Samaina OS - Lets Breath Again

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pinalkpatel

@pinalkpatel

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

What an awesome scenario! I think this could happen in the show .. or in hope this happens ... it's all so nice and subtle! I loved the nice scene and their talk about the parathas...
thanks for writing this ! And plz write further or something else .. you are a good writer!
Pinal

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Anjali33

@Anjali33

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Fantastic OS May

Aloo paratha

The last line by Naina was ❤️ dil le lo

A reason why I like this track is that everyone is running their creative minds n giving us so many stories😃

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suhaaniladki

@suhaaniladki

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+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Thank you soo much May u wrote down this is os my request am very grateful for that... Coming to the os it was wonderful dear . I was expecting naina to empty the colddrink bottle on sameer's head 😆 atleast it would have knocked some sense in him but still floor par phekne se bhi kaam bn hi gya 😉 ..It was all so natural sameer ki frustration naina's helplessness but thankfully naina ne apne bare mei socha m happy about that ... And am glad she chose aloo ka parantha over that baigan ka bharta .. That guy seriously needs a dose from swagger maheshwari for upsetting his girl ... Once again thank you for this one

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Booklover94

@Booklover94

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

It's going to be just fine from now on😃

Thank you so much may.

I loved loved how well you portrayed their conflicting emotions...

Sameer at this point both loves and hates her,and you showed it so beautifully!😛

I don't know who he's trying to fool,he could never ever be happy or worse, indifferent to nainas suffering...

Shoe should just realise already that she's nothing more than a rebound,and not get in between samaina,the longer this goes,her heartbreak is going to increase.girls usually have a very good sense for this sort of thing,looks like shoe did not get the ''womens intuition" gene at all😕

Uggh,Sharad the champu...he's awful!naina has to give it to him properly!!our hidden tigress has to come to the forefront and blast him in front of all and sundry...

Loved the story❤️

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UnknownJhalli

@UnknownJhalli

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

it was so beautiful dear

you have also given us oxygen by writing it😛

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

First of all May!!

Wow! I loved this piece! And the part I loved most (well apart from Samaina getting back together), is that you referred to Sunaina as Shoe-Naina throughout! Hugs to you for that!

And I figured it out- the cold drink sharing right?

Actually, I just posted an OS on the same theme. I swear I read yours right now, but we actually thought of the same thing. Naina couldn't bear to see Shoe-Naina drinking Sam's jhootha n breaks the bottle! In my story too, she does that!

I loved how you depicted Naina's thoughts- the horror of the dream where she saw Sameer n Shoe on mandap..

Sharad's idiocity and daring! Haath pakad raha hai...n Sameer ne 10 mahine...12 din baad pakda tha...permission lene ke baad...n glad you put in the Romeo-Juliet thing...love makes you forgive n forget! Aww...loved the lines!

I loved how Sameer grew livid seeing Naina mistreated by Sharad and he felt that only he had the right to punish her. True that!

The classroom scene was epic! (BTW...I hope Sam hand't really taken Shoe to the empty classroom!)

The lines where you compare their need for each other like Oxygen for lungs was splendid and justified your title! You related aloo paranthas to their reunion!

Love you May for such a happy ending piece!

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May

@SixteenAgain

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: mystique123
May...this is definitely a breather for the fandom in the current depressing situation...I would rather say the best medicine😊
Argh...this Sharad is disgusting. Now the hidden tigress in her has slowly started showing its appearance. I loved how she remembered her first handhold with Sameer and the gentleman he is always asked for her permission unlike Sharad...Good going Naina for her realizations.

Sameer's frustration on seeing Naina with Sharad, Naina's restlessness on seeing Sunaina with Sameer...the anger...the confrontation and finally the outburst.The much needed convo happened...am glad May you put it down this way.

This really soothed my heart and brain❤️

Hi Isha, I am so happy that you found it soothing. I definitely needed something soothing after the anxiety of the last couple of weeks 😆

Sharad and Shoe are actually just playing the role of a catalyst in bringing Samaina' Chemistry to a whole new level. I really hope we get to see a big confrontation between these two filled by a real heart to heart!

Thanks for your lovely comment dear. I always enjoy reading them 😳