(in a mischievous yet a cute baby face) mera samaan sara yahin par hai toh aisa krte hai na aap ghar jayo...mein na shaadi tak yahi reh leta hoon...aakhir sasural hai mera...shaadi ke baad mein aur Naina ek saath ghar aa jayenge...

Vishakha twist his ear and every one laughs whereas Naina blushes to deep crimson...

Sameer: ahh...mummy chodo na...dukhta hai...

Vishakha: yahin reh lunga ke bacche ab shaadi tak tu yaahn rahene ki baat toh dur...Naina se mil bhi bahi sakta...

Sameer: kya...

And like this with all teasings...nok - jhoks...chup chupke meetings...And a lot of happiness and rituals Samaina got married and lived happily ever after...

The end


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Posted: 6 years ago
#17
Wow amazing update... Bohot khooob...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#18
Finally Sameer hero ban gya ,
Ye Vishakha sirf fan fiction Mai hi sudhar Sakti hai , show Mai aisa hona impossible hai.

Rakesh aur BKD ki itni lambi conversation show Mai miljaye .


Waise Sameer ki kounsi movie aa rhi hai , "Saroj ka rishta "
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Posted: 6 years ago
#19
Amazing update dear. Ty so much for the beautiful story. Loved it
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Posted: 6 years ago
#20
Wow, atleast in your story...Mana mami got their dal place and vishakha saw their true color.
Loved it.

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