Samaina FF - The Reluctant Groom and His Accidental Bride Ch 23 pg 134 - Page 73

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: soujik27

Wow yaar very emotional. I crying reading the it. Brilliant writing dear.

Please make Sameer realize is love for her. Naina strong character was too good.

All the best for the future stories.

Souji


Thanks Souji 😊

I know it was a little too emotional... but Naina had to take a stand and stay true to herself. Just because she loves him, does not mean she has to let him have all the control or make or the decisions.. well the decision was to his to start with anyway... but she didnt have to stick around to be told again, right?

Ab dekhte hai, hero ka kya haal hota hai! Tadapna toh banta hi hai! 😆

Hope you like the next part too.

Love, May
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: SanayaK

hai...Naina chali gayi guestroom me.

Very good girl. bahut acha kiya ki Sameer ke ane ka wait nahi kiya. aur karti bhi kyon ...aur uski jali hui bate sunne ke liye!

acha bachu halwa acha laga to second serving kyon nahi li? aab raat ko bhi chahiye !

I had misty eyes when Naina cried while Vishakha was leaving. aaj se pehle kisiko mummy nahi kaha...oh my dear girl...dil laga liya hai sab se...ab kya hoga...
but i really wanted to know what was Sameer's reaction when he saw her crying...did he think she was acting? or wud he feel that she was genuinely connected to his mom and his sis.

Abhi to raat baki hai.
will we get more of the night in the next update? maybe both of them strolling into the garden or terrace due to lack of sleep. and then bumping into each other.
some awkward talk...
hmmm...waiting for the next one.


Thanks Sananya! 😊 I am happy to read that you liked Naina's decision to move into the guestroom of her own accord, while he was not around.

I have always found this element of emotion missing in the show... How Naina feels about finally calling someone Mummyji? It is a big deal, right? But, I guess just the word doesnt mean anything till the person in question also actually steps up and reciprocates that emotion. Vishakha in the show has not tried to become a mother even to Sameer, toh Naina ka toh koi scope hi nahi hai! 😭 But since I have portrayed her differently here.. Naina's emotions felt right.


Sameer toh hai hi buddhu.. lets hope he learns that better enjoy the meetha while it is still available! 😆

Hope you enjoy the way the story proceeds from here on...

Love, May
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld

Loved it !! Loved it !! Loved it !!

That yearning is what I was looking for in your story and you were on the spot . Now I cant wait for the next part. What ever I write will be less ,its that good May. its that brilliant ...I just loved it , especially the last part. I could feel that pain both felt...so beautifully articulated. Take a bow lady!! Take a bow!!

No matter how successful we are in life , when deprived of love it hurts. And when you have been given a taste of it , then its going to hurt even more...that's what happened to him and her. In a fit of anger he took a decision, she on the other hand didn't have a choice, her pride did prick...and she needed to survive too...so she basically followed what was asked to...but both didn't expect the hand of god to be placed on their head , those few days gave them the taste of affection and friendship that they have been yearning for ...to have someone as your own...

I am going to read it again...till you bless us with the next dose of your writing. Am in love with this story.

PS : Thank you for the meeta part.


Thanks Ashu 😊 I am truly overwhelmed by your warm words dear and am so happy that I was able to convey the yearning and longing now arising in their hearts successfully.

I completely agree dear, all the success and wealth gives very little joy when we are not able to share it with a beloved. Our victories are incomplete unless we see the pride reflecting in that someone special's eyes. I dont know if this is the right thought process though... maybe we should all learn to stop seeking so much validation of our beings.. but it's much harder done than said.

He decided... she accepted that decision, without any real choice. But, by moving out of his room, she has not kept it easy for him to change that decision that easily... it's no longer a matter of just extending his hand across the bed and holding hers, right? Bande ko mehnat karni padegi 😉

Aur ab Khatta-Meetha toh laga hi rahega 😆

Love, May

Edited by SixteenAgain - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Sashikala

I think Naina ko apni internship me baare mein batana chahiye usse apni self respect ke baare mein bhi sochna chahiye


Thanks Sashikala 😊

Sameer will soon find out about the internship dear. By leaving the his room in his absence without any further conversation about it, she has already chosen her self-respect.

Hope you like the next update too.

Love, May
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Dee12340

Very nice as a lalchi reader plz give update everyday v r do additcted to story like serial we want everyday I know not possible but Kya kre dil mange every day


Thank you lalchi reader for your wonderful words!🤗

I am so excited that the readers are enjoying it so much! Hope I can keep you just as connected to the story going forward too.

Love, May
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Sivasri

Lovely update...


Both are missing each other's presence...

Naina - Vishaka/Deepika bond was amazing

will Samaina go to college together??

Will they become friends and have some heart to heart conversation ???

