Samaina OS - Lets Breath Again

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@SixteenAgain

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Posted: 7 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Sameerkideewani
it was so beautiful dear
you have also given us oxygen by writing it 😛

Awww.. just a sweet compliment 😳

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May

@SixteenAgain

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990
First of all May!!
Wow! I loved this piece! And the part I loved most (well apart from Samaina getting back together), is that you referred to Sunaina as Shoe-Naina throughout! Hugs to you for that!
And I figured it out- the cold drink sharing right?
Actually, I just posted an OS on the same theme. I swear I read yours right now, but we actually thought of the same thing. Naina couldn't bear to see Shoe-Naina drinking Sam's jhootha n breaks the bottle! In my story too, she does that!
I loved how you depicted Naina's thoughts- the horror of the dream where she saw Sameer n Shoe on mandap..
Sharad's idiocity and daring! Haath pakad raha hai...n Sameer ne 10 mahine...12 din baad pakda tha...permission lene ke baad...n glad you put in the Romeo-Juliet thing...love makes you forgive n forget! Aww...loved the lines!
I loved how Sameer grew livid seeing Naina mistreated by Sharad and he felt that only he had the right to punish her. True that!
The classroom scene was epic! (BTW...I hope Sam hand't really taken Shoe to the empty classroom!)
The lines where you compare their need for each other like Oxygen for lungs was splendid and justified your title! You related aloo paranthas to their reunion!
Love you May for such a happy ending piece!
Sur

Hi Sur, thanks so much for such lovely comments dear!

Guess bilkul sahi the 😳 wo jo sahane ki takat hum mein Nahi hai toh Naina kaise dekh pati!

Both are not willing to give up their haq on each other and rightfully so. I couldn't stop laughing reading how concerned you are and hoping that Sam kahi Shoe ko empty classroom mein toh leke Nahi Gaya the na 😆 Aare humare stories mein ke Samaina aaise thode he hai!

Thanks again for all the lovely feedback 🤗