The way you wrote the characters is commendable very close to the show. Very beautiful parts and the dilemma of Sameer regarding the whole wedding is beaibeaut portrayed.
Dear May , this update is so beautiful. I have read it so many times , I have no words to describe the emotions I feel while reading them . You have articulated it so beautifully and every moment seems so special. May it be the pharmacy scene or the way she came to him for help, asking to accompany her to get the napkins...and him being relieved of not seeing her on Mohan's bike was such a treat...
I loved the way he admired her while she was sleep and how her lips were raising his heartbeats. Nice transitions...slowly and steadily you are increasing the warmth in the relationship...good one...
Can we have a bike ride pleaseee...and would love to see them both on bike to college. 😳
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