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Pooja

@Samaina12

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Nice os. Why dont u mak3 it a 2 shot ..😊

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Shreya

@PehliDafaHai

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Sometimes our heart needs more time to accept what our mind already knows.

What do I say, May?! This was by far, one of your best piece of work..this actually moved me to tears.

You brought the much needed introspection of both Naina and Sameer after the proposal of friendship.

Sam accepting the friendship proposal in the show felt bizarre for a moment but here, it was simply perfect. The mention of Nanu and Nani felt right, instantly lighting up my eyes too.

The friend inside her, the Sameer he became with her, their friendship was far more precious. Naina was the only girl, only person who understood the depth behind those shayaris and his companionship with the moon and the shining stars.

This one just stole my heart! ❤️

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Isha

@mystique123

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Hmmm...what should I tell about this OS May, it is so artistically crafted⭐️

I admire your thought process for bringing out clarity to the friendship proposal and acceptance between Sameer and Naina.

It is unusual because it is humane to distance ourselves from someone who has hurt us.There is a prick in your heart whenever you think about them.So when someone breaks up with us we fall into that comfortable zone of distancing ourselves.And I always believed that with time people may outgrow the feelings and then they can be like acquaintances. But it is very rare to be back to be honest friends as there is still care and love in silence, hence platonic friendship is really tough!!!

But after reading through this beautiful piece I realized isn't it better to accept the friendship and cherish the beautiful memories of love rather than having hard feelings for a lifetime.Walking away is not the solution always. Naina was,is and always would be his best friend. She is the only one who could read him well and as the saying goes there is no breakup in friendship😊

Thank you so much for making me understand the depth of the relationship and I loved it lots 🤗

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B M RAO

@ratnarao12

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

What a beauty !!!!!!

Their feelings we're so beautifully penned down...

Closure was the right word

Excellent OS

Keep writing ...

Congratulations

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May

@SixteenAgain

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Ramy_ani
Amazing

Thanks dear 😊

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May

@SixteenAgain

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Anjali33
Fantastic OS May
I especially loved the lines in italic.. The last one just touched my heart

Thanks Anjali! Glad you liked the shayari.. that was the only bit not originally written by me in the OS
😆 but I will take credit for my choice of shayari!

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suhaaniladki

@suhaaniladki

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Unreserved on page 1

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May

@SixteenAgain

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: suhaaniladki
May this one has to be your best work so far.. . It was simply amazing... Words were flowing so effortlessly... I could relate to Naina's trauma here.. Her moral conflict... Her repent . .Her loss... Everything could be felt easily by reading the os. .Those alone moments she had was all that is needed in the show too just for the audience to know what Naina is going through... She reminiscing all those moments she had spent with him was pure nostalgia and how she was sad that she wont be able to see the changes sameer will have in coming years ... Everything was so perfect ... And Sameer's perspective was also shown so well ... And those last lines were the highlight of the os ... Reading your os gives sense to dosti track but show mei its not making any sense may be some very imp scenes are missing there

Hi Suman,

So happy that you felt like this was what was required in the show too for all us viewers to be able to connect better and understand what Naina is thinking or feeling. Her personal conflict and sense of loss has been completely over looked. Even a few lone moments of reflection or looks of longing would have made a huge difference. They could have just shown this side to the viewers and kept the rest of the storyline progressing as is in the show.

I completely agree with you that Naina's emotional turmoil not been addressed at all and hence she is coming across as very cold and as though she is no longer in love with Sameer at all.

Thanks so much for your comment dear 😊

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May

@SixteenAgain

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Princesswarrior
Firstly, thanks for the pm dear or else I would have missed this amazing OS..😆 Absolutely fantastic it was. I completely loved it, especially the shayaris.😳 The way you described their inner turmoil, their past memories and their new beginning, was awesome. I could literally imagine the two in front of me. Good, no great job! Very well written!! 👏Looking forward to read more of your works.. 😃😳
Regards
Inayat

Thanks so much Inayat! I love your name 😊

So pleased that you enjoyed this OS. I waited to make some sense of them considering reverting to just-friends status once again!

I have a link to my story index in my signature. Would love to get your feedback on those too 😳

Thanks again!

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May

@SixteenAgain

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Janani214
Amazing and Beautiful OS. The insight into both their minds on why they chose to be friends rather than strangers was amazing and this OS was so required at this stage. I have always connected more with Naina but in this OS, I felt like Sameer was talking to me and explaining how he felt. I don't have any words to explain how amazing this is.

Thanks dear 😊

I am so pleased that you were able to relate to the emotions of both the characters here. And you enjoyed it at this juncture of the show.