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ruchi3179

@ruchi3179

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Its so cute story Ross.Very nicely written

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@SixteenAgain

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Hi Ross,

I really enjoyed this one! It has such a humourous twist to it. I couldn't stop laughing. It in fact provided bedtime story material for me ;) and my daughter loved it too.

The plot and flow both just perfect. Would love to read more from you.

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Trupti

@truptishree

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Hi Ross

See I am commenting here.

I loved your OS. It was very good for first attempt.

You told me to write. Let's see I am not that good but if I write something you will be the first one to read that. I can't write stories I write poems that too once in a while.

Once again good work and keep writing.

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Sakshi607

@Sakshi607

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Hi Ross,

Superbly hilarious OS. A very nice one for first attempt. Sameer apne hi jaal mein phas gaya. A nice dastan it is. Keep writing.

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Ross11

@Ross11

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: gugul
I had read this story in the OS contest thread and I had loved it . For a first time writer, you have done a great job! So I must say you should continue writing and keep entertaining us 😊
I can imagine what all Sameer must have gone thru... Apne pair pe khud kulhadi maarna isse kehte hain 😉

And I loved the thing that there was no misunderstanding!! Everyone was aware of things happening except Sameer. Poor boy... Naina always outsmarts him !!

Thanks for the kind words and motivation. I will try to give this OS thing a try, it is totally a different world, must say. 😃...very different from my daily update thing. 😳

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Ross11

@Ross11

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Anjali33
Ross, it was as hilarious as you
Sameer's khurafati dimag 🤣

Thanks Anjali. I do remember you have voted for this entry, so I can guess it. 😆

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Ross11

@Ross11

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Mayashika
Wow Ross, you are a writer too and then why is your Samaina story so late? 😛
This one clearly had instances of your amazing sense of humour.

Hopefully, Sameer is satisfied with the rukawat and tadap...for now. 😆

Hey Shreya, thanks!

Haha I didn't know I can write too 😆...daily update bhankasgiri and this OS are two different worlds altogether. 😆

Yeah hope Sameer learnt his lesson. 😆...but Sameer being Sameer I highly doubt it. 😆

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Ross11

@Ross11

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: appukrish
Hi Ross,

Don't usually read any of these.. since it's by you and I already know what great imagination you have I read it and loved this ajeeb dastan.

Before opening the post and seeing its by you I thought you would write a story about something wherein Naina will have a huge redemption (which the show makers are not giving), but this is a pleasant ajeeb dastaan from you .

Liked how Sameer fell in his own trap :)

Do keep writing sirji...

Thanks Appu. It was a big compliment that you just believing in my abilities gave this weird story 😆...I mean ajeen dastan a try.

Mou fulfilled my Redemption dream in her OS, that is enough for me. 😉

But maintaining your faith will be a challenge for me. 😳

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Ross11

@Ross11

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Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Chatterbox1
Awww a very cute story..your writing style is really nice..please write more, I really liked the fun element it was subtle and perfect!

Thank you so much. I will try to write more. Waise bhi I am not enjoying giving updates of TP episodes these days toh yeh bhi kar ke dekhte hain. 😃

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Ross11

@Ross11

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Posted: 7 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: asmita21180
First of all ..Pls accept my SORRY..
I did vote for this os..But laters when I had to change my top 3 votes...So I skipped this OS and gave out of the box vote to "Unplanned Date"...
So I am really sorry...I should have definitely stick with my votes...

The reason I liked the story was ...Whatever everyone say about Sameer becoming SJM ...I never see that coming...From the psychological view of Sameer and his growing years I never see him getting serious ever...He is loyal..He is trust worthy...But on the other hand he is playful...Full of life kind of a guy...He could never work like hell or never be manipulative...And there will always be some childishness to his character...Which is very much in contrast with Naina's serious ,rule follower Naina...

So when I read this OS...I felt it very much connected to the story somewhere... But this is not how we visualise typical Heroes in our story...We want some Macho guy who is powerful, fighting and everything...But our hero is just hero...And the most lovable hero...That the out of box factor I got in this story...

Sameer is Completely sameer...Naina is completely Naina...And friends are as usual supportive and trusting...Liked the whole thing in the OS...

You did write it so.well for a first timer...Pls do write some more...

Infact I also wrote a Three shot last week...Was getting bored out of no shows for 3 days...So I tried my hands on writing...

Hey Asmita,

What is this!? No need to say sorry. As participant one should have guts to see anything and end result matters not in between editings. But I am glad I got 6 votes, two in top 3 was shocking for me. I haven't expected a single vote😆

@bold...just loved it. Exactly Sam of my understanding and yours is same.

Arrey waah, you also write toh why didn't you participate in the OS Contest? Next time no excuse. 😛

I will read your work and give my review later but I can read OS types only, TS, FF padhna mujhse na ho payega. 😆