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WeRockTheWorld

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Posted: 7 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Anjali33
Thank God they had this argument.. I was really needed
Both of them are equally wrong.. Naina didn't show courage for her love n Sameer had courage but chose wrong ways

And the end.. Lol, he needs to know what all the families will demand😉

Thank you so much !! I am glad you liked it . Couples need to talk to each other abt their fear's insecurities ...if they don't then it just builds up...so talking helps.

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WeRockTheWorld

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Posted: 7 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: Chatterbox1
Thank you for this update. A conversation like this was so needed..and the way you wrote it. Brilliant! But you left us desperate for the next part..please update soon 😊

Thank you so much !! Glad you liked it !!

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WeRockTheWorld

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Posted: 7 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: Booklover94
That was a long overdue conversation...both of them were partially correct in their own point of view,but partially wrong when it comes to their relationship as a whole.so it not correct to blame either of them and support the other,which is how you've shown it perfectly in the update😃
Chalo atleast idhar toh heart to heart Mila...warna apne show ka toh pata hai-misunderstandings toh Bina baat kare hi clear hojata hai😆
Cliffhanger pe chod diya😭
Darwaze pe kaun hai ab?Chachaji,I suppose...he might have to be present for atleast part of the conversation...
Loved it,update soon😳

Thank you so much !! Glad you liked it and I have updated the final part. Do let me know your thoughts on the same.

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WeRockTheWorld

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Posted: 7 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: NikiAries
Omg you nailed the conversation!! Everything I ever wanted Sam and Naina to confront each other about has been laid out on the table. Sameer again shows a glimpse of his impulsive nature by making a rash statement about burden but I am glad it helped him address his side of the argument that Naina will never be a burden for him. Shoo and Sam's dating phase especially all the hand holds and bike ride is something I would like to delete from the soaps histrory 🥱 This conversation had such husband wife feels 😆 Have a feeling Sam has told Vishakha about Naina and now he is going to talk to Chachaji about it! I hope Naina atleast now understands what her one sided decision did to Sam. She is again not trusting him with her future decisions. I know Shoo incident was indeed distasteful but Sam can have the same trust issues with Naina's abandonment.
Awesome work!

Thank you so much !! happy that you liked ...husband and wife feels?? well then read part 5 and let me know your thoughts on it... 😆 😉

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ruchi3179

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Posted: 7 years ago

#65

You have really written what I wanted to watch in the show.maturity and convo on there deep insecurities. But in show they still are small but your story has given them matures conversation and romance part was icing on the cake.it was so well written and concluded.nice

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Shreya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#66

That was a very nice end! The tender kiss and the revelation of the fears within erased all the insecurities and they united for good...enjoyed reading! 😳

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UnknownJhalli

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Posted: 7 years ago

#67

It was so beautiful dear

Just loved it 😳

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Anjali33

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Posted: 7 years ago

#68

This was a brilliant story Ashu Di

And as always, I didn't want this to end😳

Your stories are always more practical n that's what I love about them

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ScarletNiki

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Posted: 7 years ago

#69

Ashu I am stumped, have read it three times already to soak in the emotions and conversation!!

Samaina broke all barriers mental and physical which had been holding them for past three years.

The way you have peeled layers of Naina's insecurity and it's root, kudos to you👏 How the pre and post bet Naina made all the difference to this scenerio; had the bet not happened would Naina react the same way? The serial writers neither have the brains nor the plot to show such kind of subtleties but you have always been the master of portraying emotions in your stories. A 360 degree view of how Naina has perceived herself from other's viewpoint rather than her own was painful. Sameer is the only man who ever stood by her. The line where Naina said she saw a different shades of Sameer broke my heart, especially the one with Sunaina🥱

Sameer's question repeatedly to Naina that what he really meant to her and how surprisingly she answered it with a hug was cute. They talked and let the tears flow, the only way out. How can someone sort out things magically after a big trauma is beyond me, only in ITV world😆

The intimacy touch was nicely added, some actions are more than words. Unlike Naina, Sameer has put forth his views several times but Naina was in a dark place. She needed to feel that for Sameer she was the definition of love and beauty not some like Sunaina. I am glad she didn't hold back or resist. I was right that Sameer did talk to his family about Naina. Only question is will Naina be assured that Sameer will not drag someone like Su in between next time they fight😆 just kidding, he was very clear in last part that he won't let anything come between them anymore. I loved the mature stubborn Sameer and bold opening up to reality Naina.

Thanks for giving us this story and closure!

❤️Neha

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WeRockTheWorld

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Posted: 7 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: bmk28
What a lovely piece and how beautifully the story is moving forward. Your wish to complete the confrontation between samaina has given us an interesting tale. What a great conversation it was. The show and your story combo is kind of helping me to enjoy the show even more. Wish bit of your story is picked up when they actually talk in the show!!

Thank you so much !! I am glad you liked it . I believe after something like this one cant get back with out any confrontation...its not that easy as they showed, especially when you love someone so truly.

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