Many questions going n mind



Thanks dear 😊

So good to read that you enjoyed the Naina - Vishaka/Deepika bonding here. It was fun for me to explore it too.

Dekhte hai Samaina ab kya kya sath sath karte hai! Should be fun to see how they learn to balance their ever changing equation from here on. 😆

Love, May

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: sumathiaishu

Hi thanks for the beautiful update dear. Sameer missing naina. Very strong naina. Loved update very much. Sorry i didn't get any pm next time please can u pm me


Hey Suma, Happy to read that you enjoyed the update 😊

Buddhu bholuram ke dil pe ka tala todna hai toh, Naina ka strong hona bahoot jaruri hai!

PM was delayed last time... will try not to repeat that next time 😳 Hope you enjoy the story going forward too!

Love, May
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: smitamaharana

wow I'm just short of words what an amazing update!! I'm damn sure u will turn out a great writer in future the way u explained all the emotions with your such detailed writing i literally cried while reading keep up with good work and update soon dear just can't wait ... well I'm new reader and by your writings u have stolen my heart😛


Aww.. Thanks Smita for your lovely words! 😊

I am so happy to see new readers reading the story so far in one go are still enjoying the flow and pace.

I hope you keep enjoying the future updates too!

Love, May

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Posted: 6 years ago
I am in love with this story! Find the emotions..talks so beautiful! The pace is just right. And the small things that you bring out gives a feel of watching a movie...hats off to your writing!
Sharing the day to day happenings at the end of the day while having chocolates was so sweet. Now Sameer is missing her presence in his room. And now he is worried whether he will be able to interact with her or not. Yesss...this is getting interesting!

Naina did absolutely correct thing by moving out of the room even before Sameer coming from office .Why should she delay when she knows this is what needs to be done. Very good..!!

And the small feeling of freedom that Naina got when she bought the toy for Deepika without thinking about Taiji or anyone else awesome!

Beautiful stroy... Waiting for the next part!
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Posted: 6 years ago
Hi May,
First of all I want to applaud for you for being so punctual. Girl take a bow. Not only you give us decent long updates(I never feel it's long enough since I crave for it), but also you reply to all the comments by all the readers.
You know, I also wait eagerly for your reply on my comment along with a new update.

Now, I want to apologize for commenting so late. I read the update on the same day you published it but I was occupied with my office.
So I read it again today and finally I'm here with my views.

Deepika is a darling angel. She is so innocent and I loved the bond she already shares with sameer and the new bond she is building with her bhabhi. It's so thoughtful and selfless of naina to buy the gift deepika likes. And as expected...now this cute little bundle of joy loves her bhabhi and bhaiya more ( not so thoughtful maheshwari ji undue credit le gaya)

Now comes the pehli rasoi part.
Thanku so much for considering my request and adding this part.
I did not understand why sameer felt conscious to take another round of meetha?
And moreover, pehle toh lia nai na tareef ki aur raat ko nai bacha toh muh bana raha hai. Itna hi accha laga tha toh dobara kha leta subah hi.
Nanaji's gift was so apt. Make naina use that hathoda on our hero's head. Then only he will get some sense and he will stop hurting our naina. The explanation she tried giving sameer when he enquired about it was so funny, seedhe seedhe bolti na ki aapke sar par maarne ke kaam aayega taki dimag par jung laga taala tut sake.

The story took a very emotional turn when vishakha , bobby and our cute deepu left for delhi. Poor naina could not even tell vishakha that she is crying so much because after her dismissal she will have to move to guest room as asked by her stubborn husband. Of course naina definitely had build a bond with her saas (she finally had someone to call mummy) and deepika and she is going to miss them but the actual reason which was killing her from inside was leaving the room and going away from sameer.

I'm so proud of naina for choosing her self respect and vacating the room without informing or waiting for him. After all he asked her to stay in guest room...then why to hear those heart braking words again. But I too cried along with her when she hugged sameer's pillow and crawled on his side of the bed. It was such an emotional moment. She was always deprived of the love she craved for...a father's love . And now even she did not get love of her husband. She can't hug her husband so she hugged his pillow instead. Little did she know that her fragrance will be noticed by her buddhu pati.

So sameer was loss at words when informed about naina shifting to guest room.
I wish nana ji would have atleast said something sternly to make sameer realise that he has himself created this mess.
Though I m happy that sameer did not like her absence. He missed her and it gave me great pleasure that he recognised her fragrance. Let him miss naina so much that he himself initiate the conversation with her.

Thank you for the update...It was very emotional but felt right. I wish in the next update sameer has a encounter with preeti and she blasts at sameer for hurting her sister so much.

Lots of love
Ruchi
Edited by Richa0305 - 6 years ago

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